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u r listening song. I am watching vedio of the episode. I cant understand why people are saying that story and director was not up to the mark? I felt everything is good. story itself is very touching

Originally posted by: mayuloveu

u r listening song. I am watching vedio of the episode. I cant understand why people are saying that story and director was not up to the mark? I felt everything is good. story itself is very touching

i just gave a dam...



whenevr Arjun cums... they have to bash.. either way... today not on him tu director n story...
all of TF where based on sumwhere old stroies...

first..my best frnds wedding
seond ... 1900 k story workholic n neglected wife...
3rd..loser becoming winer
4th sequel of DMG... hum hain rahi pyar k..k ulta version...


soo...
lovestories remain lovestories... the fact tht change them is the actor n character in the story...
for me it was perfect... 50 mins and u get all the emotions in it... from cute strt to painful mid to.. a phew ending...

u know people who are not form alwasy Arjun's fan loved it... and tht is say it all ..
problm yeah bhi hai k indian audience k liyan yeah baat except kerna a lovestory in hr muskil hai mayb thts why...

Originally posted by: -Anila-

Awesome update API...

hayeee...main Sadke jawa...By God!!!!!!!!

MN were sooo Damn Romantic n Cute...haye

THANKS alot dear... aay im so glad u enjoyed it...as past ab change hona shorro hoga

Lolzzz 😆 Fari APU is Awesome!!! i loved the morning part...🤣

uff!! yeh toh pura mere jaisa hain..😆

Main bhi Friday ko huyi thi woh bhi Fazar ke samey...lolzzz 🤣 uske baad shayad hi kabhi khud se uth kar Fazar ko dekha siway Ramazan ke...😆😳

shabsh... sharam tu ati nhi hai nah tum dono ko...
han is part k credit pora faru k jata hai last min mein ny add kiya...

Nikah nama one was also Hilarious!!! 🤣🤣

Awww...He is just sooo Adorable...n unki Biwi toh SubhanALLAH!! Perfect hain *In Madhuri isshhtyle😉* 🤣

she was sooo Adorable...n hayeee

N wah!! Mayank ji ne kya manga hain By God!! i was Actually like... ☺️☺️☺️

n then OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gunjan waha tapak pari...YA ALLAH!!! 😲 😳😆 ☺️☺️☺️
lol..glad u liked it soo mcuh
lol.. han dono ek dosray k liyan bany hain after all..banay hai asa...lol
mayank chalak hai mowa dekh ker chuka mara us ny

ufff!!!!!! srsly!!! yeh toh puri ki puri inn kababon mein haddi nikli...lolz 🤣

lol..glad u enjoyed it

n Awww...then the Present it was sooo Adorable...

i just loved d way Mayank n Nupur both love each other spcly!! Mayank...Sigh!

He is just Perfect n sooo damn Adorable n Loving...Sigh!

n Gosh!!!!!!! u described every lil bit sooo perfectly..Sigh! MA!

n hayeee woh haddi wapas se a gayi...ufff!!! Mayank bhi na kitnaa besharam hain.😆

yeh hamesha galat tumhare hisab ki sahi timing... was Awesome one...🤣🤣🤣

but i loved der Relationship n sooo agree with Nupur in it...😳
glad u liked it... present is truning good now...
hmm mayank is sumhow the center of this story i didnt did it like it but woh hogaya ... aur yeah tu kuch zayda hi xhessy hota jarah ahai hina.
lol.. gunjna mayank n nupur relationship will be like this ..bhabi n dever relatioship is the most beautiful n the most fun.. and tht i want to show here

loved it sooo much!!!

lolzzz...he love Tai jaan Well...for that reason even me too...but only once 😛🤣

m sure iss wajah ko le kar hi masla utha hoga...Sigh!!

loved it to BITS...

Fav part...

loved it a lottt

love u lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗

thanks alot dear
glad u liked it
love ya

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Awesome update.

thanks alot dear

thanks alot ..rplyd to u all... pardon errors

Chapter: 25

Present:

Mayank: nupur kya hoga ya …asa kerogi tu kasay chaly ga..

Nupur: mjhy yeah pani nhi kahana…

Mayank: tu kis ny kaha tha sleeping beauty bany k liyan… ab chicken tikaa tu tum kah nhi sakti nah… acha thora sat u kahalo….

