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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
nice story
i think kushi should give a tight punch on akash face he is such a looser idiot stupid etc
i like your writting skill
your way of writing the story is awesome
update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
awww so emotional yet so sweettt ...nyc update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Khushi: look at him he was fast a sleep , she just peck his forehead and picked up the cell to call buaji , she just very slowly talked to buaji , told her everything ,she didnot move from his side as she was scared if she will get up he will wake, he was still holding her tight .

Buaji: "khushi he is your husband that's it , it is your duty to be with him and look after him. example is in front of you. one belong to a very known family , but he left you on your wedding day, and other "

Khushi "i got what you want to say buaji"

Buaji: take care of him

Khushi" i am and will always be " she caress his hairs

Buaji: where is he?

Khushi "sleeping in my "she paused ,brush her cheek with his forehead to check his temperature

Buaji: "pagla larki itna zoor zoor se us ka sar per baat kar rahi hoon, sun liya ho tou "

Khushi: hide her smile " see you" she cut phone she made him rest on pillow ,covered him "love you" kissed his cheek. walk to the pool side ,she saw Ramu kaka coming with a tray

Ramu kaka" betiya your lunch"

Khushi: " i will have with him "

Ramu kaka, look at sleeping Arnav "how is he?"

Khushi: bit better ,she saw he turn.she just walk in closing the french door .

Arnav:"Khushi"

Khushi: just sat next to him ,hold his hand in her he look at her closed his eyes back hold it tightly"i am here"he just turn & placed his head again in her lap ,she smiled. silent pray for him

flash back

it was a party a day before wedding Akash picked her up , he just look at her clothes

Akash" why you wore sari in cocktail party?"

Khushi" what else to wear ?"

Akash: just increased the speed and he covered the distance 30 mins distance in 10 mins , hit brake

Khushi just exhale

Akash: just step down .

Khushi: was thanking that she reached in one piece .

Akash: knock the window " i dont like to be formal "

Khushi just step out quickly ,she walked behind him " why i agree to come with him, here there will be only his friends , he will be not here "she paused as someone knocked at her shoulder,she turn around

Arnav: passed her glass of water

Khushi without thinking or giving a second thought she grab it and drank .

Akash : bhai aap

Arnav:: i was having meeting in same hotel

Akash: oh i thought you came here to enjoy party

Arnav: stare at Khushi pale face.

Akash: come dance with me , he pull Khushi arm .

Khushi just clutched Arnav jacket sleeve

Arnav look at her hand

Akash: come on ,he was not looking back at her just pulling her

Arnav: Payal Akash

Akash: left khushi arm she bump into Arnav. who was ready to hold her "Where bhai?"

Arnav at the entrance

Akash:" bhai do me a favor you give Khushi company , i will go and talk to Payal , she is very angry from me" .

Khushi . just closed her eyes and silently prayed .

Arnav: me

Akash: "you both talk about gardening" he just left them

Khushi :just left his coat collar which she was griping , he removed his hand off her waist .,she look up

Arnav: "come with me we will sit there " he just hold her hand and walk to a corner

Khushi:" thank GOD you saved me" while she seated

Arnav: look at her face , she was having small sweat droplets on her forehead , he passed her his hanky "relax , i will stay, i will not go"

Khushi just took the hanky and wipe her sweat .

Arnav: i saw him coming here , he is a crazy driver

Khushi: " i thought i will die today , i will not go with him, i will take auto "

Arnav: look at her she was scared

Khushi:" am i looking odd " she stand and turn around

Arnav: he was mesmerized by her beauty

Khushi: bola na , she shake his shoulder

Arnav:what

Khushi: i am looking odd that is why you even didnot listen my question

Arnav: who said that

Khushi: your brother first and now you , she was fixing her sari modern way,she pinned .her blouse was visible now .

Arnav: when i said that .

Khushi : i am

Arnav just saw guys looking at her ,he just closed his fist ,he just stand

Khushi: look at him as he lean forward almost on her , actually he was blocking the view "What "she look up at him

Arnav: just placed his and on her shoulder taken out the pin

Khushi : look at him as her pallu fallen on her arm and covered her

Arnav:"it is perfect " he walk back to his seat

Khushi got what he wanted to say ,he was staring at the guys ,they turn their face .


Akash came to them with Payal

"Payal she is Khushi"

Khushi: look at them Payal was dress in a very short dress , she was hanging in Akash arms

Payal:"your mom choice is great "she winked at him

Akash: you both must be enjoying

Khushi nodded in yes

Akash" thank God bhai you arrived .other wise i"he paused

Payal was whispering something in his ear

Akash" yes babes lets go ,see you both after dance as you both are too bore "

Khushi just drank the water which he had already taken half ,while he was controlling his anger ,when guys was staring at her

Arnav: just smiled .

