Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#731

A very beautifully written chapter!

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peepli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#732

This was so beautiful..have no other words to describe what you have written..awesome, great, wonderful etc just don't describe it coz it was simply beautiful...you have created a different wOrld with your portrayal of the characters, their emotions.the surroundings that one can't help feel as though we ve been transported into Whole different world

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insanelycrazy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#733

ashna's adorable! she knows her mother so bloody well! i mean i'd never noticed if somebody has or hasn't worn a particular colour.. lol khushi's guilt on being caught was adorable. and being the mother duhh she won't accept it, she'll just hit her child! lol and the ashna-khushi part was really emotional

u brought back the diwali night so beautifully!! it was gorgeous how you explained their feelings and the elimination of lavanya during their moment. its amazing how even after all this while, they remember that night with such explicit details. and the fondness intact with the memory just proves how they're still vry much in love after being apart for these many years.

ashna-arnav parts were adorable. it was cute how gobsmacked ashna was after hearing the ASR who she admires wants a ride on her bike. that was the cutest part in both the updates, especially how arnav was all scared and ashna just kept speeding in the streets of the city.

i love the sense of imagery you create with this piece of writing. its simply beautiful. the last part where Khushi's goes to arnav's room to sleep next to him. and how these two have this silent kind of understanding between themselves. gorgeous!

amazing updates!!

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manjha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#734

Such a beautiful update Sona, like always! I dont know how to describe your writing cause its so good but the word that comes to my mind is elegant and poised! You seriously outdo yourself every time! Coming back to the story, this was so adorable how he kissed her palms after she fed him and just all those sparks are coming back to them! I really like how Khushi wants to make this work, for Aashna but also for herself deep down! I can sense Arnav wants to do the same... Haha I loved the Khushi NK and Arnav scene! Khushi is adorable with her thoughts! Aashna's question just made me wanna give her a tight hug! The last part was just blissful, how she went and found solace in Arnav's arms! Superb update!

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Akanksha-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#735

Im just loving this FF with every update. Very beautiful update😊

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 13 years ago

#736

Started reading...

Chapter 1

The first chapter revealed a lot but kept a lot under covers as well :-)

So Khushi is in touch with NK. Does that translate in to no touch with the Raizadas or no contact with a particular Raizada?

We always want NK with La. Let us see who has he brought with him :-)

Off to read the next chapter :-)

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lazyleaves

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 2

So it was Arnav indeed :-)

Now now there is still so much mystery left. There wasnt animosity between them. But a lot of pain which indicates that they left each other mutually.

Ashna will get her father but it seems that Arnav is unaware about his daughter's existence.

Going to read the next chapter

Edited by lazyleaves - 13 years ago