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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Meera
Way back into the love, wow,

The whole chapter is so peaceful and smoothing.

Both r in Better place, and as a reader I am loving it.

Loved it to the core.

Thank u so much dear. Thank u.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you for another beautiful story. I have loved every single one of your stories. You are an awesome writer.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Meera,
I have read all chapters and glad to be able to read this wonderful story.
Thanks for giving me access to your blog.
Even though I prefer to have it available 24/7 to read whenever I want, I will respect your decision of taking it off the blog for few months.
But, please drop us a line, whenever you make it re available for us to read.
Cheers...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Meera
Read the epilogue,
Beautiful is the word for it.
As I said earlier, they r at peace, and that will have an effect on me.
Thank u
All the best
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Posted: 9 years ago
I have enjoyed this story very much and hope that you will come back with another Arhi story. I will send you and buddy request and a PM, in the hope to be informed, should you decide to write anything new. Thank you for your writting. Cheers.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Meera

Oh, so khushi is dress to kill.
Eagerly waiting for Arnav's reaction for the double surprise.
And about her nightmare , hopefully she will find peace.
Loved it.
Thank u.
Wish ur nephew on my behalf.
Thank u Meera for this wonderful story.
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Posted: 9 years ago

😊

Thank you for re writing Careless Whispers...


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Posted: 9 years ago
When I was reading CW Sequel Part 2, I felt like I was transported to the award ceremony myself and witnessed the performance and their love for each other.
Such an amazing narration. Simply superb.
Cheers...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Usually, stories for me are no more than a source of entertainment. Sometimes, a curiosity about how other people (writers) see the world and solve problems. In this forum, I have been surprised by those who made Shyam even worse than what he was in the TV series; and by others who increased the angst factor many folds above what was showed on the show.

But from all of the stories, this is the only one that left me intrigued. This is a mean feat, as I'm no longer young and I have had a life full of experiences, including leaving in four different countries (Brazil, where I grew up; France, where I went for postgraduate studies; Germany, where I lived after married a German; and Australia, where I now live). Also, after more than two decades working in cancer treatment, as a Medical-Physicist, stories which include cancer patients/survivors often leave me disappointed.

Yet, this story left me wondering and asking further questions. And the reason is Arnav, or more exactly, the works of his mind. Here we have a very sensitive man, who went to hell after the accident of his first wife and spent years 'in mourning' (while she was in coma and after her death). Undoubtedly, some guilt about the accident may have played a major role on his emotional state. But would this man, even if he fell in love with Khushi, be able to cope with making a life with someone who had ovarian cancer? Wouldn't he leave in constant fear that the disease may return? And that he would go through the untimely loss of his wife for a second time?

I have no answer for these questions. And possibly, this is the biggest accomplishment of this story. Leaving one wondering about life . . . You got me there, Meera! Thanks for that. And I hope to meet you again, on your next story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh! Meera, I was so wrong, I was thinking Arnav will get surprised to see khushi, but u turned it around, wow superd dear.Loved it.

And what an update it was, simple wow.
Loved it, liked it, will cherish this part for long.

Thank u so much.

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