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Almost the update is done...bas thoda sa baki hai by today evening pakka update milega
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nice teaser
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Originally posted by: lovely7010

Wow guys 63likes thank u sooo much. This one's for you aisha hope you like it. mat ho nazar lag jayegi phir mat bolna sar na reesh kar ...

Chapter 7: haw chapter 7 hey j muje lga third fourth hoga gussa a rha hey ek to sabse late comment kar rhi hey upar se kitni bakwas doing ...j mera style hey
rey was in the 9th heaven heaven enjoying hawww rey itna upar nahi bine pershut gir gye to hadiyo ka powder ban jayega .phir bhatkti hui atma ban jaoge nahiii his baatcutter so close to him that too lost in his eyes like he was but this special moment was broken by Swayam.swayam hamesha galat jha pey a jata hey very bad swayam esa nahi karte nahi to marr parti hey rey tuje kaat dalega i know ... He interrupted in between saying "guys kya kar rahe ho??chalna nahi hai movie's over." kya swayam unki movie to abhi start hui hey or tune end b kar diya ... love in the air lol Rey so badly cursed him for becoming the kabab mai haddi and kriya became a little embarrassed on being caught having a LLHH that too by her brother. Every one then heeded back to their houses. itni raat ko ghar hi jate hey sab company baag nahi ... to i know ghar hi gye honge but kiske ghar j bta do i mean rey ka koi brosa nahi hey na to is liye bola ...

*****Next Morning*****next morning ho gyi lekin abhi to afternoon hi hua hey tum thora agey chalti hoo kya .. chalo wpis ao ...
Its was yet another day with nothing special in it. Every one was roaming around in the college. Some were in the BB court, some in canteen, some busy in planning how to bunk lectures while some others attending the classes. But there was one person among all the students present in the college who was constantly looking towards the gate as if he was waiting for some body. are pehli baat college main day special na ho ho hi nahi sakta ... or j jo walk kar rha hey na i know rey hi hey or kon ho sakta hey ... kabhi idhar kabhi udhar rey ramp walk karna band kar ...He was continuously pacing to and fro, looking at his watch and then towards the gate. He was getting restless. He thought in his mind "kahan hai vo?! Abhi tak aayi kyu nahi??" Already he was confused due to the new feelings arising inside him and his mind and heart were fighting with each other making his situation even worse and confusing him more. His mind was saying "dude why the heck are u thinking about her so much. She's just an ordinary girl like the others and you even have such hot babes as ur girl friends then go and spend time with them instead of waiting for her.i know i know watch to dekhe ga hi muje pta hey bohat mehangi hey koi nahi mera din b ayega ... are ghar se college ane main time to lagta hey abhi wo bhoot to hey nahi jo gayab ho k pohanch jaye .. wo ordnery girl hey but asho asho k hosh ura deti hey ... right na ...time spend wo b babes k saath galti sey b mat jana arna shivam ki trha pitoge tum ...You should not be affected by her and more over waiting for a girl doesn't suit you. You are Reyansh Singhania for whom the girls wait."haye raam j thakta nahi kya j line bol bol ke try something new yaar ..main to bore ho gyi j linr sunte sunte ... But his heart was telling a complete different story. It was saying "dude waiting for her is not a wrong thing. Just because you are the hottest hunk of the college that doesn't mean u can't wait for a girl.haye rey itna hot b hona thik nahi kahi aag lag gyi to jaam bcha k bagna parega ... so chill take some cold water ...Ofcourse you can and more over she's your friend and waiting for a friend is no harm. And yes you have to accept that there is something in her something special that attracts you towards her. Her innocent yet angelic face, those big hazel beautiful eyes of her, the way her nose twiches when she gets angry, the way her rosy lips form into a big curve when she is haapy, all these things attract you. Though it has been only 3 days you actually met her but still you can't resist her charm and you yourself know you ate not interested in those irritating girl friends of yours".hahaaa ummm hmmm um iske bare main kya bolu ... 😳

