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I read the fourteen chapters in one sitting and have never laughed so muchYou have such a way with words and the comic timing of your wonderful writing is perfectI have posted your link on one of my threads and I do hope you don't mindPlease add me to your pm list as I would love to know how this story endsThank you for the laughterBrilliant
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Lovely...thanks for the PM...I love the concept...it is a little bit confusing at times but lots of fun...was imagining if Braun and Sanaya can portray these characters ..at least the non-controvertial parts😃.hopefully khushi will become more assertive and go look up anatomy 101..
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Long story short Arnav and Khushi's souls are switched (Arnav's soul in Khushi's body and Khushi's soul in Arnav's body), and they will stay this way until they completely accept each others lifestyle.

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Sorry for the delay, been really busy lately, thank-you for all the get well wishes I'm all good now Alhamdulillah :) I'm overwhelmed with the love you guys show for inverted, thank-you everyone for commenting, reading and STALKING ;) this post is dedicated to all my readers who have been really patient, thankyou :*


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Chapter 15 :part A


Arnav held the phone in his hand. "Pick up the phone Khushi Kumari Gupta… Dammit!!!" after like the 100th try he cut the call. I'll deal with you later…

He knocked on the door, his heart beating fast, his mind running, thinking ways to tell his De about Shyam's truth. How will she react???

The door opened and to his surprise it was none other then De herself.

"De…" instinctively he hugged her,he had been missing her so much and now he was scared about her reaction.

"Khushiji, are you alright" Anjali said stroking his hair, confused. "Come inside." She led him inside towards the living room.

"I need to talk to you, its really important…" Arnav began.

"Is it about the sarees? Khushiji that's okay, we know you didn't do it on purpose."

"What the…No its about…"

"Chotay? Did he yell at you again?" Anjali cut him off again.

Exasperated Arnav shrugged and then began again. "No, no De its about…"

Ting tong…

It was the door bell.

"Just a second Khushiji." Anjali said moving towards the door, leaving a highly annoyed Arnav who followed behind her.

A man came inside and give De some papers then left, Arnav was standing a few feet away. Anjali was staring at the papers and then she dropped them. Her eyes still fixed on the place where she held the paper. Scared Arnav ran to her.

"De, what was that? De are you okay… De say something." He shook her violently. Suddenly Anjali smiled, tears running down her face and hugged him.

He hugged her back, reassuringly.

"Khushiji… Khushiji I'm so happy! I can't believe it… Khushiji I'm pregnant …I'm going to be a mother"

Arnav was too shocked to respond He was happy for his De but what the hell was he supposed to do now?

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"Lakshmi-nagger" Arnav said, getting into an auto-rickshaw. He had left the super happy De without saying anything but congratulations on the happy news.

His mind was spinning again. He didn't realize when the guy dropped him off and he started walking towards the house.

I can't tell De…she was so happy… she'll be ruined… what will I say? You're husband's a pervert,he stares at me?... every guy stares… Maybe he'll back off after the Baby news… But no… he lied… he lied that he's still single… and that wasn't just staring… that was pure lust, even I could tell… made me feel like a freaking Gay man! ... This needs to be sorted… I should confront him… yeah… that's it! I'll confront him… and tell Buaji… yeah, they'll kick him out for sure… but what about De… What about the family repute…??? NO I can't tell them… it's a matter of my family…I'll sort him out myself!

He bumped into Buaji.

"Aee Sanka Devi!!!" she said shrugging him. "What are you doing here?"

he snapped out of this thought. "Wo..Amm.. I was…" he began but Buaji cut him off.

"Never mind! I was about to call you myself, come here" she dragged him into her… his bedroom, then continued.

"Shyam Babuwa asked for your hand in marriage after you left." She said smiling then continued without waiting for his reply.

"Payaliya and I have been discussing and well we think that its perfect, A guy like Shyam Babuwa is hard to find, he's nice and from Lucknow and well… he likes you, so if you say I'll talk to your Amma…"

This time Arnav could not hold it any longer. "No."

"what do you mean No, Sanka Devi?"

"I mean No.. as in I'm not going to marry Shyam" he said, then suddenly added the "ji...Shyamji".

Man I can't believe I'm saying this!!! Eww why the hell would I ever even consider marrying Shyam!!!

"Why? Whats wrong in Shyam Babuwa???" Buaji began. "Why am I even asking you, I'll just talk to your Amma."

"No!!! No Buaji you can't"

what the hell? Doesn't anyone ever take her seriously?

"Oh ho Nandkishore! Why the hell are you ranting no no NO Sanka Devi… I will not let you turn down such a proposal for no reason."

"I'm not saying no, without reason Buaji… I can't say yes to Shyam…ji's proposal."

"then spill it already Khushi, why can't you say Yes?"

"because…"

what should I say dammit, should I tell them the truth.. No that'll ruin my family name…no..No…THINK dammit!

" Because..i said yes already…yeah."

