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Posted: 13 years ago
its amazing update,,,,luv d y gang teasing rey😆😆

waiting 4 nxt update😍😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Heyy guyss wassupp here is the next update npothng plaaned job hi dimaag mein ayega wahi likhungi toh agar acha nah ho to marna mat plz ha , well this update i will finsh by Saturday or Sunday whenever i get time but all my updates will finish by Sunday , BUT the d3 one will continue ... don't worry be happy lol now coming to the update hope you guys enjoy it...

Part 23..

Kriya : REY AAP!

Rey smiled mischeviuosly and winked at her , kriya was in no mood of messing about she was really angry with rey , all she wanted to do right now was to get up and strangle him but she had to control herself , she didn't want to create any situation in front of his family..., she even saw swayam she could tell swayam was trying to control his laugh she couldn't believe he was even with rey in all this she was really angry with swayam.

Nani : kriya toh larka kaisa laga she started to laugh

Kriya thought in he rmind: wow rey tumne poori raat mujhe rulaya aur khud maza karahe the, bohot maza aya na aap ko ab aap dekho mein kya karti hoon . chal kriya shru hoja dekhade inhein upna K wala effect , you just watch mein app ki kaise band bajati hoon ..

Nani : kriya use dekhti hi rahogi ya jawab bhi dogi...

Kriya : ha ha nani larka ... bohot hi SARUUU hai eww nani aapke tast ko kya hogaya inke baal do dekho aise lagraha hai jaise inhein koyi electrick shock diya gaya ho , aur inki body toh dekho aap ko pata nahi mujhe salman khan jaisa lark chahiye tha built body, handsome and dashin 3 in 1 hai woh aur yeh yuk ayush tumhein nahi pata ki meri taste kaisi hai muje tumse umeed nahi thi ha( winking at him indicating him to play along) rey was thinking what the hell kriya was doing he was so shocked that kriya was saying all this about him .. nani i don't like this guy am sorry

Ayush : oh sorry di mujhe nahi pata tha ap ko yeh larka pasand nahi ayega , koyi baat nahi hum koyi aur dhoondlenege aap ke liye no worries apke liye toh larko ki line khadi hojayegi ..

Swayam : kriya yeh tum kya kehrahi ho?

Kriya: kya kehrahi hoon swayam am saying the truth

Rey: umm kriya can i talk to you for a second if you don't mind umm nani can i take her?

Kriya : no you cant nai say no to him i don't want to talk to him when i don't like him

Nani : ha lejoa rey she probably like you if you talk to her

Rey : thankyou nani ,he took kriya hand and pulled her into her room before she could say anything , kriya knew what he was going to say to her , but she was still angry with him she wont give in that easily ..

Rey closed the door behind and befor kriya could say anything he started: what happened kriya ? yeh tum bahar kya kehrahi thi that you don't like me an all ? kyun kriya ..

Kriya : because i don't rey i mean reyaansh i like some one else.

Rey: really so whos that boy that you like and yu haven't told me about him?

Kriya : his name reyaansh i mean rey my rey ..

Rey: toh phir mein kaun hoon?

Kriya : i don't know

Rey : kriya mein hi tumhara rey hoon trying to hide his laugh

Kriya : no reyaansh tum mere rey nahi ho kyunke agar tum mere rey hote toh tum kal raat ko mera phone utha the, pata hai mein kal kitma ro rahi thi lekin tumhein koyi fikar nahi hai , accha tum phone nahi utha sakte the lekin mujhe ek SMS toh karsakte the na lekin nahi woh bhi nahi , aur phir tum kehte ho ke tum mere rey ho , tum itni bari baat mujhse nahi chupate lgta hai rey tum mujhse pyaar hi nahi karte kyun ke agar tum karte toh aisa nahi karte jot um ne aaj kiya hai ... mein kitna dar gayi thi ke mein ko kya bolungi , kaise jawab dungi lekin nahi aap toh maze karahe the app toh ... rey couldn't take her non stop talking anymore he had to stop it and the only thing he could think at that time was to kiss her he just forcefully put his lips on hers and made her shut up kriya was trying to push him away because she was relaly angry with him , but our rey was very strong he held her arms and continued kissing kriya never reaqcted back she didn't want it , rey also bit her lower lip which hurt kriya ,she had tears coming dow her eyes , soon she also started to give in and kissed him because she was hurt a lot and she wanted to show it throught the kiss she kissed rey very passionetley but she bit him to , rey never minded because she had the right to be angry , after a while they both left eachotehr and they joined their forheads together

Rey : am sorry kriya i just wanted to surprise you ( he whisperd to her ) kriya had tears falling down her eyes rey wiped them and bent down infron of her and took a ring out from his pocket..


Rey : will you marry me kriya ?will you be my partner for life? Kriya nodded her head and she bent down infront of him and gave him a kiss on his cheeks, rey made her wear the ring and kissed her hand , kriya blushed a bit and said: please rey ayende mere saath aisa kabhi mat karna , mein tumhein nahi khona chat i only want you to be mine and she gave a peck on his lips...

Finally everyone was happy rey had proposed kriya , a few romantic moments here and there the gang also came and started to congratulate them but now it was time for marridge they fized the date for two days later , the gang were proper teasing them , kriyaansh were very happy after all the hurdles and problems they finally going to be one...

Sharon : umm excuse me guys before anyone says anything me and my 2 girls meaning rinnie and simmie are going to be the wedding planner and thats full and final

Neha: wat about me Sharon hum toh kriya ke friends hai na?

Sharon : umm theek hai tum bhi help karlena but i hope rey and kriya do t mind after all meri best friend ki shaadi jo horahi hai is trhat ok

Kriyaansh nodded and said : YES TOGETHER

Vicky : SO GUYS WEDINNG PLANNING SHURU !!!!!!

Ok guys this is it the wedding planning i will only write the next update just the actual wedding not rasams sorry no time but i will also add the suhagraat moment so guys wait for the next part

Accha tha ya bura ? let me know ok

And don't forget to click the lick button and comment i wnat LONG COMMENTS PLEASEE!

Precap : WEEDDDING !

Pms will be sent tomrrrow!

some pf you were asking me what kriya was wearing so here is her dresss...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update


Thanks for the pm


Loved the way Kriya said my Rey




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Posted: 13 years ago
congrats on d new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update aisha.
loved it mind blowing
yay he proposed her
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
res😃iss baar pakka unres karungi😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesme update


atlast rey proposed kria


update soon
Edited by dildostidance01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
rey proposed kriya and she said yes...😆..thanks 4 the pm...waiting 4 the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part 👏...
Kria teasing Rey 😆...
Kria ko chup karane keliye seedha kiss 😉...
Haye Rey proposed Kria 😍...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Finally he propose her
Waiting for next part

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