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Posted: 13 years ago
wow kriya love u rey ko to almost rula hi diya tha nd then kriyaansh moment was superb what a romance ha ... keep it up megical tha kriyaansh moment once again u roke it ha ... kya baat kya baat kya baat
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update ... Loved it... Kria angry on rey...awww kria teasing him by saying she dosen't like him...nice... Kriyaansh ka kiss...haye!!! Waiting for next part... Update soon...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
haaye meri jaan... Awesome update babe.. Loved it to the core... Finaly.. The 2nd last update.. Nd last update also cmng soon... First night moments haan... ;) ... Waiting for it... ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Cn u pm me d links f part 21 n 22 plz cz u havent updated in d index too
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys back with my final update for my kriya ff cant belive it s already ending well i hope you enjoyed it from the beginng to the end well here comes the final update hope u all lyk this part 2 read the previous part b4 this so ull get the story ok ab jaldii neeche padho and enjoy...

Kriya and rey house was looking like a wedding house , people were screaming from downstairs and some from upstairs and some couldn't even hear eachother , it was the day of kriyaansh wedding everyone was really happy and excited specially the gang they were junping here and there , the boys were with rey in his house getting him ready and the girls were with kriya getting her ready , mostly Sharon was with her... ok am going to split this scene in to two bits ...

KRIYA HOUSE :

The rituals were going to start at 6 in the evening and right now it was 4:30 , the baraat was going to come down her house at 5 30 ... kriya heart was pumping really fast , Sharon had called the best lady to dress kriya up for her wedding , because Sharon wanted kriya to look like the best bride , as time was ticking away kriya heart was beating more faster , she was really happy that finally she was marrying rey ..

Sharon : wow kriya your make up look so beautiful bas ab sirf dress pehna baaki hai and then your hair... and then you all ready waise blushing huh she started to tickle her..

Kriya : stop stop please don't Sharon please mera make up kharab hojayega , finally Sharon stopped she bent down in front of her and took kriya hand in her hand ...

Sharon : kriya mein tumhare liye bohot khush hoon ke tum mere best friend se shaadi kari ho aur mujhe pata hai tum dono ek dusrekilye sahi ho trust me aur rey tumhein bohot pyaar karega i can garyntee you that woh tumhara saath kabhi nahi chodega , kriya had tears in er eyes eventhough Sharon was her best friend she always looked up to her as her sister kriya hugged Sharon really tightly and they stayed like that for god knows how long...

Just then the other girls came running in ...

Neha : kriya ! tum ne abhi tak apna dress nahi pehna jaldi jao aur pehna kar aaooo jaooo , she pushed her in the washroom with her dress..

Kriya dress

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She came out wearing her red lengha , she looked so beautiful all the girls were standing their gob smaked

Vishaka : wow man kriya you look so HOT !

Neha : haa kriya tum bohot beautiful lagrahi ho

Simmie : yah man kriya agar mein larka hoti toh mein abhiii...(she streached her last word) kriya was standing their with her mouth open , but guy i wonder how rey can resist mann

Kriya : shut up simmie tub hi na

priya: wow this dress yeh tum par bohot achi lagrahi hai kriya


Rinnnie: akkhir design aur choose kisne kiya hai MEINE!

Sharon : haha kriya you look really nice man ! rey toh aaj rat bohot lucky hoga

Kriya was standing their blushing

Girls : awww!

Neha: showing neha your mendhi , kriya mendhi was really dark waah kriya tumhara rang toh bohot gehra aya hai , iska matlab rey tumse bohot pyaar karta hai , kriya blushed more

Sharon : waise shaadi ke baad tum haemin bhool toh nahi jaoogi na?

Kriya : ofcourse not Sharon

Vishaka: hum isse bhoolne hi nahi denge

Kriya : mein tum logo ko kabhi nahi bhool sakungi , tumlogo ne hamesha mera saath diya hai , hum ne ek saath itne pal guzare hain mein chati hoon ke tum har qadam mein mere saath chaloo jahan bhi jao mein chati hoon ke tum log mere saath hi raho , she had tears in her eyes so did the girls kriya opened her arms out and all the girls came together and they gave her a bone crushing hug

Simmie: whilst the girls were still in the hug kriya tumne abhi kaha ke tum chate ho ke hum tumhare saath har jaga rahe hai na

Kriya: hmmm toh ?