"Yes already? What are you saying Sanka Devi??? You said yes to another proposal?"

Another proposal?... oh yeah perfect. "Yeah! I said yes already to someone…so I can't accept Shyam." He finished sighing in relief. Now they can't force me.

"Haww!!!" Buaji exclaimed, then shook him.

"How could you Khushi? You didn't even bother to tell us? Who's proposal? And how could you say yes without asking the family?? What kind of a person approaches the girl directly without caring about the family."

What the… why did I had to be the Girl? I hate you Khushi Kumari Gupta, no wonder you're insane and can't shut-up!

"I…came here to tell you Buaji…" he began, helplessly.

"Who proposed Khushi? Tell me all about it." Buaji said glaring at him.

Think Dammit!!!! Think fast… who proposed…???? You're in big trouble Arnav Singh Raizada!!!

To his surprise he had said his name out loud in frustration.

Buaji gaped. "Arnav Babuwa?"

Dammit!!!!!

Before he could say something to counter, Buaji excitedly called Payal.

"Payaliya… Aee Payaliya!!!! " she yelled then smiled at Arnav and continued as Payal came running inside with a "Ji Buaji?"

"Arnav Babuwa proposed Titaliya and she said yes."

"what Khushi? You're Rakhshas boss? You said he was evil?" Payal asked confused, but Buaji cut her off.

"I knew something was up the moment she told us about her promotion… the the pay raise, the Driver...especially when he came to visit her…" she tailed off.

What the… she said I was evil??? I can see where she inherited her stupidity… It runs in her blood!!!! But… it's a good idea…yea! we can pretend to be engaged, that way Shyam will stays out of the picture and we can meet without trouble as long as I'm stuck in her body!!!! You're a genius Arnav Singh Raizada.

Arnav smiled at himself, which was obviously taken the wrong way by her family.

"Look Buaji she's smiling. " Payal laughed, "tell us all about it Khushi. How he proposed and all"

"Yeah Sanka Devi… when did he say he's bringing his family?"

"He just asked and I said yes… yeah… that's it. Umm… I don't know… he wanted me to take your consent 1st." he smiled, spicing up the story.

"I'll talk to your Amma Titialiya, take her and your Babuji's consent, than you can tell Arnav Babuwa." Buaji smiled at him, then all of a sudden hugged him, nearly choking him in the process.

"I'm so happy for you Sanka Devi, Nandkishore have been very generous on you." She said, tears brimming in her eyes.

Then just that suddenly she left him and walked out of the room, shouting things about calling his…her mother.

What is wrong with these women????

Arnav shrugged himself, sighing in relief.

That went well…

Just then his eyes met Payal's inquiring ones, he raised an eyebrow, questioningly.

"Khushi…" she began. "Did he force you in anyway to accept the proposal? You know you can tell me… I know how you always tell me about him being a Rakhshas and what do you call him? Umm yeah… Laad Governor."

What the… Khushi Kumari Gupta, you told your family? How could you?

"No..No Pa..i mean Jiji, Arnav…ji is very nice…" be began, oh yeah now counter that Khushi!

"he has changed a lot Jiji…he's really nice…loving and caring and i…I really like him…actually…I think I love him Jiji." He finished, smirking at his cleverness, which obviously was taken in his favor.

Of-course I love myself…and like it or not you do too now Miss Gupta.

Payal smiled, then hugged him. "Pagli! Love doesn't just happen because someone proposed you." She kissed his head then held his shoulders looking straight into his eyes. "I'm happy for you Khushi…But…" she tailed off.

"But what ?" he inquired.

"What about him Khushi? Does he love you?"

What the… where did that come from???? Me…Arnav Singh Raizada Loving Khushi Kumari Gupta??? Oh hell no!!! I mean she's hot and feisty… and hot… but love… okay maybe I like her… well she is hot…and cute…innocent…but…love??? Oh cmon why the hell do they always complicate things with feelings??? …What the hell am I supposed to say now… Why the hell would someone propose you if they're not interested but love…? dammit!!!! There's no such thing as love in this world… its bullshit!

"He proposed Jiji…why would he do that if he…" he tailed off.

I'm not going to lie…I don't believe in this feeling crap!

It worked perfectly well, for Payal smiled, tears tricking down her face and then hugged him again. "Stay Happy Khushi, I hope you get all the love in this world, you deserve it."

Why the hell dose she always have to emotionally blackmail me like DE?

They stayed like this for a while then Payal broke the hug. "I should go and tell Shyamji about your answer… Buaji is too busy calling Amma." She said rubbing off her tears.

Shyam…oh yeah!!! Shyam, I need to deal with him…

"No…I mean Jiji, I should talk to him myself…" he said.

"But Khushi…"

"Its okay Jiji I can handle this…I need to handle this myself."

"Okay Pagli, go he's in his room."

He smiled at Payal then walked out of his…her room.

Shyam Manoher Jah, you have some explaining to do…

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Chapter 15 part B :Scroll below


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