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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys am back with another update i wanna w=finish the ff soon as possible if i can cause i onlu have 2 weeks left lets say 14 days😭 and then after that i will leave and will not be able 2 cum on so want to gve this ff an ending before i go and i updatd my ss but i haven't gt enough likes so people who haven't read it will have to go there and read it please well talking about this update will try to finish it ASAP still never gt enough lyks not even 60+ plus oh well atleast i do send pm then to read it or not is up 2 u now meri talking band aur age ki update karo and yh this one will have a demand hosake toh fulfil it...

PART 21

Swayam : REY ! tum yaha tum kab aye yar tu toh ghar chala gaya tha na?😲

Rey coming in through the door: haa swayam but i thought kriya was alone so isiliye agaya lekin yaha toh pehle use company milgayi hai eyeing to swayam and arjun

Kriya chuckled a bit and mumbled: look like someone getting jealous 😆

Rey : tum ne kuch kaha raising his eyebrows at her?

Kriya thought to herself lets have some fun baby : umm ha woh mein kehrahi thi guys yaha kuch jal nahi raha hai ?

Everyone was lookin confused then they answered : NO😕

Kriya : nahi achaa mujhe laga kuch jalrah hai woh kya hai na pata nahi pichle 10 minute se is kamre mein jalne ki badbhu arahi hai ( looking at rey) oh well leave it i think its just me

Rey was about to say something when the doctor came in

Doctor: good mourning kriyaa how you feeling beta ?

Kriya : all good doctor and i feel perfectly well thankyou

Doctor was checking her wounds and tempreture if she was well to go home: ok you look perfectly well but yes you will need to come back in 1 week time to change your bandage ok and yh keep the wounds safe don't let anything touch it ok ?

Kriya : yes doctor so can i go home now plz ? pouting like a baby

Doctor : umm course u can go home but as i said look after yourself now ok he patted her head and went out

Kriya jumped out of bed in excitement and strted to jump out : YIPEEE I CAN GO HOME YS YES FINALLY MAN OUT OF THIS DAMN BORING HOSPITAL CHAL jaldi chal sheeetal i want to go shopping with you dragging her hand

Neha: aur hamara kya tum hamare saath nahi chalogi

Kriya smiled at her cutness and came up to her and pulled her cheeks: aisa kabhi hosakta hai ke mein tumhare bager jao chalo abhi and the rest of the girls come to and one thing BOYS NOT ALLOWED!😉

Vicky : whispered to nilesh bach gayye yaar warna hum bhi boared hojate hai na

Nilesh started to laugh and hi 5 vicky i know yaar warna inke saath saath humko bhi paka dete chal hum chalet hai lol😆

Rey : umm kriya tum abhi abhi hospital se nikli ho pehle ghar chalo ok

Kriya : wat but why i want to go out plese man

Arjun: kriya rey sahih keh hai keh raha hai pehle ghar chalet hai baad mein tum log shopping chale jana

Kriya: ok waise swayam taani kaha hai yaar I cant believe am saying this a]but am missing her

Swayam : shes at home kriya shes going to come and meet you at nani house

Kriya nodded and they all left for kriya house

Ok the story moves on 2 weeks later kriyaansh had come really close day by day everyone knew about kriyaansh nani knew that kriyaansh were together but kriya never knew that nani knoes about her and rey all the friends had really come close ayush met rey cousin priya atlast and priya and arjun are married and are really happy with their married life colledge final term was ending and everyone was deciding what to do next but nani she was deciding something else for kriya that would change kriya life totally and the 1 and only thing nani was thinking about is MARIDDGE!

Kriya knocked on her house door waiting for nani to open it she was shouting from outside: nani jaldi darwaza kholo please jaldi !

Nani opened the door she had a big smile on her face kriya was confused seeing nani like that

Kriya : hugging her nani from the back wahh kya baat hai nani aaj toh app bhot smile kara hi ho koi larka mila hai kya? teasing her

Nani hit her playfully: chal hat mere liye nahi balke tere liye

Kriya looked at her shocked and she shouted : WAT!!! Nani wat are you saying mein aur shaadi aap theek toh ho😲

Nani : haa mein bilkul theek hoon aur meine tumahre liye larka bhi dhoon liya hai

Kriya : but nani mein rey..😭

Nani: kya hua kriya dekho ek na ek din tujhe jana toh padega aur woh bohat acha khandan ka larka hai aur mein usse pehle se janti hoon woh tumhein bohot khush rakhe ga tumehin apni nani par badhosa nahi hai kya?

Kriya didn't want her nani to be upset : hai nani acha mein apne kamre mein jarahi hoon trying not to cry infront of her and she ran upto her room crying...

To be continued

Well here my update end will prob have another 3 4 parts don't know lets see what destiny decides for me well as i said above this update will have a demand so my demand is nxt update on page 30 so jaldi reach it to page 30 and ull get an update and common guys give me atleast 60 likes for this i deserve that much the quiker you complete demand the quiker i upte next

Precap : so whos this idiot who sent a proposal for kriya is it rey or someone else? To find out keep reading

I might even give this ff a sad ending u never know

Till then bye tc adios luv u all

DONT FOGET DEMANDD!!!

Aisha sully xx

Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
waiting for kriya to know the boy..

btw sweet..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
Amazing Update Aisha.Fab finally kriyaansh coming close to each orther.
Guess nani wants Kriyaansh marriage.
Thanks fgor pm.Do update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
awesome update...
2weeks passed,marriage is over,kriyansh coming closer..😃
the boy is definitely rey...nani aur kisse shadi karaegi...😉
and dont even think of sad ending...😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
owesome updatee
soo cute...kriya teasing rey😍
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
i think nani kriya aur rey ki shaadi plan kar rahi hai???? waiting 4 next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it...
rey jealous n kriya teasing...amazing...!!!😉
waiting for next part...update soon...😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
awesum update
luvd it
rey jealous 😆
kriya's teasing was fun
hope woh ladka rey hi ho
plzz no one else
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
Amazing part 👏...
Kria teasing Rey 😆...
Kria and Rey coming closer 😳...
Nani ne Kria keliye lardka dhond liya 😲...
Hope Rey hi ho 😉...
And ya is FF ko sad ending deni ki sochna bhi na 😡...
Update soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Oops . . . . Rey is jealous 😆
kuch jal raha hai kya?? 🤣
kriya ko abhi discharge mila hai aur abhi shopping jane ka soch rhi hai 🤪
she must be bored . . . Ofcourse 😛
ab naani kriyaansh se hi khush hai . . . . . To aur koi boy ko kyun bulayengi 🤢
aisha aise daraya mat kar . . . .
aur sad ending ke baare me to sochna bhi mat . . . . . 😡
cv's ne pehle hi sab ka dil tod diya hai . . . . Uska dukh aajtak mana rahe hai 😭

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