OS: Don't Let Go of Me, Khushi!

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@pepples_joy

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Great... Superb update...😛😛😊

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

loved it awesome os very beautiful loved it loved how the came for him and took care of him loved the os thanks for the pm

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Well Smita, now i can officially say iam addicted to ur writting, at the end of almost every one of ur updates o OSs i give a heartfelt sigh😍. this was so beautifully written. I believe i have already said this sometime before that u weave a web of such beautiful dreams that every girl loves to feel with her hubby, partner or (like us) about our prince charming. I would so love to see Arnav looking at Khushi, while tending to his every needs and remembering how much she had suffered in his hands, it will be enough redemption for me at least.

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vishkhush

@vishkhush

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

I loved the level of detail you have provided...NK and Mama going to get the doctor, getting casual clothes...You have thought this through and I liked it!! Nice work! Good language and style.

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

aweee... beautiful... you're backkk... a new FF will be coming soon i hope :)

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purplekid

@purplekid

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

That was perfect! I loved it!

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Wow!! Loved it totally!! N d last line was so touching..d whole os was vry swt,vry realistic..good job! Hope we gt to c smthn like dis in future on d show😊