While his heart and mind were fight there entered the special girl he was waiting for. She was busy with her bag adjusting her books. He called over to her. On hearing some one call "kriya" she lifted her head to see who it was. She found that it was rey. She passed him a sweet smile which made him get lost in her dreamland. It was because of his friends he was forced to come back to earth. How he wished he could just keep staring at her getting lost in her thought, to hear her voice as sweet as her but no there has to be some villian each and everytime. He couldn't talk to her until afternoon as his friends didn't even let him be free even for a second. Later in the atrium he could have a glimpse of her. She was busy with sharon, neha and the other girls who were waiting for RDX Sir to make the announcement for which he had asked everyone to assemble in the atrium. The boys found the girls standing in the other end and they walked over to them. All of them greeted each other but kriyansh exchanged only a "hi". They were confused as to how to start the conversation. They just smiled at each other and pretened to do some other work. But they constantly stealing glances at each other from the corner of their eyes. At one time they both caught each other stealing glances and then their eyes locked. After a few mins their eye lock had broken due to RDX Sir's voice who started speaking on the mike.
RDX: hello students, this announcement is to inform you all about a party. As our team Louisans have found their 12th dancer and also to give you all a break from studies I have decided to throw a party. Initially it was supposed to be this weekend but due to some important work it has been postponed to next weekend.am ummm hmmm kya bolu kya bolu main kya bolu khud read kar ley ...arey party hey mmuje b jana hey party main ...
On hearing about the party everyone hooted.
RDX: And and guys there's a dress code. Boys are supposed to wear formals and girls sarees. And the most important thing only couple entry is allowed.vese girls dress code saree kriya hot lage gi right na nd couple entery to must hey i know ...
Every one was busy thinking about the party. The girls were worrying about the dress code whereas the boys were planning how to ask the girls.
RDX: and I request the team Louisans to begin your rehearsals from today. You may all now leave.

All the louisans gathered in the rehearsal hall to begin with their practice. It was decided that kriyansh would be partners from now. They rehearsals began. With each passing day kriyansh came closer and there friendship started to grow. New feelings started arising in their hearts for each other. They had never felt like this before. Finally two weeks had passed by and it was the day before the party. All the boys had asked out their girls except rey. Even kriya was left out without a date. Rey decided that he would ask her today itself as tomorrow morning all the girls had planned to go shopping. Kriya was walking in the corridor when some one pulled her inside the fire exit. She was about to shout but stopped on realizing the touch. It was rey.idiot rey abhi tak nahii posha late lattief khi ka guess what j nam kiska hey aditi devil ka nice na i know m nice nd kriyaansh ek saath dance karte hey megical kriyaansh ho jata hey ... again fire exit my fav place ever ...do dil mil rhe hey magar chupke chupke ...
R:mujhe tumse kuch puchna hai
Kr:hmmm pucho
He bent down on his knees took out a beautiful pink rose and asked her "Will you be my date for tomorrow?" She gladly accepted the rose and said yes. He was so happy that he hugged her. She was shocked at the begining but soon responded to it and when she hugged him back he felt he was the happiest person in the world. She felt great in being in his embrace. Finally he pulled back and both of them moved out.woww pink rose hope ki red rose hota chalo koi na nd jhapi nd all ha ... not bad nice start ... go for it party main kya hone wala hey i can imagin . main devil hoo u know na ...

Finally the party day has arrived. All the girls forced the boys to come along with to shopping and the boys being left with no choice accompanied them. All the boys were helping their respective girls in choosing the saree. Kriya was confused in between 2 sarees. One was a hawwtt golden saree with backless blouse with a nice work done on it and the other one was a maroon saree with simple work. Both of them were looking good. Rey on looking at her smiled and walked to her. He said in her ears "tum par dono hi achi lagengi but in this golden one you would look stunning" She smiled at this and then chose the golden saree leaving behind the maroon one. She herself didn't understand why did she chose this saree only but all she knew is rey liked it so she had picked this. Everyone was done with their shopping and heeded back home. Kriyansh were thinking about each other all the time. hi hi main b golden hi select karti nd boya bichare emotional atyacaar hota hey unpey nd rey superb ha nice choice ..song mera pehla pehla pyaar hey j ...


ok ok ho gya comment meri kaam khatam dekh mane kitna bra comment kiya sabse bra dekha main hoo na real devil or great b ...so me going now best of luck exam i think ab to finish b ho gye honge nd see update k length long ho gyi after my comment ...by by love u

