OS: Don't Let Go of Me, Khushi!

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Smita, simply beautiful... felt a pang in my heart on reading of khushi's fear that arnav would slip away in the night leaving her behind... her reasoning that if she lay across his body he wouldn't be able to dislodge her, spoke of her immense fear of losing him again... heart-rending... those last words spoken by arnav to khushi really made my day!

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bella39

@bella39

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Beautiful OS ! Loved it!

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Sharmila

@spsharmila

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Simply beautiful...please continue 🤗

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Josupra

@Josupra

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Loved it.. Hope something similar happens in the show soon

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anvixoxo

@anvixoxo

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Posted: 13 years ago

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subiscs

@subiscs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

maardaala!!!! !!!smitaaa...awesome ya!!!🤗

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!

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ssatny

@ssatny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Beautiful!.

I actually started reading this OS without first seeing who the writer is ( Does not reflect well on me ). But half way thru I knew it was you; I just had to scroll up to see who the author was - and lo and behold - it was you. You have a very distinctive quality of detailing your scenes. I love it.