Khushi just got up hold his hand suddenly "i want to dance with you "she just pull him with her

Arnav :was not getting ,she placed his hanky in her clutch and

Khushi we are not bore right

Arnav: nodded his head in yes

Khushi : " keep this please in your pocket " she passed her small clutch to him

Arnav kept it in his jacket pocket ,he was not getting what he was doing , he was just listening her they both walk to the dance floor , the music had started

Khushi: placed her hand on his shoulder ,as he placed on her waist " i dont know how to dance "she whisper in his ear ,he look at her" i know you will not drop me" she smiled at him ,he just smiled

Arnav: "i too dont know how to dance "

Khushi:wow perfect couple .her lips brush his chin.

Arnav:held his breath the music had started got lost

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he just twist and turn her around him , she just freely swing around him

they were so lost in each other that they didnot got when the light just spotted them and every eyes was focusing them .as the music stopped ,Khushi rested her head on his shoulder , both were out of breath

Arnav: look around he saw everyone was standing in shock " i think we did something wrong "he whisper in her ear ,she raised her head and look at him .he was holding her tight

Khushi":i am not looking at them "she hide her self more in him

AKash: wow you both dance like

Payal" lost lovers "she had a laughter

Arnav :just grind his teeth and tighten his grip on her hand" actually we wanted to show you we are not bore " he walk with her off the floor .

Akash: wait wait ,he hold Khushi arm "now you dance with me "

Khushi who was still holding his hand ,felt he loosen his grip on her hand " i am tired "she kept on holding Arnav hand and move ahead .


dinner was served

Khushi just didnot had anything she was just having flash back of the dance . Arnav was sitting next to her staring at her ,as he had already eaten with his client.

Akash: lets go i will drop you

Khushi: was shocked as he suddenly came and said. " i cannot risk my life with you , i will go with him as i already asked him"with out waiting she just got up

Akash: i will not drive fast

Khushi: please aap mujhe ko drop karda

Arnav just got up "sure"

Akash,grab her shoulder " why you are ignoring me ?"

Arnav: move your hands off her

Akash: she is my wife , he pull her to him

Arnav:" not yet Akash" he just move away his hands off her shoulder ,hold her hand and walk out she was frighten and shivering . they just walk to car ,he open door for her ,as she seated ,he taken off his jacket and covered her, she look at him,he just walk to the driving seat .There was a pin drop silence in car ,He was driving very slow .after 10 mins she fallen on his shoulder . He look at her she was asleep.

Flash back end


Khushi:look at him , he was staring at him "when you woke up?"her finger was continually running in his hairs

Arnav: "1st i want to know, why you are smiling like that?" touch her lips

Khushi why you didnot woke me day before yesterday ?& slept in car like that.

Arnav: "because i wanted to spend time with you"

Khushi:"& buaji she she didnot woke us "

Arnav: so that is the reason of this smile

Khushi yes

Arnav: "buaji did came out i said ,to let you sleep ,till you woke up your self "

Khushi ohhh buaji knew then

Arnav "what"he sat

Khushi: that i loved you

Arnav: OMG i slept for hours ,he look at the watch it was saying 5

Khushi: you rested see you are fine .she wipe his forehead

Arnav: look at her" why you did not moved me ?why you are sitting like that" he look at her lap it was all wet as he was sweating like anything

Khushi: same question to you why you didnot woke me that day ?

Arnav just jump out of bed

Khushi where are you going ?

Arnav: shower

Khushi: "don't you dare " hold his arm

Arnav:"but"

Khushi: i am not having any problem,hug him from back kissed his neck

Arnav what the

Khushi : "shhh i am bring lunch "made him sit back

Arnav: did you had anything ?

at the same time some one knocked at door

Khushi: just open door

NK how is he?

Khushi: i am glad you came at right time, please keep an eye on him ,i am coming .

Arnav: you didnot reply to me

Khushi:" i will have with you "

Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
wow amazing di
in the flash back the way arnav cared for her was too good 😳
n he slept in her lap how peaceful 🥱
awesome di
just loved it
They are the perfect couple ❤️
wow im first after a long time
ps: im going to bording coll tomorrow so ill not b able to read every day but i dont wanna miss any of what u write ill try my best to read when ever possible
tc di... hope ill b the first one to comment some time soon 😭
Edited by sulochana90 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: sulochana90

wow amazing di

in the flash back the way arnav cared for her was too good 😳
n he slept in her lap how peaceful 🥱
awesome di
just loved it
They are the perfect couple ❤️
wow im first after a long time
ps: im going to bording coll tomorrow so ill not b able to read every day but i dont wanna miss any of what u write ill try my best to read when ever possible
tc di... hope ill b the first one to comment some time soon 😭

for you just made it
i will miss you too tc love you
Edited by naddiya26 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Awww...
So perfect couple nd so romantic 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
❤️

Originally posted by: naddiya26

for you just made it
i will miss you too tc love you

Awww thank u so much... just loved it di.⭐️ ❤️
😭
hope to be regular...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
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that waz really sweet update... NK alwayz with ArShi... so cute... loved it...
Edited by ssnair - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Awesme update👏
Sooo beautiful 😍
They r truely 'The Perfect Couple'❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Loved the update 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
continue soon pls...😍 waiting

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