Originally posted by: Himaniahir
Love it thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: basket_101
nice part!
loved the swayam-sharon convoof course yeh dono hai toh pehle fight hi karege =Peager to read more!thanks a lot for the pmand do cont sooon=D
Originally posted by: cenation123
awesome concept
swaron ki ladaayi se shuruaat hehehehe
finally u decided to update
awesome update hehe bechaara rey kria ko pareshaan kar diya lol
update next part soon
Originally posted by: kriyansh24
rey messed up big time...
kriya patao aandolan shuru ho gaya
Originally posted by: marauder
Seriously awesome start. It felt i was watching D3 from start with a completely new begining. You have kept the writing very natural and real . Kudos for it. Loved the Swayam and Sharon conversation. In dono ka to fight ke bina sayad kabhi pet hi nahi bharta . Kriya and Rey first meeting was also cute. And please update soon.
Originally posted by: luv_arsha
awesome part...loved it very much
swaron first meet and a fight for parking place hahahaand kriyansh first meet and rey messed up every thing...interestingwaiting eagerly for next partcontinue soon
Originally posted by: aishasully
nyc 1 medha really cute loved it yaar i enjoyed this update waiting for next 1 tik tok tik tok
Originally posted by: mEgical_arsha
Wowwwiiieee this is just Amazing girl !!!!
Keep it up !!!!Eagerly waiting to read more of ur wrks... :D
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