MN.NEW..PARICHEY...CHP24 LTH#2 at Index Pg 1 - Page 55

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

part 9...

awesomesttt update...

chalo mrs waris ke through hi tai jaan ki aankhe khuli n mayur ki shadi ki baat soochi...

thanks alot dear
yup kuch tu acha hua ...

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

part 10...

woowww!!!! mayur ki marriage ki baat awesome...

bt i guess something evil is cooking in tai jaan's mind..

yup evil is cooking yet the good is they are geting married

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

part 11

i hope mayank maan jaye shadi ke liye...

god bless

maan jay gay
agay chalo😆

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

part 12...

awww bechare mere mayur kitne confused n tensed hain...

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

part 13...

awesomest awesomest awesomest...

mayur ki baatein was toh like awww

both r so cute...

n thank god nupur hosh mein toh aayi...

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

part 14...

hayeee

mayank ke dad toh sabse aage nikle teasing ke mamle mein...

n mayank kitna confused hai gift ko le kar..n is sooo cute...

nupur ka kitna khayal rakhta hai itne dur ho kar bhi awww i loved it

Originally posted by: parul_bansal

part 15..

waooo yayyy

mayur got married...

lovely...

yeh tai jaan puri sanak chuki hai huhhh huhhh

confuse tu hon gay its new for both of them
glad ur liking the way there relation is going

lol..haan mayank k dad i want to be like such kuch tu acha ho parents mein ek taraf...
haan woh sanak chuki hai aur sab ko sankay gi abhi aur😆

lovly to see ya back here dear
May Allah bless u
wasy thi kaha ap..sab thik hai nah

Originally posted by: gopi06

amazing updt fiza
with each updt love towards mayank & hate towards NM increasing
loved last part..waiting to know how they accept their changing relation..cont soon
thanks for the pm

thanks lot dear

it is kinda this way the more u read the more u get firm on this feeling
thanks for liking it
will cont soon

Originally posted by: --WHATEVER--

nice part...

thanks alot dear

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

lovely update .
mayu is so cuteee

i think he allready loves her bas realize nahi ki
d way he cars for her .its so sweet .
n now m geting on what way story going .
i mean i understood before but now seems to be able to guess dat y were dey separated ...

thanks dear
glad u liked it
hmm kha sakti hoo yeah
hmm so now u people are going to understnd more n more slowly

Originally posted by: drmaha

it was fabolous,...

mayank nai kiya jawab diya tai jaan ko lol... loved it...

shadi hugayei hai inndono ko gosh but still mystery is there...

thanks alot dear
glad u liked it

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

awww...

per NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tai ki esi ki tessi churi na ho tu...

ye kya ;(

thnksu

lol...tai tu sab k roza karab kerny per toli hai hainah

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

finally MN r married!🥳
bt yeh tai jaan.. vamp ban ke q bethe hai!😡

yupiii😆
lol...woh vamp hai us ko character mein rehny do

Originally posted by: Bhawna_arti

Lovly update..

thnaku

Originally posted by: --Sanchu--

i think abhi dhire dhire i get the story what might have happend in the days when mayank was away!!

however i loved the last para!!

amazing update

thansk alot dear
hmm so glad now u people can connect to it
thanku

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Superb update

Acha kiya mayank ne tai jaan ko ekk karara sa ans de kar...Loved mayank here and his mom teasing him n nupur was good.

Last part was really nice...Looking in each other eyes n laughing...Good

thansk alot dear
glad u liked it

lol..thanks for liking the part...

Originally posted by: arhi_maneet

NICE UPDATE!

thanku
after long i have seen u here
evry thing alright

Originally posted by: Irum.

Yaar give me something to hit my head

because I can't hit this woman.I know I should not say like this.

😔

Bt I m so angry😡.I could she stoop so low.She demanded Mayank's share in mehar.Was she selling her daughter.

And those blank paper on which she has taken Nupur's signature.I m sure they must be responsible for Mayur divorce.Wo mil kr bhi hamesha k liye bechar gaye.

