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Posted: 13 years ago

it was hot..waitin for d sequel

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swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wonderful!!!

wow lovely hot end...

waiting for the sequel..

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Jammy-

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Posted: 13 years ago

The update was truly intense and passionate! A nice end to a perfect little story that includes the end of Shyam Manohar Jha as well... Eagerly waiting for the sequel! :)

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Avani

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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh my god,...the first chapter was amazing...

So Arnav and Khushi are trying to locate Shyam after he was slapped out of RM...while Di has lost her baby and is suffering from depression...

So they need to locate shyam...not sure for what as yet...

And again their life is in danger as someone who entered was talking bout finding the girl...n i supposed it meant Khushi...n her husband meaning Arnav...

God this is very exciting,...n a stollen kiss in a closet...wow...amazing that is...

going to read chapter 2...toodles...

Avni 😊

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asimov

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Posted: 13 years ago

During the whole piece...I was unaware that I was holding my breath too...very intense update😉

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Avani

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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh my god,...ur ASR/Arnav is sooo much better than the Show itself...

The words that he comes up with,...the understanding of Khushi's hesitation and emotions...god i wish there was actually a man like that...

Too good...this is totaly a MnB kind of character...got me back to a dream world...

Ur way of writing is very magnatic...

ThnQ for the pm

Avni 😊

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Natasha

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Posted: 13 years ago

LOVED IT WAITING FOR THE SEQUEL

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Avani

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Posted: 13 years ago

that was amazing,...loved the whole os and its very well written...

I especially like the C4 bomb part and also how he saved her from the SUV...very well decribed...

lots of ppl may have read because of the hot content and honestly it was truly gud...but i loved the story side of it...

Shyam is dead...n the 2 eyes watching mr n mrs Raizada together...

Could this be Anjali...i honestly have a feeling it is Anjali...n no one else...

i cant wait for the sequel...i really need to see how u reveal a negative Anjali...or is it???

She was too calm n non blaming for it to sit will with me...i cant fanthom her being that way unless she was with shyam conspiring...

God hope i m wrong cuz i wont be able to sympathize with Anjali on the show...but pls do start the sequel soon...

N start it as n SS short story as opposed to and occasional story...

ThnQ for a great read...

avni.

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saba

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Posted: 13 years ago

☺️hot ☺️hot ☺️hot ☺️

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Mjht_kmh

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Posted: 13 years ago

I'm really sad that was the ending. 😭 BUT it was REALLY good. Can't wait for the squeal now. 😛

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