Simmie: matlab aaj tumhari aur rey ki suhaagrat hai , hum bhi join karle

Kriya smaked her head playfully and they all started to laugh..

Bas ab rey ke ghar chalo : his house wasn't that far from kriya just 10 minutes away...

Rey was getting ready he was wearing his sherwani , swayam was helping him..rey was wearing a very nice red and cream sherwani , he was really happy today swayam saw him smiling away he thought why not have some fun ...

Swayam : umm rey tu theek toh hai na?

Rey : haan mujhe kya hua hai mein bilkul theek hoon tu aise kyun pooch raha hai ?

Swayam : nahi tu aise smile karaha tha bina koyi baat kit oh ...

Vicky came in and behind him nil bharat and amra

Vicky: woh smile krta hi rahega aakhir iski shaadi jo ho rahi hai

Rey : tum logo koyi problem hai ke mein smile karha hoon kya yaar , mere shaadi horahi hai yaar aur woh bhi kriya ke saath..

Vicky : yaar mein pehle dafa dekhraha hoon ke koyi itna khush hota , kune mein girne keliye

Rey glared at him : kyun tu meri khushiyon ko nazar laga ra hai , tujhe shaadi nahi karni mujhe toh karni hai ok

Nilesh : yeh kya shad nahi karega , pata hai rey jab se teri shaadi ki tayariyan shuru hi hai na tab se neha iske peeche lagi rahi hai ke kaagu hum kab shaadi karene ( trying to imitate neha voice) aur yeh sirf ek hi jawab deta rehta hai .. bohot jald babu...

And they all started to laugh

Swayam : rey tu khush toh hai na putting his arm around rey shoulder

Rey : ofcourse yaar mein bohot khush hoon aaj mein kriya ke saath shadi karne jara ha hoon , mujhe aur kuch nahi chahiye

swayam : mein bhi tere liye bohot khush hoon yaar aur ha use hamesha khush rakhna apni best friend tumhein mein derha hoon

rey : abbey ha ha mere bhai

nilesh: lekin ajj shaddi ke saath satth tu kisi aur cheez keliye bhi itna khush hai

boys : kya?

Nilesh : guys suhaargraatt ! rey bata na kya karega aaj tu .. agar chahiye mein tumhein tips deta hoon ..

Rey : shut up nlesh and thankyou mujhe tere tips ki koyi zarurat nahi hai mujhe apni suhaagrat banana hai bigarni nahi hai ok

The boys started to laugh

Vicky:abbe nilesh tu kisse kehraha hai isne toh already plan karliya hoga apni suhaagraat ke barein mein haina mere bhai ...

Rey started to blush whilst the other guys were laughing ..

abhi : ok guys chalo its nearly 5:30 ghori toh read hai na

Rey : ghori ?

abhi : haan rey jis paar aaj tu betega tere horse par aur usi ke saath hum teri baraat leke jayenge

Rey a bit scred lol : guy mein sahih salamat phonch jaunga na ? raastein mein kuch hoga toh nahi na?

They all started to laugh

Bharat: aabe yaar kuch nahi hoga t uteri shaadi mein sahih tareeqe se phonche ga

Nilesh: ha agar khuch ho bhi gaya toh langre ho kar shaadi ki rasam karlena

They all started to laugh

Swayam : so guys?...

Boys: BARAT IS READY...!!!!

They all went down and made rey sit on the horse properly swayam thought to inform Sharon that they are leaving , he decided to call her , Sharon and the girls were sitting next to kriya on her bed , just then Sharon phone started to ring she saw the caller ID it was swayam she went in the corner to answer the call

Sharon : hey

Swayam : hey kaisi ho

Sharon : umm mein toh theek hoon lekin tumne yeh bolne keliye phone kiya hai ?

Swayam : nahi umm woh mein ne isiliye phone kiya ke hum bas nikalne wale hai , 10 15 min me phonch jayenge

Sharon : ok she was about to cut the call

Swayam : ruko ruko waise tumne wahi sari pehni hai na joh meine tumhein di thi ?

Sharon : umm woh tum khud akar dekhlo bye she cut the call

She turned toward the girls and shouted: BARAT NIKAL CHUKI HAI!!!!