Wedding went smooth and hesitation ws natural.Bt its good that Mayank took the initiative and broke the ice coz he knows Nupur so well.Bt Fiza yeh to bataya hi nahi K Nupur ne kis colour color ka lehnga wear liya tha and Myank ne kya wear kiya tha I mean Bride and Bride groom's description.😍

kinda she is seeling her diaghter she has planned the perfect bussinses deal ever in her mind..
sigh.. i love ur line woh mil ker bhi hamesha k liya bechar gaye..kinda...
ohh...i didnt knew tum ko yeah dekhna tha...i actually donot payed alot of attention at wedding as mera pora dhayn after wedding per hai... asi im enjoying writing tht..
ur free to imagine them as so ever u want...
im too bad at wedding imginations... meray deemgh mein tu white hi ata hai mein kya kero 😆

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

edited.

its been long time ... pheww finally i hv commented on this ff.

i really dnt knw wht to say abt this woman ... selfish is very small word for her ... wht an woman...apni beti ko hi mohra banaya shares lene k liye

how disgusting!! how can a mother stoop so low??

i like mayank's common sense, that he was aware of her plan... n took a right decison for her n for them.

shilpa-nupur scene was so nice.

its more like a mother-daughter convo ... when nupur's own mother is an opportunist!!

mayur scene was also very nice ... mayank took a right step before entering their new life ... new life with old realtion ... nice step!!

bt i really worry for nupur ... why taijaan took her signature on blank paper ... it ll be very bad for future. is this woman her biological mother?? i doubt.

continue soon.

love ya...

ufff woh aay humaray ff per khuda ki rehmat hai...apny yaah comment ker k humain izaar baksih,,
i know u wont get a thing of above statment

ya kinda she is her mother i know all of u doubt tht...even at times i too...why i have written it so over the top but it has too...
glad u liked mayank's way...its always his ways and will remain his ways who can hanlde to certain extend not compelletey yet...
thnak salot dear for liking n commeting knowing how busy ur these days
lov ya

rplyd to u all

Chapter: 16

The ritual of moo dekhai n all were finished and it was time to face reality…

Standing at the door of my room, I am feeling like awkwardness is an under rated word for right now wht I am felling… I just cant find my feets moving inside..

Maaynk: kay ker raha hai mayank… aram se.. ghairi saas lay aur ja.. iska samany tu kerna hoga na… tu ny khud fasla kiya hai k tu ek moqa day ga is sab ko.. tu phir.. asay sari zindagi n darwazy k bahr tu nhi gahra hoskata nah…

Taking a deep breath he entered his room and very softly without making any noise he closed it.. the ambience of his room didn't t gave any help to him… the only thing he can thing right now was his room was looking so changed yet it was.. beautiful..

Wht… but yes he cant deny it was looking so beautiful with flowers and candles all round ..making him believe it is defiantly a beautiful start to a beautiful journey.. and they will make it …. he moved his eyes around the room and his eyes stopped at the person standing near the window showing her back to him…

He again cant deny the fact that she was looking absolutely beautiful like this, dressed in red lehnga with quite long shirt heavily embellished with silver work(irum u got it now) …. just like a shy, nervous princess.. he knew it always she will make a beautiful bride and once he had said it too.. yet he never knew she will be his bride but when destiny has chose it for them.. he has to make it work…

His heart warmed with affection looking at her hand which were tightly holding the railing of window.. and was actually rubbing her finger on them with nervousness…

With this word he remembered he was too feeling so, but when he found her there, it was all gone, the person standing in front of him is his best friend ..who knows him better than him.. and he cant ask any better person than his life partner… but right now he has to make her realize this thing too… its him not any random person..so she need not to be afraid of anything

Mayank: nupur…

Her throat dried and she was feeling so so embarrassed facing him, she didn't find words, wht she will be calling him, how she has to behave with him, will things change, will she lost the only friend she has in her life…

He walk towards her and stood beside her facing her..

