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sam88

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Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

loved it

hope u come up wth some new ff

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#862

Smita, a scintillating update that had everything... loved how all the loose ends have been tied up into a neat whole! arnav feeling a sense of calmness and completeness and khushi feeling shy was heart-warming... arnav giving in to the temptation of seeing khushi's eyes after their night of togetherness and her reaction to his touch waking her up were just adorable 😍! her confusion at her own wild abandonment and wantonnessin bed was nicely drawn... thank god she's no shrinking violet! what an image of satisfaction: "Good...", he said, his voice taking on the satisfied purr of a cat that had been fed well recently. I could imagine arnav licking his lips!

arnav asking if khushi was alright and her gesture of placing his hand over her heart was sweet! looks like arnav just wants to spend most of his time in bed cuddled up with his wife!

nice that they've moved to a new house where they can all make new memories! and he has roses in his garden just for her... he has finally learned to value simple pleasures... returning her mother's jewellery to her and her 'shukriya' was really moving

knew anand and anjali were destined to be together... he's really returned to the raizadas some sense of closure and given them serenity by naming that shelter after gauri... thus, she would always be associated with a worthwhile cause and, in a way, be of help to others... that was a poignant scene... what a beautiful sentiment: How could he thank this man for taking his mother out of the damned Sheesh Mahal and giving her a home in this bright, airy, spacious, happy house? ..."She will be here always. With her daughter. With other women who need her shelter." the understated manner in which you highlight emotions is your strong suit, Smita! 👏

have always loved the death-grip khushi has on arnav's shirt collar, so thank you for bringing all those scenes to mind!

eager for any future stories you might be coming up with... wouldn't mind reading your take, be it an OS or an FF, on their married life!

we fanatic fans can't do without a daily dose of your writing.

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mandira1

@mandira1

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

This whole FF has been written beautifully and each chapter everyday made me even more eager to read the next!

I really do hope you start another FF soon😊

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Ashavi

@Ashavi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#864

i am a big fan of ur writting skill...if only our CVs had thought something so sensible...keep up ur gud work...waiting for ur next works...

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Suchita2012

@Suchita2012

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

Dear Smita,

Thanks for all your lovely updates. I read all your FF's
including part 59 (last). Each and every update was
mind blowing. I cud just visualize those scenes
while reading. I wish you would continue this
series. Anyways thanks for your lovely updates.
Keep writing 👏👍🏼

Warm Regards,

Suchita

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Filmyshilmy

@dennisdmenace

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#866

loved it. true to its name...could not live without reading d updates everyday.

keep writing.👏

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#867

Smita:
Love the end or shall we say beginning of happiness in the Raizada-Gupta households.
you're an absolutely wonderful story-writer. You held our interest from beginning to end of these 59 chapters, never faltering once. I appreciate so much that you're sharing your talent with us.
Maybe now we can have a series about Arnav's and Khushi's pregnancy...😉 I know I'm greedy.😆 Actually I'm so used to getting up in the morning here and reading a new chapter that i'll probably have some withdrawals. 😉 Please PM me when you start another story. thank you again

Gandhari

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#868

Lady, you are one heck of a writer. A real gem. Always made me check your FF first and tell you - your knack for story telling shows you are gifted. As one of the readers Meeya, suggested you better get a film done on this with the same cast. I would like to compliment you for putting all appropriate pics and helping us to alleviate our imagination. I really appreciate all your efforts towards minor details.

I was really amazed to read your previous FF and this, though on the same topic is really varied. Hats off to you and your writing skills!

What more! My daughter too looks forward to your writing.

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SyedaFaiza

@SyedaFaiza

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#869

FF: Living Without You

awsome

beautiful

m crying

i dont want it to b end

its not an ff for me

its my love

thanks 4 giving us a beautiful love

PLXXX

CONTINUE IT

PLXX JUST 10 MORE PARTS AS

ARNAV AS A FATHER

KHUSHI AS MOTHER OF NEW BORN

PLXXX

Edited by SyedaFaiza - 13 years ago

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#870

my eyes are still misty as i type...this FF has once again reinforced my belief in happy endings...i would like to thank you from the bottom of my heart for presenting this amazing piece of work to your readers...you know, in the face of too much realism of this age we need such stories to remind ourselves that "happily ever afters", much like the ones in the fairy tales that we enjoyed as kids, are still possible in our lives...this FF has been a fairytale for me...i will reading this again, may be from this evening onwards itself...in fact i'll continue to re-read it again & again for some time now ( i honestly don't know exactly how many times, i am so bloody addicted!!)...so once for again, thank you...😊

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