Finally the barat came , all the girls came running down to look at rey , he was looking really handsome kriya looked at him from the top , rey saw her and he smiled at her she smiled at back and went inside her room blushing..

Sharon : wow rey you look really handsome today par mein sochra hi hoon itna kyun tayaar hoe ki zarurat hai

Rey : kyun nahi aaj meri shaadi hai

Sharon : oh mein bhool gayi thi you see isiliye phooch rahi thji

Rey glared at her and pulled her ear: nautanki band kar aur chal

Sharon : moved his hand away : ha ha mujhe pata hai tujhe shaddi bohot jaldi karni hai , just have patience ok.. swayam looked at her she was wearing the saree he had given her she was looking really preety ..

Neha: chalo andar chol guys bichare rey se saha nahi jaaata they all started to laugh and move in , swayam pulled Sharon back and whispered to her in her ears: tum bohot sundar lagrahi ho , thankyou pehnen keliye , Sharon started to blush and she put her hair behind her ear and went i holding swayam hand...

Teh riuals time had arrive rey was waiting for kriya to come down so they could start , Sharon and the girls went to get her , kriya slowly started to come down the stairs evwryone was looking at her in how beautiful she looked , nani had tears in her eyes , rey could sense kriya behind him he turned around and there he could see the love his life coming towards him, she was looking really beautiful he smiled at her and the girls made her sit next to him..

Finally all the rituals had started rey and kriya did what the pandit told them to do , finally rey had to make kriya wear her magalsutar , he came close to her and whispered to her whilst hooking it: tum bohot khoobsurat lagrahi ho , kriya blushed and looked down, after a while all the rituals had finished , they were taking aashirwaad from their elders , rey went to put his shoes on but they were missing

Rey : guys wheres my shoes jus then he looke dta the girls they had a mischievious smile playing on their face

Priya : lagta hai tumhare boys bhool gaye rasam ke bare mein , aur rey agar tumhein jhoote chahiye toh pehle paise de do

Abhi: kisne kaha ke hum rasam bhool gaye hai , pehle tum log jhoote toh le kar aoo

Sharon : girls go and get the shoes , the girls went to look for the shoes but they couldn't find it they came back with sad faces

Sharon : kya hua girls jhoote kaha hai

Vishaka: they are not there dude pata nahi kaha then she looked at the boys.. in logo ne chupaya hoga

Vicky: exactly girls tum logo ko cheese chupana ata nahi hai , tum logo ne kaha chupaya tha kitchen mein i mean who does that

Neha: Vicky pleas ehumein shoes wapas de do please proper trying to make him fall for it

Nilesh pushed Vicky back : no aur neha yeh sab kuch chalne wala nahi hai

The girls started to fight with the boys , Sharon took this as an advantage to go and look for the shoes , swayam saw this to but he never made it obvious he wanted Sharon to win and see that smile on her face so it let it be , after 5 min Sharon came running with the shoes in her hand: JHOOTE MILGAYYE GUYS!!

All the girls started to jump with excitement : PAISE DO REY !

Rey: but i have nothing on me

Sharon : rey thats not fair rasam hai nibaho warna nange paao chale jana

Nani came to them and joined the girls: haan rey paise toh tumhein dene hi padenge

Ayush : kyun de rey bhai paise pehle jhoote hum ne liye the toh tum logo ko koyi paise nahi milenge

Rey : i love you ayush dekha ! pointing at the girls

Kriya : ayush abhi jhoote larkiyon ke paas hai , rey unhein paise do

Rey : kriya tum bhi?

Girls: HA WOH BHI, rey had to give up he took out 10 thousand rupees and gave it to them , after that was the bidaai rasam , kriya was crying a lot but soon all that was done the gang went with rey to his house , all the house rasam the anguti thing rice thing etc was all done now it was kriyaansh time but our naughty gang had to stop him ...

Vicky: abe rey tu kaha jaraha hai itni bhi jaldi kya hai ?

Rey : mujhe neend arahi hai mein kamre mein jara ha hoon

Vicky: abe chal nayaar khana khate hai , games khelte hai aaj teri shaadi ki pehli raat hai hamare saah bitana winking at others

Rey : no Vicky mujhe kriya ke saath i mean

Gang: ohhh!!!