Nupur: chicken tikka tu maat yaad dilo nah…

From past 15 mins he was trying to convinced her to take her food, it was light almost without any spice just pinch of salt… its just recent she has been shifted to the oral food, so she needs to be slow…. But here she is throwing full on tantrums on this..

Mayank: pls… thora sa…

He placed the spoon near her mouth..and pleading to take it….and she did opend her mouth glaring at him.. he chuckled

Mayank: tum kab se khany mein itni nakray kerny lagi

Nupur: is ko khao gay tu pata chaly ga…

Mayank itna bora bhi nhi hai ..tumhara taste moo k zaiqa(taste) bora hua ho hai..islyn asa lag raha hai

Nupur: she took another spoon n frown..maynk tum ny taste kiya yeah… she was shocked…

Mayank: han tu..kal se cheek rahi ho ajeeb hai ajeeb hai..mein ny socha waqi hoga…

She just can smile and look at him in an awe…

Mayank: mjhy asay baad mein dekh layna abhi yeah kaho..shabsh last hai…

Nupur: promise…

Mayank: han baba last hai..

Nupur: tum yahi hon nah…..

He placed the bowl asaide and moved more forward to her….and hold her face in his hand

Mayank: mein kahin bhi tu nhi gaya tha nupur….tumahry pass hi tu tha… aur tumhain tu sab pata tha nah… phir asa kyun kiya….

Nupur: tum phone nhi utha rahy thy

Mayank: sirf kuch ghante… mera phone crash hogaya tha….foron hi naya liya.. aur jab tumahi call kiya tha tum nhi utha rahi thi… aur do din mein hi Samrat ko phone agaya….asa kyun kya tum nay…

He wanted to know…he just cant take it anymore what has happened in his absence he wanted to know….all…yet her restlessness and fear in her eyes always stop him to force her to say it all…

Mayank: he sat beside her and hugged her….acha kuch maat socho relax…ab tu sab thik hai nah…

Resting her head on his chest he was caressing her hairs….she was trying to find words to tell him, yet she couldn't rather ended up clutching him more tightly…

Mayank: kya hua nupur… hmm… he pecked her forehead…

Nupur: mein yaha se kab jao gi

Mayank: abhi kuch din tu lagy ga…. Tum thori strong hojao tu u need to start to walk…

Nupur: per mein gahri hoi thi…she looked up to him…

Mayank: mjhy pata hai… han tu thori din aur.. bhagny lago gi phir se…

She smiled..

Nupur: tum thik ho…

Mayank: hmm…bulkily thik hoo…

Nupur: choti ami se baat ki tum ny….

He removed his eyes from her and she placed her palm on his face to make him look at her…

Nupur: ek baar baat kero nah… woh samjhy gi…

Mayank: chukled…han ab tu sab samjhy ga…

Nupur: mayank woh mjh se buhat pyar kerti hain…us mein woh sab bhool gai..

Mayank: tu kya woh yeah nhi janti thi k tum meray liyan kya hoo…

Nupur: per hum ny hi tu qaboola tha nah yeah sab… unk kasoor nhi hai..

Mayank: janta hoon…bus pata nhi.. ab mera dil nhi hai kisi bhi chees per… sab wohi dekhty hain jo samny ho…kisi ny aur dekhna hi nhi chaha… na samhjna chaha…us waqt mjhy pata chala k mein kya kya kerskta hoon… tai jaan ki kahi har baat per woh sab khamsoh thy…kisi ny ek baar bhi defend nhi kiya….pcoha bhi nhi k mein ny asa kiya kya……

Tu ab mein ksis ko saafi nhi dayna wala…unahy yeah kabar bhi mil hi jay gi….

Nupur: mayankk..

Mayank: sigh…nupur thora tu waqt lagy ga nah…mjhy waps un rishto per ateibar kerny per…

He said spreading his finger on her cheeks..and she closed her eyes in yes….moving forward he captured her lips in a soft kiss, and moved away to see a frown on her close eyes…

Mayank: soory..per ap ki breathing itni stable nhi hoi hai abhi ..k I can fullfil ur wishes… he whispered resting his head on her forehead and she smiled and hided herself in him….