Mayank: nupur.. itna daar kyun rahi ho..hum hain.. koi bhoot thori hai..he chukled saying so trying to make her nerve clam…trying his word to appear normal yet they to came out a bit fumbled

His voice and his same behavior gave her abit stretch to check with her eyes is really he is it.. she looked at him and then turn her eyes back… wht he say there was fear, a frown and lots of questions…

Mayank: he hold her from shoulder and turned to him self… nupur… idahr dekho…. Apko hum per bahrossa hai nah.. she nodded in yes.. aur ek din mein hum mayank se badal ker aflatoon tu hon nhi gay hain… han per halta kuch aflattoni(weird) zaroor hoagy hain…

Dekho hum jo pehly thy aj bhi wohi hai… aur tum bhi… hum apna best friend harghiz nhi kohona(loss) chahty… bulkily bhi nhi… aur is rishty ko moqa dayna ki wajah sirf yeahi ti…

K shayd is se behtar (better) tu aur kuch ho nhi saktay k hum ek dosray ko as an life partner milay… I mean.. hum dono ko na tu badalna paray ga… nah hi ek dosray se daar na apray ga… bus thora sa moqa dayna hoga… tu kya humara fasla galta tha… yeah mein hi hoon koi aur nhi hai… tumhain kise bhi tarah k khauf mehsoos kerny ki zaroorat nhi hai… tumahin asa kyun lag raha hai k mein tumhain nhi samjho ga..hm…

She did smile very faintly yet her eyes smile more widely..he was right maaynk hi tu hai..n wht can be better than him being beside for the lifetime than anybody else.. knowing her parents.. he actually safe her … from God knows wht n wht… but above all she was glad tht he is so clear about wht he is doing is for them rather than anything else..

Nupur: thanks… he smiled

She will need time to get normal ..n he too need it..n they have all of tht for eachother..

Nupur: mayank…

Mayank: hmm

Nupur: per hum tumhain bolay gay kiya… she actually asked this so innocently that he felt like waoo wht to do

Mayank: yeah tu buhat bara masla hai.. yeah tu mein socha hi nhi

Nupur: haina …

Mayank: masla-e-kashmir ( Kashmir dispute) hai yeah… sirtaj (crown) kasa rahy ga…

Nupur: KYA.. she looked at him finding smirking at her… mayank tumahin mazak soch raha hai..

And with this he burst into laughter..

Mayank: aur nhi tu kiya…kitni barai problem hai na yeah.. aray baba jo jasay bolti thi wasy hi bolao.. kahan na no changes… tu arams se ..

Nupur: per ami.. woh tu ghusa hogi agar hum ny tumahra naam liya tu…

Mayanl: nupur…. Ab tum tai jan ki beti nhi hoo… meri biwi hoo….un se..un ki kisi bhi baat se daarny ki zroorat nhi hai samjhi… woh ek baar aagr yeah kahti hai k asa kero tu tum saaf yeahi kaho gi k hum ny asa hi kaha hai…. Un k huq ab tum per nhi chaly ga… samjhi.. tum wohi kero jo tumhara dil ker.. baqi mein khud dekh lo ga…thik hai…

Nupur: she nooded in yes…

Mayank: he moved towards his bed and sat there…. Yaar humain buaht bhook lag rahi hai.. kcuh kahny ko chaiy.. had hoti hai kisi ny shadi mein khany ko bhi nhi pocha…

Nupur: mein neechy se kuch lati hoon mjhy bhi bhook lag rahi hai… she was about to go when he hold her hand and pulled her beside him..

Mayank: deemgh karab hogaya hai.. is waqt hum dono mein se koi ek bhi bahar gaya nah.. tu masla-e-kashmir tu hum ny haal kerliya .. Palestine issue nhi ker pay gay…

Though she was still in daze at when he grip her hand and when he pulled her here.. she felt suthing awkward but than realize he has done that so many time so whts knew… but it felt sumthing new

Nupur: phir..