Sharon : rey tum apne best friend ko chod kar jaaoge meri baat nahi suno ge

Rey was getting frustrated: sununga na Sharon lekin KAL ok ab mujhe jana hai tum logo ko khelna hi toh khelo ok ...

And he ran up to his room before anyone could say anything they screamed from downstairs: GD LUCK REY!

Neha and vishaka were sitting with kriya in the room , they saw rey coming in they knew they had to leave kriya now : they whispered to kriya GOOD LUCK and they ran away from their laughing.

Rey closed the door behind them and locked it , kriya heart beat was rising , she was feeling very uncomfortable but she knew there was no running away today , today she had to give herself to rey , rey walked up to her and gave his hand out , she slided her hand in his , rey took her to the balcony and he stood there with his arms around kriya waist: pata hi kriya aaj mein bohot khush hoon , finally tum meri ho sirf meri , tum aaj bohot sundar lagrahi ho itni sundar ke chand bhi sharmajaye , kriya started to blush rey turned kriya around facing him he came close and gave kriya a peck on her cheeks kriya heart beat was rising she quickly left from rey hold and ran to the other side of the room

Rey : sorry kriya but aaj koyi bhagne ka chance nahi hai he went behind kriya put her palu down and took it off and left it on the couch , he moved her hair to the side , and opened up her dori , kriya couldn't take it she quickly hugged rey , rey picked her up and took her to the bed and made her lie down, kriya eyes were closed all this time rey started to take her jewleery off first her necklace then her earings and then her bangles evertime hw ould take her jewlerry off he would give a kiss on that place then he came forward and started to plant kisses on kriya face first her eyes then her nose then her cheeks and finally her lips he kissed her really passionately kriya joined into , she let rey explore through her mouth they tongue twisted with each other and they both kissed to their ernest , rey left that after a bit but he carried on going down he kissed her on her throat and started to plant kisses downwards rey moved his other hand around]d her waist and started to make design on her waist with his other arm he opened kriya dori from the back kriya gasped this made rey even more wild he slowly started to take her top off , and chucking it to the side, kriya was unbuttoning his sherani , rey holded her with it he took it off and moved it away from there , rey moved down to her stomach he started licking her navel and her belly button kriya was moaning she had her hand in rey hair she couldn't take it no more she pulled rey up with his hair and kissed him she went on top of him she kissed his chest and his cheeks and bit him on his ear , she started to take off his trousers , and finally she was successful in it rey went on top of her and kissed her on her stomach he wanted to make his way in her but he was waiting for kriya to give him a green signal finally , she parted her legs and she just freed herself to rey , rey understood that she was ready for it , he slowly made his way through giving kriya sweet pains , kriya had tears coming down her eyes but she was happy that today she was all rey and no one could separate them after when they were both were tired rey left her and slept next to her , he wiped kriya tears and kissed her on her for head : than kyou for giving me this and thank you for coming in my life , kriya cuddled in to him and she gave him a peck on his lips and whispered to him : i love you rey ... rey slept their smiling away with his love of his life in his arms : I LOVE YOU TOO!

The night left them alone the moonlight shone away from them , and kriyaansh slept in eachothers arms...

Khatam finally here you go guys i finished my ff off before i left well i hope you all enjoye dit i was a bit shy in writing the suhagraat moment but i wrote what i could! Agar acha nah laga ho toh sorry but i tried.. so here all my writing come to an end i enjoyed writing this and my others when i come back if i can i will write another 1 , but till then byee adios meet you lot all later ...

Love you all aisha sully xx

Pms on the way

sharon saree


Edited by aishasully - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update Aisha

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
haye itni morning main itni romentic update woow
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m felling shy while reading this so i cam imagin how's u felling when writting ...
but m smiling lika an idiot after reading this ...
i hope after ur break u start a new season of kriyaansh
nd m waiting for that ...
love u for this beautiful ff ...
its megical ...
u roke it ...
kya baat kya baat kya baat ...
keep it up
m waiting for next ff/ss og ur's ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update... Loved it... Gang teasing kriyaansh was awesome... Finally dey r married...yay!!! N deir suhaagraat was sensuous n hot... Fab ending!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing one do atart something soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ending aisha...expecting more ffs from u...thanks 4 the pm...😊

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