SS : Control Vs. Chaos Part 8 (Conclusion)

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#361

an awesome update and an intriguing ending... love the soul-connection arnav and khushi have: after being separated their eyes just zero in to the other's presence! what a promise: "I'm not letting you go" and I know he means it! thses two are really insatiable and find really innovative locations to make love in! that scene really gave a new meaning to the expression 'to make a thorough examination'😉

by the way, do you have something against arnav and khushi being happy and at peace in their togetherness? now you have a crazy and vengeful woman coming after khushi!! life is never ordinary and dull for them,is it? anyway, whatever you dish out, i will eagerly read!

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Jammy-

@Jammy-

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

I had read the first 2 updates which were awesome but then fell behind on reading more.. Sorry, just caught up with the story. Its bloody fantastic. So shyam might be(not jumping to conclusions here) dead but there is this woman now?! God why cant the world just let them be. Waiting for the next update. Thanks for the PM :)

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

awesome update

" "Well, It looks like your Husband is fireproof."

"And bomb-proof," another officer added.

"Some guys are hard to kill," Kelan said, smiling softly at Khushi...
"🤣 love this comment..

arnav madea through inspection of khushi in the back of suv when kelan officer is standing right outside the suv ☺️

now who is this lady villan ... im so happy snakewa is dead

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

just great now that woman is after them
ppl let them be god is it hard to let them in peace
thank god he is alive wow that was close one

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

Great update they finally got rid of Shyam and now its the woman turn

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Radhika

@TheInkMistress

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Awesome work Sarah!
Love you tonzzz!

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

luved it

wonderful update

especially the arnav survived, arnav inspecting khushi, their love making scene and the new mystery girl.

looking forward to seeing who the girl is and wat next for arnav and khushi.

thx a lot for the pm

continue soon

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sarra0

@sarra0

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

Great update, wat a cliffhanger

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

Wow...update was very surprising.

Who would have thought that arnav and khushi would make out in the back of a police SUV in the middle of so much chaos.

Glad that Shyam is finally dead and out of their lves. But who is this women.

please continue soon

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#370

Awesome update was intense, hot and interesting. So happy arnav is ok Arhi having hot and passionate love making inside the suv while the officer is waitting outside lol thanks for the pm.

Edited by shyperson - 13 years ago

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