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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nimra21

"Arnav Singh Raizada could feel something...different...in the air and all of a sudden too - it was'sweeter, fresher, more hopeful...and it reminded him of a past he repressed everyday, more often than not with a peg of single malt whiskey - a peg or two or four."


I love these lines. Both of them are so physically aware of each other. I could imagine the wind blowing as Arnav looked around trying to figure our what caused the change in the air. :)

Oh, loving your Akash. He understands tha pain of both Arnav and Khushi, wants them to solve things between them yet he won't force anyone. I really do want them to explore the Akash-Khushi relationship in the show. Seeing a glimpse of it in this update made me really happy! :)

Undoubtedly, the Nisha-Sharman interaction was the highlight of the update. The underlying pain and anguish could be easily felt. Tugged at my heartstrings. Great writing! :)



Thank You so much! :)

Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: curledup

Hello! *waves* apologies for my extremely late comment, none of my grammar seems to make sense to me anymore. I dont know why? Meri grammar ki ab chuti. A really bad chuti! now coming to the actual update here goes!

Oh.my.god! So Akash does not like Payal anymore? *gasp* why? Because she seperated him from his family? Geez! So he can finally see what people are? Thank f**king god! Sorry lately he has been pissing me off in the show! but that shall be discussed a later date! Right now though I am so glad he is actually giving some sort of active advise to KHushi now I hope she takes it on.


When did I say he doesnt like Payal anymore or holds the separation from the family against her...he is unhappy that she is forcing Khushi to be in Delhi but that doesnt mean he doesnt love her anymore. Its a point of disagreement between the couple but its not affecting their relationship or their marriage.

Im sorry to say but Nisha and Sharman quite literally stole the stage here today! Both so incomplete without the other but refuse and deny to give in, and we get an insight of their lives, we get a touch of both sides, the pain the anguish! I love it.

*Bows*

And now she gave in? Is it him though? Is it actually Sharman?

Yep, its Sharman.

Dont you think the story is enough complicated without her kissing someone else? Lol! 😆

I dont undetstand why there weren't many likes or comments but this chapter was so right, it finally gave a platform for the rest of the characters! So perfect.

So right!

Dont ask me. And also dont remind me. :/

You have done an amazing job Rae, kept the pace perfectly I love it <3 beautiful

*Bows*

-Aashifa


Thank You! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

Rae! *waves* Remember me? I know I'm late but you know the reason right? :P

I missed YNTOO so much!
And finally I read it.
The update was fantastic.
Nisha! *sigh* I hope something good happens with her in Mumbai.
And Khushi *sigh* *sigh* I don't know if something good can happen with her ever.
Yes Khushi's greetings are so cheerful & welcoming, I agree with Aakash. And hey Aakash I love your wife for calling khushi to Delhi! :P
Arnav *sigh* tum aise kyun ho?
Awww Nisha armaan will forgive you some day, give him sometime. But Rae one thing I wanted to tell you was that you're writing about every character perfectly. From Armaan to Arnav everyone has that characterstic feature in them which they had in their shows. And that's why you're an amazing writer..aren't you? 😉

That means a lot to me because that is one of my biggest concerns when writing Fanfics which arent AU...the characters have to be right or else I cant write! So I am glad you think so. :)

Sharman? OMG! Woh yahan kaise? Wow! Finally both the couples are with each other. Nice!
OMG! Aakash I love You! yes khushi go & talk to Arnav. Go! Go! Go! That idiot won't come to you to apologise..he's such a..whatever! 😡
But Rae I feel really sad for Arhi :( NiSh met twice yeah TWICE & Arhi haven't met yet! Not Fair! *whines*

Well...lets see...

And life isnt fair...Arnav, Nisha, Sharman and Khushi would agree.

NiSh convo was good & I felt a bit sad for them too. I don't know when we'll get to know their past properly.

Next chapter NiSh story is unveiled.

Yay! They kiss. Finally! Now Nisha go & break your engagement with arnav..okay? But I know the evil writer of this fic has something else in mind (since she's so unpredictable) :P Just kidding! I know you'll write everything perfectly!
Continue Soon! 🤗

P.S.- Whenever I ask you if Arnav is falling for Nisha you whistle, just answer my question & stop whistling. And if Arnav falls for her then I'm gonna kill you Rae! Remember that! 😈

Hmmm...I shall have to take the risk then if the story decides to move that way... *whistles*

P.P.S.- Noticed my siggie? Yeah holi scene ko maine apna siggy bana liya. Now it'll be a lot easier to bribe you 😈 Muhahaha! The things I do for you Rae *sigh*

Lol!

P.P.P.S.- Now I'm waiting for another update *innocent eyes* :P


Thank You! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

ahh! that explains it! 😆 ahahahahha! your right about the complication bit!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: flutterby

the best thing abt this chp was the akash- khushi bond... i loved how akash in a soft yet firm tone asked khushi to TALK, SPEAK to arnav... clear all their misunderstandings... akash knew that arnav wudnt do it due to his ego.. Inflated Egoso he did the next best thing.. by asking khushi to sort out all her thoughts, feelings... 👏 this para...
But he heard it all anyway - treating her like the sister he had been forced to part with following the circumstances and he held Khushi's small hand in his own reassuring big calloused one and looking deep in the hazel orbs, so uneasily aged,
is so descriptive of the platonic relationship shared by both khushi and akash... ⭐️ coming to nisha... i loved how u described her pain... sitting alone at the bar... almost commanding everyone to look past al lthe skin show, the beauty, curves and see the ugliness... 👏 and their convo... they finally said what they both wanted to say for almost 3 yrs... however i liked the ending.. 😈 u know why... 😛


Are you sure its Arnav's ego at work or his helplessness? Think about it.

He is a tortured man and tortured people seldom have ego issues with the person they know and realize they have hurt...and Arnav feels guilty about Khushi...then how can there be an ego issue

Thank You though! :)

Glad you liked it.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Scrap padhte hi I'm here!
Sorry Rae can't help it.

AngelTeen thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

Scrap padhte hi I'm here!

Sorry Rae can't help it.


This Arnav has me blushing and swooning SO MUCH! Aaa! <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
Acha?
Then what about this?

AngelTeen thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...

Acha?

Then what about this?


Ahem.

Adult stuff. You dont wanna know. ;) :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
Erm.. I've learnt that, when I see Arnav gifs on one of Rae's FFs, it is update time! :D

So, Raeji.. Update? :P

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