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow awesome teaser👏

update soon mannu😊
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Awesome news that ur turning this into an FF :) :) <3

And im very excited after reading teaser..update soon! :)
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very excited after reading d teaser ...
jaldi update karna... will be waiting...
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yeh comment padhne ke baad samjh nahi aa rha kya bolu tuje
lol tu bahut hi badi devil hai
ek toh time pe unres nahi karti aur jab karti hai toh bahut sweet se karti hai
loved ur commentary jo tune mere update ke beech mai ki hai
hahahahahahaha sahi kaha update ki lenght thodi bad gayi.
abhi mai chalti hu update pura likhne nahi toh sab log mereko pitenge.

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Posted: 13 years ago
chap 7
a big huggg to u
and a lots of kiss to to u muuuahhh
u hv done a fabulous job loved it
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I'm back with the update. Thanks sachi, and shenz for spamming. And there's a small change in the previous update, like i said kriya's saree in golden color I'm changing it to white and red. Enjoy the update.

Chapter 8:

It was 7pm and all the boys had gone to pick up their ladies. All of them were looking handsome. Swayam was waiting outside sharon's house. He was well dressed and was looking handsome like a perfect gentle man. Shaton slowly arrived out side. Swayam couldn't take his eyes off her. She was looking gorgeous in that perfectly fit saree. As soon as she came near him all he could utter was "beautiful". His complement and his intense gaze made sharon blush. She complimented him back saying "even u look handsome and perfect'. Both of them hoped into the car heeded towards the venue. The same case was the other couples. All the boys vicky, nilesh, bharat and amar were ogling at the girls neha, simmi, vishakha, and rinni respectively. Every one started heeding towards the venue.

Here on the other hand rey was waiting for kriya since half an hour but kriya didn't turn up. He tried calling her and every time she said "5minutes please". He was hell angry on her as he was not used to wait for a girl, it was girls who would wait for him. But somewhere deep inside his heart he didn't mind waiting for her, he felt he could hours for this girl. At last she came down, slowly descending the stairs. He was completely awestruck with her beauty. He had never seen a girl as beautiful as her. She was looking hot and elegant in that spaghetti strapped golden saree with her hair left open and straight. It smoothly fit her lining her body curves perfectly and exposing her waist. He even forgot that he was angry with her and also forgot to blink.

Kriya's Saree:


It seemed as if the time had stopped then and there. The way she carried her saree made him go even mad for her. She was continuously avoiding his gaze as he was checking her out from top to bottom. When she reached him all she could hear was him saying "stunning". She just blushed at this and lifted her lashes. Rey was looking no less than a prince charming.
Rey's attire:http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=3472881227784&set=a.2985842212113.2119983.1443774614&type=3&theater

He was looking hot and handsome with his hair spiked a bit which can make any girl go mad over him. She was lost in his eyes. Finally after a few minutes of an intense eye lock rey spoke.
Re:u look se...stunning...He was about to say sexy but changed his word to stunning.
Kr:thanks...even you look great...by the way I'm sorry I made you wait for 1/2 hour. Actually mujhe saree pehni nahi aati so it took me a while...I'm sorry.
Re: Its okay...I wouldn't mind waiting for a beautiful girl like you.
Kriya just blushed,
Re: but iski punishment toh tumhe milegi.
Kr:punishment!!??? kya??
Re:tum aaj ki puri shaam sirf mere saath spend karogi, no wasting your time with others, even with swayam.
Kr: agar aise punishment hai toh i would love to do it. As soon as she said i would "love" both of them had an eyelock. She herself didn't understand why did she say love. Again breaking their eye lock rey spoke "chale?" to which she nodded saying yes.