Mayank: tumhara bhai kab kam aay gay.. jab tak mein kuch kerta hoon.. tum ko nhi lagta tumahin is 40 kg vazan(weight) se khud ko azad ker layna chaiy… jitna tumhar weigh nhi ..inta tu drees k hai..

Nupur: han mein change kerti hoon…

Samrat who was siting in his room with a picture frame holding mayank nupur and him was in deep thought.. he knew very well mayank doesn't love her, and all he always prayed for her was a loving husband… he promised himself that he will find one for her, but he failed to do so, but one thing he knew mayank will never make nupur unhappy, but than what about all the happiness of a relationship, she may never demand any such thing but she do deserve all that.. the only thing he wants and prayed is that lord let them find true love in each other…

Just when he was thinking wht must be his sitter was going through now mayank's name flash on his screen

Samrat: kya hua nupur thik hai nah

Mayank: mein kya us ko kahany wala tha… ek min ek min.. tu rooh raha hai kya..

Samrat: mein koi nhi roh raha hoon …

Mayank: nhi yaar… yeah tu aj ki taaza karber hai…

Samrat: dekh mein tujhy ek baat bol raha hoon..agra nupur ko itni se bhi takleef hoi tu

Mayank: tu kya.. tu kya.. pehly tu mjhy tu yeah bata k mein nupur ko takleef doon ga…

Samrat: nhi magar phir bhi

Mayank: agar tu sach mein chaht hai k us ko koi takleef nah tu…KFC phone mein laga chukka hoon order aay ga tu us ko mera room tak pocha

Samrat: acha per tu meri baat..KYA.. tera deemgh karab hogay hai is waqt mein teray room mein..

Mayank: han tu… rehny ko nhi bola hai sirf kahan pocha.. humain bhook lagi hai yaar

Samrat: apki saasu ma ny charo taraf pehry behta rekhy hain… un k kamray k darwaza khola hai aur ap janty hai k woh ap k room k samny hai tu yeah kasay hoga…

Mayank: ek tu tumahri maa… ek kam kerna balcony k neechy ana waha se tu uper thora chahrna aur mein nechy hath dal k lay lo ga

Samrat: aur yeah mein kyun kero

Mayank: tameez se baat ker.. tu mera saala hai…

Samrat: acha tu tu ny woh missal nhi suni..sari khudai ek traf aur joro(wife) k bhai ek taraaf…

Mayank: tu tu us mein changes laya… sari khudai ek taraf aur teri behan k shoor ek taraf.. behass maat ker aagr KFC waly ny bell bajadi tu.. tu gaya.. order tery naam per hai

Samrat: KYAA.. teri tu… kerta hoon kuch….

………..

Having there dinner, trying to make things normal was another thing.. no matter how much she has prepared herself to face this, she cant just make the little hesitation still inside her to go away….

Mayank: tum so jaoo…hum fresh hoker atay hai..thik hai…

Nupur: hm..

He went inside, to clam his nerves to, and yet to let her be comfortable with herself for sumtime, he has sumhow made her relax, and he himself is hoping things to progress they are expecting ..

She looked around the room n sigh a bit, his room turning into there room what a life, so many beautiful moments have been celebrated in this room, her birthdays surprise parties, there full on fun moments and all… she settle on his ahha correction their bed and lye down, maybe it was so many days of hectic almost sleepless night or the clam nerves tht has occurred as she can feel him just the way he was, plus his feelings and clarifications about this marriage has somehow made her feel good, and made her feel this too, wht else good she can ask else being him beside her through out the life…

She lye and within few mins drift in to deep slumber, she was feeling so relaxed..As he came out of the washroom, she was fast asleep.. and somehow was looking very peaceful too.. good the first step of the awkwardness cleared ..and they are sure they will clear many more very smoothly…

He went to the cupboard n brought a quit, and covered her with it, and than switch on the AC, he will die without it, and she will shiver with cold…yet he didn't made it on the chilliest temperature as he love his nights to be, knowing she will strt sneezing… he giggle before closing his eyes, the first adjacent cums with the first night, and that wasn't so difficult ..is it..