IPKKND FF : A Real Lady [Chapter 3]

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

i loved the start of the ff..cool...good work..continue soon..😊

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Veena

@-veena.shona-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

wowww dis sounds so interesting!!! 👍🏼

cont suppa soon n thnx for d PM 😃

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Sona

@mistyrains

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Liking the story's concept :)

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Cute beginning. For a title do you like " Taming of the Lord Governor"? 😆

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

amazing new one cant wait to read on

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

I love how u rewrite the classics with your own twist while incorporating Arnav and Khushi!

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#57

🤣

Arnav sounds like a typical rich spoilt brat, who thinks he's better than others because of his "English-speaking" skills and manners.

Man, I can't wait to see how Khushi brings him down a notch or two!

Loved it! Loved seeing how Khushi already gave him a piece of her mind (In hindi too) and managed to put someone wearing a designer suit in his place.

Great work! :)

Loved the dialogues that Khushi spoke of how "someday" she will be at Marriott as well.

I have a feeling that's a prediction of some sort? Khushi is going to be seen in the hotel in the future :)

Great first chapter! :)

As for title not too sure...

The Complete Man (Since Arnav thinks he's so perfect and all)

Social Differences

Differences of the heart

Mariot's Jalebi

Hahah these are a bit random, sorry if they don't make much sense! :)

Shall let you know if I think of any more :)

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shraddska

@shraddska

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

awww... i love it...

arnav has this charateristic trait that is just wow...

and khusi is the lioness...

loved the concept...

wonder what comes next...

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

aww..

great start..

continue real soon..

thanks for the pm..:)

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

waah khushi (assuming it to be khushi i mean who else would tell him off if it aint khushi) kya sunaya hain aapne arnav ko tussi mahan ho
so you gonna continue with this please do