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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: insanelycrazy

res! :D


aaah the broken arnav! he just doesn't know who to feel bad for, himself who lost everything in his life or Nisha, who lost just as equally. At least something was going right in his life - he could still scare off people its like arnav's living in a shadow of who he use2 be, wishing to be that person just so he could get away with the pain :'( 😭

And thats what I wrote in Chapter 2. Arnav is stuck between ASR and Arnav and is doing a shoddy job at being either.

i loved wat u did with the diner table seat there. one a head and arnav like the rubber stamp, he's the head just for the name of it, even though nani makes her decisions, and arnav kind of succumbs because of the love he feels for his mom. gosh! its gonna destroy everybodies life!! :'( first i thought arnav is doing all this cus Nani is sick and she might die, but now i think she's sick and any big blow will kill her.

How is that different? Lol!

i don't get y mami hates Nisha? she hated khushi plus Nisha is just the kind she likes, gorgeous, rich, well known family AND her wardrobe! hmm.. there's more to this too!! aaahh!! or is theree?!! 😉

Yep, there is. I am surprised you guys havent caught on yet. There have been ample hints at why Maami may be pissed at Nisha...

I have a Nisha theory!! okay so what i think is that she was dissapointed in him or something? all the things he promised to be with her and, he couldn't he either got caught up with his work and started ignoring her OR maybe something with the mother. Nisha and mom didn't get along, he trusted his mother, broke her trust and then SHE left him? 😕 Or they were fighting, he got drunk and accidently cheated, and she was all crushed, and she had trust issues and that's y she cut out armaan also?! yes yes i know i got it all wrong :'( :P i feel so sorry for nisha and arnav though! they have problems and they know the other person has it to, but they just have NO way to understand each other, because that place has been taken by other people in their lives'.. aaah!! its like all twisted. but i like their new found friendship. it will give them some solace.

Nice theories. Lets see what happens. :)

AND KHUSHI'S COMING!! yayyiee.. i hope they meet, and arnav just hugs her and tells her what she thinks is all wrong and nothing like what she believes it to be! they don't have 2 get back abhi, but i don't want khushi to be all broken and lifeless, gosh i feel for her.

Hmmm...

i know i've already told u this, but again, i love the different layers to each character, they've got sooo many sides to them! today when Nisha was all broken she still thought of calling sharman, and arnav being this head strong guy who always wants to be in control, lost control of his life and is leading his life on the whims of his grand mother, and is desperately wanting somebody to take him out of his hell hole but he has no idea who's gonna do it and how they're all stuck in this situation and they wanna get out, but either its their own stubbornness or their families or something which is stopping them and they're all helpless in the situation they created long back, but are stuck in it now.😒 the story is beautifully writen and thought and all those things! i seriously love this thing and a big hug to you for writing something sooo amazing!!🤗

Awww! Thank You so much! :)

You got the essence of the story pretty well. :)

p.s. ohh sorry i forgot to add the PMaccount! first i got lazy and i was like naww, i'll do it later, and den i compltely forgot! 😳 and thank you btw. :)


Thank You! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

i got it!! yes yes i got it!! *FIST PUMPS THE AIR!*(007 moment 😎 )

mami hates Nisha, cus akash and payal aren't too happy with the wedding, and they are protesting so they left the house, which got mami all sad because her son isn't in the house (i'm still assuming she doesn't care about payaliya) any more, so she hates Nisha because indirectly she's responsible for akash leaving the house?!! right ?

and aww you're too sweet, my theories were literally crap! :P but thank you non the less, and you're welcome!

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p.s. the difference is, first it was an ailment or disease which would kill her soon enough, so he's trying to keep her happy for watever thoda time. something, and the second is she's critical, and any dhamaka would kill her. basically its kind of the same but still. a lil different, but i'm crap at explaining :P :D😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: insanelycrazy


i got it!! yes yes i got it!! *FIST PUMPS THE AIR!*(007 moment 😎 )

mami hates Nisha, cus akash and payal aren't too happy with the wedding, and they are protesting so they left the house, which got mami all sad because her son isn't in the house (i'm still assuming she doesn't care about payaliya) any more, so she hates Nisha because indirectly she's responsible for akash leaving the house?!! right ?

and aww you're too sweet, my theories were literally crap! :P but thank you non the less, and you're welcome!

edited**

p.s. the difference is, first it was an ailment or disease which would kill her soon enough, so he's trying to keep her happy for watever thoda time. something, and the second is she's critical, and any dhamaka would kill her. basically its kind of the same but still. a lil different, but i'm crap at explaining :P :D😆


About the edit first - what have you learnt from R&T? Besides, Nisha's Poppi is already sick.

