~ArShi SS~ The Vampire Knight - chap 9 page 121 - Page 62

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Posted: 13 years ago
night...

am also asleep...

was posting akshi's b'day thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just came across this & totally loved this idea.You write really well.Is Khushi a vampire too? Because Rose seemed to reject her,but then Arnav is one too,na?That was HOT,you know. .Arnav biting Khushi 😳. .Now that the Master has found, wonder what'll happen now?!
Great update yaar 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well i know i said i'll edit my comment on page 83 or 84 but rather editing there i thought i'll start fresh =) =) So here goes my comment 😃

Actually thank you for updating this on Friday night because after watching friday epi my mind went blank for sometimes 😊 =D =D heheheheheheheee... 😆

And then i saw your update and read it then and there like there's no tomorrow but couldn't comment =) =) =)

Love this update Anky =) Awesome update really brilliant =) =) i love the way how you have portrayed Khushi in this update =) =) you have described her fears , her love for Arnav very brilliantly =) =) And Arnav too =)

Raizada being a Raizada on the death bed too 😃 that's superb =) =) and the only doubt i have is why did the Rose rejected Khushi =) ????

And i never thought that you'll let the master know about Khushi's scar so early =D =) =) =) =)

oh and Arnav drinking blood from Khushi {okay i know this sounds really disastrous but i couldn't put the scene to better words so "apologizing " for the words =D } i love that scene =) =) what i wanted to tell is you have pen it down nicely =) =)

And feel bad for Khushi and Arnav too =) =)

So what will Master do ?? What will Khushi do ??? and will Arnav leave her or ignore her ??? hope the latter won't happen =D
What will Arnav do ???? and why rose rejected Khushi ?? will she tell about that to Arnav?

Anky there are so many questions and i don't think these things can wait for another month so please update the next part soon k =) =)

Or as promised you'll get nightmares where a speco girl wearing a black dress and carrying a broom with some rotten tomatoes chanting ohohho A...N...K...Y... update the VK bwahhh 😆 😆 😆

okay jokes apart 😊 Awesome update 👏and update soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels

Mineee!

Yes, SUCCESS! Phew!
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Daaamn what an update!

I didn't know drinking blood could be so erotic! But I guess that's what ArHi are capable of!
You know, when I was sitting here waiting for you to update so I can res, my mom was yelling at me to go eat. Teri update ki liye maine bhooka baita tha.
But it was totally worth it!

I'm not going to bother showering you with praises about how fantabulous you are as a writer, I'm sure tu paak gaya sunthe sunthe.
So I love you bohot bohot saara! And you better update soon :)


You know I was scared about that only.. Whether people would ACTUALLY find it erotic or not!! Guess I passed the test! Phew!

Haahaahaa!! Chalo that makes me feel a lot better ki ppl actually wait for me to update! You know stupid I feel at times regarding writing!

Nahi nahi!! Its still a long way to go before I pakofy!! hehehe.. M gonna be a big praise-wh**e from now on!

Love you loads too Pria!!

But no updates for quite some time now.. Am a bit tied up with friends' birthdays all lined up next week!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

res


Anki di tuesday tak unres kar dungi...Plz...maf kariyo..
unres

Di yeah kya tha..Sach mai batao aapko aise khayal aate kaha hai..
Uff this was hell lot intersting to read.
It was great.

Yup sukking blood..gayi mere saans...




Mujhe nahi pata mujhe aise khyaal kahaan se aate hai!!haahaahaa!!


Teri saans ko wapis le aa Asma! Nahi toh aage ke updates kahaan se padhegi?

Thanks for the comment baby!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

okay so am feeling hell sleepy...

bt i better do the comment or else will not do it... Kuch bhi ho, tu comment karna toh nahi hi bhool sakti naa!!

and vaise bhi i am highly chidhchidha today... Awwiee jaan!! I hope you r good now!



so coming to the update... Hmmm.. Dats what I was waiting for..

so thank to clear out pehle se that bite didn't infect khushi... Haan teko dimaag mei rakh ke hi likha tha utna sa para.. Mujhe pata tha sabse pehle fudak fudak kar poochegi tu yeh!!

but do tell me the functioning of rose... i mean funda kya hai uske peeche kyunki agar jo likha hai puri tarah se sach hain then khushi is a vampire herself... is she???? Rose ki functioning pretty much explain kar di thi maine.. Ek aadh cheeze aur bataani baaki hai, dat i'll write as d story progresses.. Khushi being a vampire.. Pata nahi.. I was thinking of a weird angle.. Just wait n lemme write..

kyunki that wud be just perfect... i mean there wud be a connection.. and drawing a parallel with the show they r already interconnected somehow... Interconnected uss tareeke se nikalna zaruri nahi hai rey mere SS mei..

so the thing is it is making sense to me if khushi turns out to be vampire.. but kyun??? that am not able to get it.. bas sense bana rha hai... Dimaag ko shaant kar! :P

so he was sucking her blood out... sort of making out it seemed when u try to imagine it... It wasn't creepy naa?? I tried to really write it the best way I could!

coz it is well know fact that though he cannot fancy the object he is protecting... it goes against the laws.. and is forbidden but a forbidden thing is a must to do na... so though it is wrong... but u know...he cannot back away from her... Baahaaahaa!! Tu har baar concept ko re-explain kar maarti hai!!

the tagline of the show suited: "mohabbat dur jaane na de nafrat paas aane na de." Yup!!

haan so the feelings:

the self-loathe factor...

the feeling of saving him at all costs... no matter what it takes...

just giving it all... u know woh hindi poem mein aata hai: patanga aag ke paas aake jal jaata hai lekiin fir bhi aata hai...

khushi is aware the result cud be disastrous of this but still she can't keep herself away... Haan that is our Khushi of course!! Self sacrificing max!! :|

she has to save him.. she offered him... and this time arnav's self control got broke and the result... he bit her... and then the thing that followed... sensuous...

but he shoved her away... that had to be the painful portion... truly said after all he was a raizada...

so all in all superb update... worth the wait... So glad it was worth it!!

P.S: i don't know what i wrote in the comment... aadhi cheezein don't make sense to me y i wrote it...
but i wrote it... so plz adjust... ignore maar dena Koi naaa.. I love your comments always!!


BOLD!!! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: harinderparmar

dont make us wait that much for next update..plzzz!!! it was wonderful as always, though :)


I promise to not be that late again!! Thank you for the comment Harinder!


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Posted: 13 years ago
wow that update was amazing,

Want to read more, update really sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: lastdesire

heya

thnx 4 da pm dear:)
awsum update hehe



Thanks for the comment dear!! 😳

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