Past:

Mayank: farhan start working on the order…. Jo pehli qist( installment) aai hai us se material utho jitna humain chaiy… aur baqi ko production k liyna rukh ker rekho..

Farhan: production tu apna hi office hai mayank… tu itna masla nhi hai..material hum apny kisi bhi clients se nhi lay rahy hain…us mein invest kern a parayga… wasy meri maano tu ek sath sara material maat utho..

Mayank: kyun yaar… dekho humain issay jitna jaldi hosakty pora kerna hai farhan… ASAP means ASAP….

Farhan: thik hai.. mein aj hi sara maal utha ker production per shift kerta hoon…

Mayank: thanks yaar…

……

Tai jaan: kya baat hai kafi masrrof ho aj kal…kuch khass chal raha hai…

Mayank: nhi kuch khass nhi…. Wohi po*ny kam chal rahy hain…

Tai jaan: porany kam… business alag kerny k plan ker rahy ho lagta hai… huh..woh bhi khosih kerlo… khir… yeah lo…tumhara courier galti se meray pass agaya tha….

Dam it… yeah courier bhi un k pass hi jana tha… had hai… it was his invoice detail ..he hasn't told anyone about his project, just started so he wanted to be there at floor at proper position than he will tell every one.. he is actually planning to setup there share abroad..and that is oneme of biggest fears of tai jaan..

Tai jaan knew mayank is upto sumthing very strong, but somewhere she knew even the fact that his hands are tied so much that he can't do anything…. So this the time to start executing her plans…the first plan has been done way back..now its time to make the first move openly…

Tai jaan: salam afzal sahib… apki fianc company se abhi abhi ek loan sanction hoa hai… ji ji … bus usi sisilay mein ap se kuch baat kerni thi…

………………..

Shilpa: nupur mein koi hamesha k liyan thori jarahi hoon….

Nupur: choti ami ap chali jao gi tu kiya hoga… asa kasay…

Shilpa: acha ji.. ap apany shoor k pass rahin… aur humain ap apny k pass rahy..dekho beta Salman bhi ek arsay se bahar akelay hain…

Mayank: tension not…kuch waqt mein hum bhi chaly ga ami papa k pass…

Nupur: sachi..

Mayank: muchi…

Shilpa: kya matlab

Mayank: mjhy NY k ek project mila hai…. Abhi kisi ko nhi batana..tu woh waha display hoga tu designer ko tu hona paray ga na waha… tu not to worry next month hum dono ap se milny aay gay..

Shilpa: KYA…aray wah.. yeah tu sach mein buhat achi kahabr hai… shukar hai apki itnay dino ki mehnaat ab khir pori horahi hai…

Mayank: bus ap duwa kerna k yeah sab thik treqqay se hojay…. Aur ab chaly ya pilot ko bolo ap ko yahin se pick ker ly…

Nupur: mein bhi jao gi ami ko chor ny…

Mayank: han tu chalo..maagr pls waha ja ker roona maat

Nupur: mein itni rooto nhi hoon…huh..

Mayank: hmm..

he pecked her check…and she looked at him with wide eyes..and looked at shilpa but luckily she has her back to them….

Mayank: itna bewaquf nhi hoon.. n he pecked the other..

Nupur: mayankkk….chalo… she smiled and dragged him out…

….

Later night they were lying on the bed, mayank was watching the ceiling and was thinking sumthing , when nupur came and joined him… she moved closed to him and placed her chin on his arm taking his attention… he moved his hand and encircle it around her shoulder…

Mayank: kuch khass nhi… asai hi bus

Nupur: asay hi..itna nhi sochty tum.. akhir daaf tu asa tab soch rahy thy jab tum se humari shadi ki baat hoi thi… he chukled at the memories of tht night

Mayank: us din tu waqi buhat soch raha tha… aur kya soch raha tha woh bhi samhj nhi araha tha..

Nupur: tum ny kasay yeah decision lay liya..

Mayank: he looked at her, moving back her hairs…pata nhi.. shayd Allah yeahi chahta tha… islayn us ny itni madaat ki… us ko pata tha yeah best hai..

Nupur: aur aj kya soch rahy hoo..dosri shadi k….

They both giggles…

Mayank: aj tumhari maa ny mera courier dekh liya invoice wala… n I wonder woh zaroor pata kerly gi k kya chal raha hai..