And about Maami - yep, right to a large extent...finally! Lol!
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Posted: 13 years ago
lol, i feel all accomplished now *pats her back*

and i don't know wat you're talking about regarding R&T. i forgot wat i said (that happens alot)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: insanelycrazy

lol, i feel all accomplished now *pats her back*


and i don't know wat you're talking about regarding R&T. i forgot wat i said (that happens alot)


Nani being sick would be predictable besides Nisha's Poppi is already not well. :p
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh, that was absolutely, absolutely, totally beautiful!

I think the start and the end of it was so dynamic, and so amazing that I actually let out a sigh, put a hand to my chest and tried containing my emotions. Yeah I had a total girly, girl moment.

Anyway, getting to the update,

This line really got to me:

I got f**king engaged, Nisha, and you, my best friend, wasn't there?!


I swear, I would be so upset, so angry, so everything if my best friend is not there for my engagement. Family is definitely needed at events like these, but it's friends that make it so much more, so much...more memorable, fun, amazing, special.
Especially best friends, because they know you so well, sometimes they know you better than you think you know yourself, and if they aren't there at such an event, it can feel like something important is missing.
And no doubt, for Arnav, he would have felt that. To have his "twin" not there...it would be heartbreaking!


Sharman and Nisha intrigue me. In fact your last reply to my comment about how it could be Nisha's lack of stubbornness that got her where she is...could it be that the fact that she wasn't stubborn enough to resist Sharman's proposal? I wonder what it is...but I am excited for you to unveil everything slowly :)

The last line was beautiful!

Every romantic movie she had seen had just been proved wrong.

Omg dude, that is...I don't know small lines and words like these really manage to create a feel, deliver something that thousands of words cannot.
And for me, this line said it all.
Khushi, a girl who lived in her fantasies, dreamt like almost all girls do, believed that there was that one person out there for her - it all came tumbling down, it all shattered.
And considering that you know, I've grown up watching all these movies, reading fairytales, books, romances, everything, you do end up slightly, if not totally, believing that there might be someone out there, there might be some sort of a special romance out there - and to have that hope, dream, belief taken away can be crushing.

I really felt for Khushi and Armaan in this update.
I like how you did the whole "precise and neat" of Nisha and compared it with her being a neurosurgeon. It added a nice effect.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading this part :)

~K
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Posted: 13 years ago
For part 15:


Once again a great part! Loving how the past behind Nisha is slowly unravelling.
But if Sharman and Nisha claimed to love each other so much what happened that had the separated?

One thing that I absolutely loved was this:

But he was Arnav Singh Raizada, he didn't say these things and she wasn't Khushi Kumari Gupta who would pry to get them out.



And she was Nisha Francia Oberoi, she didn't understand his silence because he wasn't Sharman Singhania.


It really highlighted how it was all such a mis-match. Nisha was not Khushi and Arnav was not Sharman. Beautifully written! :)

~K

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Posted: 13 years ago
That was amazing! I so feel awful for Nisha , she was forced or literally blackmailed into all this, wasn't she?

But he was Arnav Singh Raizada, he didn't say these things and she wasn't Khushi Kumari Gupta who would pry to get them out.



And she was Nisha Francia Oberoi, she didn't understand his silence because he wasn't Sharman Singhania.

These lines were so heartbreaking but perfect. Arnav and Nisha have struck a chord and maybe a new friendship will soon blossom. But Arnav was, is and will always be made for Khushi just like Nisha for sharman:)

Thank you for the pm honey! Lovely update!

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Posted: 13 years ago
So Nisha's dad kinda reminds me of Charlie Sheen. Like he was a mess when it came to his personal life but he had no regrets about it, which ended up scarring Nisha emotionally. I feel so bad for her. Reading about her grandmother's emotional blackmail was tough because I just kept hoping she would fight it but I know she didn't. At least Arnav and Nisha aren't fighting. But then again that doesn't make me happy either because I like NiSh and Arhi together. So Khushi is coming (yay!) but I don't see any happy moments in the near future (storyline still too angsty). Maybe we can still get an Arhi meeting? And Nisha is going to Mumbai so maybe we can get a NiSh meeting? Also, I know it was 3 years of cutting someone off but please make Armaan and Nisha friends again! I feel like she needs a third party person to turn to. Super duper great update!

P.S. Speaking of MJ, CUS THIS IS THRILLER!!




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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Rae, nice update once again but it seems another mystery is added to the existing one! Alessandro had a part in ruining his daughters life?
I loved the efforts being made by both Arnav and Nisha in trying to accept the fate and being friendly to start with. Good move,helps ease the tension.
And yayy Khushi is heading to Delhi so can we expect an ArHi encounter at last?
The summary helped clear few doubts which I had so thanx for that...can't wait for the next update!!

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