All through the drive both of them remained silent. Kriya was looking outside whereas rey was concentrating on driving. Both of them were waiting for the other to start a conversation but none of them spoke a word. As they were getting bored they thought of listening to the music so they switched on the MP3 player at the same time. Kriya's hand on the player's switch and rey's hand on hers. Again an eye lock with the bg tune "bahon ke darmiya" playing from the MP3 player. They were brought back to earth due to the horn of other vehicle coming from the opposite side. This brought rey back to his senses and he immediately controlled the steering preventing an accident from occurring. Again a moment of silence but this didn't last long as kriya spoke.
Kr:rey I'm getting bored kuch toh baat karo
Re:even I'm getting bored lekin kya baat karu
Kr:arrey yeh kya baat huyi vaise toh bahut batein karte rehte ho aur jab baat kar rahi hu toh kuch bhi nhi bol rahe. She said this in a go
Re:acha ab chup...tum sach mai baatcutter ho...vaise tumne yeh saree hi kyu pehni??
Kr:kyu pehni matlab mujhe achi lagi isliye.
Re:Really, par yeh saree toh maine pasand ki thi aur tumne meri pasand ki saree kyu pehni??
At this kriya didn't have any answer because she herself was thinking why did she wear this saree only she could have chosen the other one also.
Re:ab kyu chup ho answer karo.
She was confused as to what to answer and looks like her universe ji has heard her prays, they reached the venue.

Both of them got down and entered inside. They were amused by the decorations and everything. Everything was so beautiful and looked perfect. As soon as they entered there was a pool and the right corner of the gate and when u go still inside there's a garden gate leading u to the middle of the garden where the party's going on. Every one was enjoying themselves, the DJ was playing some random songs. In the extreme left corner food arrangement was made and opposite to that was the drinks corner. But there were no alcoholic drinks allowed. Finally kriyansh spotted their friends and went over to them. They greeted each other and were talking about some random things. While they were talking nilesh and vicky excused themselves. But before they could rey and swayam stopped them and asked them where they were going to which they answered they were going to the washroom. Everyone asked them "together??". The boys knew that they were lying. Some how both of them escaped from there and went to the drinks corner. While vicky distracted the waiter present over there with his bakwass nilesh mixed something in the drinks. When their work is done they left leaving behind a confused waiter. But sometime later unfortunately the bowl that they had spiked fell down and broke,

Everyone was busy in their own worlds when they heard someone speaking on the mike. It was RDX.