Nupur: tu kya hua hony do..

Mayank: pata nhi nupur… kuch ajeeb lag raha hai.. jasay kuch hai jo mein dekh nhi raha hoon….

Nupur: matlab… kya

Mayank: sab kuch zaroorat se zayda sahi tareqay se horaha hai…. Mjhy kuch ajeeb lag raha hai

Nupur: aray yeah kya baat hoi..ek saal hogaya mayank tumhain is sab per kam kertay hoay…. Kitni muskil se yeah contract mila hai … aur tum kah rahy hoo k asani se hogaya… shayd tumahra sab se bara khwab pora horaha hai islyn itni beyaqeeni horahi hai….

Mayank: shayd.. sojao..mein shayd bekar hi soch raha hoon…..

Nupur: hmm…shaba khir.. she rested her head on his chest and closed her eyes…yet he was still sumwhere in his weird restlessness.. sumwhere he is fearing sumthing cuming up….

………….

Mayank: per afzal sehab asa kasay hosakta hai…. Mein apky sath asa kyun kero ga…. Mein ny tu ap se pehly hi kaha tha k ap check ker lay… nhi dekhy asa kuch nhi hai… ap mjhy thora waqt day bus.. mein dekhta hoo yeah sab…

He sat on his chair and his head in his palm…how can it can be possible…. Asa kasay hosakta hai… it cant be..just the knock on the door he ask the man to cum in… the pe on gave him a letter..

He opened it without knowing what is inside it…. But as soon as he looked at them…he felt his whole world collapse right there…. It cant be…he checked the signatures they were right… but why… she cant do this to him no…she cant do this to him..noway..

Suddenly everything around him is slipping form his hand, he felt his brain stoped ..he took is jacked and papers and drove as fast as cant to home…

Reaching home he looked around

Mayank: NUPUR… he shouted at full… gunjan who was there was shocked to hear his such loud voice..

Gunjan: kya hua mayank

Mayank: nupur kaha hai…

Gunjan: kamray mein..

He didn't heard what she was saying…tai jaan who was in her room waiting for this smile resting her head on the chair…

Tai jaan: tu doo war ek sath… sahi nisahny per laga … ab shoro hoga khel..Mayank ahmed.. apna sab kuch harny ko taiyaar hojay… tumhain lagta hai nah tum sab janty hoo… ab dekho tum kya kya nhi janty

Mayank: NUPUR.. he opened the door and shuted with a bang to make her shoked with the voice…

Nupur: aray wah miya ji aj ap itni jadli kasay agay….

Mayank who was in high pitch anger, hurt and pain… he was feeling suffocated trapped and didn't knew how to react…She said with a smile…wch soon vanished as he threw the papers he was holding right on her face.. making her dam scared

Mayank: oh really ..miya ji….. tu mjhy pehly kyun nhi kaha …aagr tum in sab se itna bezar hogai ho k nobata yaha tak gai hai.. tu mjhy se tu kahti…

Nupur: kya hua mayank kya bol rahy hoo…aur yeah papers kis chees k hai

Mayank: aray wah… yahin janab ny mjhy yeah papers behjy aur pata bhi nhi yeah kiya hai…. Tum mjh se khula chahti hoo….yeah khula k kahaaz hai nupur (divorce papers)

She took hold of the chair near her… she didn't knew what he is saying and what not.. but how can this happened..he cnat leave her… no way..the whole life stopped there at the moment..

again yarrr awsm update lvd the Present and past was gd

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

thanks alot dear..
haan there are no negative character other than the great tai

CSI ... sab bhol gay us ko tum na bhool nah
kya khud tu khain CSI FIA mein nhi ho...😆 islyn itna intrest hai...

i do have a faint plot in my mind..and sum how i feel its very weak in suspense... the time right now personlly isnt giving me tht kinda free mind that i can write sumthing like CSI... i hate flaws in CSI...

so evrytime i write CSI /...for a week i just do tht.. make the story complete on the foreground of the plot than i add all the unnecessary romance n all... but sumhwere i have just not got in to right now

yet i will try... that i can write sumthing on it... i surly will try... i haven't forgoten the fact i have said yes to CSI 3..so sooner hope so not later... i will gave u tht

thanks for asking