FF: Living Without You: 4: Part 59 (Last) Updated

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nims6

@nims6

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#611

what can i say reading your update...every time i read it ,it makes me speechless...it was beautifully written ...i just love the feeling i get after reading it...loved it..

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Lovely update..Cant wait for the wedding..

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Smita, a new love story seems to be blooming! looove your detailed descriptions, accompanied by the images, that help us visualise the various rituals, decorations, etc and other aspects of the story... mamaji teasing mamiji brings out the love and comfort level they share...

of course, arnavji has eyes only on khushi... love how subtly and in a line or two you bring out the passion and desire lying just beneath the surface in the arnav-khushi relationship... just a word or a look or an action and the page nearly combusts! the whole latter half of the story was just hot, increasing the temperature here by a few degrees!

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Manju

@Drwho

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#614

Till tonight for Arnav and Khushi and till the next update for us!!!

Beautiful chapter, absolutely breathtaking!!

And mind blowing pictures, what a lovely back drop to the wedding, auspicious Diwali

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Paramjit

@Paramjit

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#615

Beautiful update eagerly waiting for the next update. please update soon.

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snoopy84

@snoopy84

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#616

great update love how he whispered till tonight, cant wait for the next update

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Mandy

@MrDarcyfan

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Till tonight ha? Arnav sounds like he has a big night planned! :)
Was waiting for your update! Now can't wait for the wedding and suhaag raat!

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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#618

👏Hats off, Smita.

What an update..breathtaking, heartwarming, simply adorable. Along with the super interplay between an ardent Arnav and Khushi you have beautifully interwoven the innocent by-play between Anand and Anjali..Wanna hug you for the budding romance, its so lovely..🤗

Do you know, I cant wait to read your updates? And when I do, I re read them again and again...coz they touch my heart !

Keep it up!⭐️

Smitten with Smita's story.. 😆

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