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Posted: 13 years ago
WODERFUL UPDATE! SUPERB! LOVED IT !
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Paradize

there is no jail convict on marital rape case...its considered mild domestic voilence legally and sending to jail is not legally possible ...even if the victim files a case...he shd only be left with a legal warning...



That means Khushi will never get justice...will suffer silently like other Indian women as he is her husband...wow what a life she will have...bright future she will have with ASR...👏

socha tha real life me bohot kam aurato ko insaaf milta hai...aur yeh ff hai to yaha to definitely milega... par pata nahi milega bhi ya nahi...
Edited by adorableyosh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Black_Paradize

true ...Oopsy's revenge by khushi😆...and yaar seriously even tht em writting a way tooo soft core than my usual brutual and cruel writting style..people does'nt seems to be happy even now..they want me to make ASR beg cry and become a Devdas not to be with khushi coz he dont deserve her... what shd i do? i dont fantasize crying, begging men. how can i write tht part


...sorry to cut in. But I'd just like to say, I've noticed how you've toned down your bold style of writing compared to your previous FF! And even in recent updates, it's obvious how hard you're trying to justify Arnav's bad boy behaviour - perhaps due to the comments!! But heck he's your character, lol you can't please everyone; people are never happy either way!!

I like the fact you've given us a character that we can all despise and love at the same time - that's a rare talent!! Not everyone can be that bold and daring with their characterisation, but I loved the fact that you've stepped outside of the box and have delivered something completely new and original! Kudos to you!

Lage raho! 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: adorableyosh



That means Khushi will never get justice...will suffer silently like other Indian women as he is her husband...wow what a life she will have...bright future she will have with ASR...👏

socha tha real life me bohot kam aurato ko insaaf milta hai...aur yeh ff hai to yaha to definitely milega... par pata nahi milega bhi ya nahi...


hey

i am sure insaaf milegaaa bcoz i knw pari she wont let arnav go just like that but thr r ways apart frm jail.

and this ff is based on reality honey nt far frm that thr r woman who dont evn knw what marital rape is just like khushi.

arnav cheating on khushi well no woman will ever justify that... so hw do u carry on the relation futher frm thr is the question well let me tell u no man born on this earth will not have affair outside if his woman doesnt sleep with him and ask fr divorce...and if u read ff carefully he was ready to free her but her mom who like million othr moms outthr wont have her daughter back after all this and thats a reality.

u knw what wen i started to read this ff i was not ready to accept the concept but pari asked me to give it a chance and i m loving the way she is bringing out the reality of world in this ff.

just wait and watch
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: oops-whoops


hey

i am sure insaaf milegaaa bcoz i knw pari she wont let arnav go just like that but thr r ways apart frm jail.

and this ff is based on reality honey nt far frm that thr r woman who dont evn knw what marital rape is just like khushi.

arnav cheating on khushi well no woman will ever justify that... so hw do u carry on the relation futher frm thr is the question well let me tell u no man born on this earth will not have affair outside if his woman doesnt sleep with him and ask fr divorce...and if u read ff carefully he was ready to free her but her mom who like million othr moms outthr wont have her daughter back after all this and thats a reality.

u knw what wen i started to read this ff i was not ready to accept the concept but pari asked me to give it a chance and i m loving the way she is bringing out the reality of world in this ff.

just wait and watch

u knw the only part tht is called fiction in my story is... ASR falling in love with khushi, he is sad tht he has hurt her, he wants to give her her space, he is demanding nothing from her after knowing her innocence, a sex driven man like him is not touching her tht she'll get hurt, and last but not the least ...he cares for her... The whole above part is a fiction.. the rest of it is bloody reality... face it... no powerfull man goes to jail in the subcontinent after having sex with his own wife if she is not willingly involved, tht too in a case where she dont even knows what marital rape is? tht too in a part of world where people think they have every right on their women weather they like it or not, tht too where a mother never ever wants their daughter's life to become super hell after divorce... i tell divorce is not a simple word like it seems ...its bloody hell for a women in Asia, if she is teased the way her husband treats her , she will be willing to sucide after divorce for the way the world will treat them...its tht simple tht khushi or any women will be filling for divorce if her husband is forcing... i know 80% womens been forced by husbands and they dont even comment on this, and u wont belive some of them are too bold to even say it clearly that they like the way their men are dominant on them... here in the subcontinent powerfull people like Raizada's if they exist...they never ever even care what ever their enemy would be suffering from, and even if they got to know the innocence..the big favour they do is to throw away the girl out of their life as her innocence is proved and so to end her punishment...and they dont even do tht as well...thts more than enough even if they do so. Here in my FF i am writing about Arnav khushi not a judicury, its about a girl who find love in a very unlikely place where its not possible,...i am not writting about judicury or anything like tht so i will not change my charachters, ASR will remain the same powerfull, ruthless and dark horse the way he is, khushi will take him out of his darkness but not by sending him to jail...jail nor its legally possible btw and nor it solves all the problems in a relationship, some time people have to compromise...both men and women, the story is far more away from the reality already as em making him fall and care for khushi tht is actually not possible in real world ...try to understand the different between the actual fiction part tht is Love and care...the other part is the bitter truth...
and still if my story is hurting some one's sentiments...i swear i did'nt meant to hurt any body, i never do...i keep patience for a long time even if some one is hurting me as well, i will request the readers who are pretty hurt to not read it any futher as i am not willing to hurt them any more coz my fiction will remain the same... if still some one is having a problem with a mere piece of fiction or the reality em showing them..pm me ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
ohhh this bonus update was amazing one darling just loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: srahs

ohhh this bonus update was amazing one darling just loved it
continue soon

thanks rabi😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: namedx


...sorry to cut in. But I'd just like to say, I've noticed how you've toned down your bold style of writing compared to your previous FF! And even in recent updates, it's obvious how hard you're trying to justify Arnav's bad boy behaviour - perhaps due to the comments!! But heck he's your character, lol you can't please everyone; people are never happy either way!!

I like the fact you've given us a character that we can all despise and love at the same time - that's a rare talent!! Not everyone can be that bold and daring with their characterisation, but I loved the fact that you've stepped outside of the box and have delivered something completely new and original! Kudos to you!

Lage raho! 👍🏼

thanks for this dear...it means alot 😳...thanks for liking the charachterization... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME AWESOME UPDATES LOVED IT THANKS FOR THE DAILY UPDATES UR THE BEST CANT WAIT TO READ MORE THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it. Khusi is jealous
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