RDX:May I have your attention plz. I hope everyone of you are enjoying the party.
Everyone hooted.
RDX: okk just now yor favorite nicole ma'am has suggested an Idea that how about a Paper Dance competition. We'll be providing each and every couple a paper and all you have to do is to dance on it and each time the music will be stopped the paper will be folded.
Every one again cheered.
RDX:but but but there's a twist. Every one became silent. RDX continued "the twist is that instead the boys asking the girls for a dance the girls should ask".
All the girls were dumbstruck, how were they supposed to ask and all the boys were smirking. every girl was planning how to do it. Finally Every one got their ideas. (I'll be telling about only krisha.)
Both kriya and sharon got down on their knees infront of their partners.
*****Swaron*****
Sh: swayam every time its you who asks me for every thing, be dance or any other thing its you who takes the initiative. So today just for once I'm asking Can i have this dance with you?? A broad 32 inch smile was present on swayam's face and he gladly accepted her proposal and made her stand. Both of them went towards the dance floor.
~~~~~Kriyansh~~~~~~
Kr:umm rey maine jab bhi aapke saath dance kiya it felt wonderful. You are a perfect dance partner for a give. Will you please give me this opportunity to dance with you?
Re:ummm sochta hu
Kriya's mouth fell open. She whinned "reyyy"
Re: arrey im just joking I would love to dance with you.
Saying this he pulled her up. All the couples who were participating moved towards the dance floor. The paper was ready and everyone took their position. And the music began. It was khuda jaane playing.
link to the song:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OGK-iuh5JE4

Since I'm very bad at describing dance I'll be describing their feelings and eye talk.

Aaa aa'.

(Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua)-2

Kriya and rey both of them get on the paper. Rey puts his hand on her waist which makes her shiver. He slowly pulls her towards him. They both are lost in each others eyes.

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda


Rey then twirls her around as the paper is sufficient enough to twirl her. While turning her he makes sure he pulls her more towards him self so that no space is left between them. Their eyes are talking to each other. The music continues but the participants are asked to stop and fold the paper.

Tu kahe to tere hi kadam ke
main nishanon pe
Chalun rukun ishaare pe
Tu kahe tho khwabon ka bana ke
Main bahana sa
Mila karu sirhaane pe

The paper has been folded exactly in the middle now the size of the paper became small when compared to before. Rey hoped on the paper and gave kriya his hand. Both of them started swaying to the music again. While these lyrics were going on kriya was conveying her feelings on these line to him through her eyes. Her eyes told him that she trusts him so much that she could do anything for him as she knows he would never let any thing happen to her.

Ohhh
Tum se dil ki baatein seekhi
Tum se hi yeh raahe seekhi
Tum pe marr ke mein tho
Jjee gaya

Now rey's eyes spoke. He thanked her for bringing a change in him. After his best friends she was the only person with whom he could share all his problems. She's very special to him.

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Again he twirled her and brought her more closer, such close that there was only a few inches gap between their lips. Again the paper was folded but sufficient enough for both of them to stand.

Dil kahe ke aaj tho, chupa lo tum
panahon mein
Ke darr hai tum ko kho doonga
Dil kahe ki sambhal zara khushi ko
Na nazar laga
Ke darr hai mein tho ro dunga

Again rey's heart which spoke through his eyes. He never ever can imagine in his wild dreams his life with out her. Some where deep inside he is scared he might lose her and he doesn't wants her happiness to be lost because indirectly his heart will pain.

Hooo
Karthi hoon sao vaade tum se
Bandhe dil ke dhaage tum se
Yeh tumhe na jane kya hua

It was as if kriya's heart listened to his heart. her heart replied that she would never leave him as he has become an important part of her life. She promises to be by his side every time.

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

They were just swaying to the music so lost in each others eyes. Now again the paper was folded and this time it became very small. Rey stood on the paper and asked kriya to remove her heels and then he pulled her onto his feet.

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Their heart and eyes spoke millions of thing that their mouth refused to speak. This was one of their best moments in life. They were confused about their feelings what they felt for each other.

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Both of them kept swaying to the music not caring about the world. The music ended but not their eye lock. They were brought back to the world by the audience's applause. It was then they realized they had won the competition.

They moved away from each other. Every one appreciated them and then again the DJ started playin music and everyone was on the dance floor. Kriyansh excused them selves and came down towards the gang. All of them were looking at them suspiciously.
Kriyansh: kya hua guys aise kyu dekh rahe ho??
Gang: tum dono ke beech kya chal raha hai??
Kriyansh: matlab??
Vicky: matlab yeh ki jis tarah tum dono dance kar rahe the tumhe dekh kar aisa nahi lag raha tha ki tum dono sirf ache dost ho...toh sach sach batao kab bane tum log couple..
Kriyansh: couple!!!!!!!!!
Kriya: nahi guys aisa kuch nahi hai vo toh bas hum log sirf dance kar rahe the.
Gang: acha!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kriyansh were feeling a bit uncomfortable there and on seeing their faces the gang burst into laughter. later every one was enjoying the party and kriya excused herself from there.
Sh:kya huya kahan jaa rahi ho?
Kr: vo apni saree thodi adjust karne. I'll be back in a minute.
Sh:ohh kk

Rey saw kriya going some where so he followed her. He saw her going inside the washroom so decided to stay out and wait for her. After a while kriya came out and saw rey was waiting for her.
kr:arrey rey aap yahan...mai bas aa rhi thi.
Re:mujhe tumse baat karni thi isliye wait kar raha tha tumhare liye.
Kr:okkk
They were talking about some random things and were walking beside the pool. Kriya's leg slipped and she was about to fall in the pool but rey caught her on time. His hands are on her waist and her hands had clutched his coat tightly and her eyes were closed. Her hair was flying. He was lost in her beauty. Slowly she opened her eyes and got lost in his. Kriya's hair was disturbing their eye lock. Rey with his free hand Pinned them behind her ears. They were still in the same position. Kriya was the first to realize and she tried making herself free. On seeing kriya move rey saw that he was still catching her, so he helped her in standing straight. Both of them joined back the party and enjoyed themselves. Finally the party was over it was around 12 in the night. Every one went back with the same person the came.

So hows it??Its long i know. So i want long comments from all of you and hit the like button also. For pms buddy me :)
Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update

Love Kriya saree

Rey doesn't know he loves her

So does Kriya

Waiting for the next update

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