Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#601

👍🏼superb I really have no words 2 appreciate further bcoz this was beautifully written. Just 👏

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Shruti

@addicted2ksg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#602

Awww I loved this part!! Loved seeing their old flare come back :) Super cute! And how adorable was Aashna in this <3

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smithasrk

@smithasrk

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#603

Arnav on a cycle????????😆Loved it👏

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sruthirishi

@sruthirishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#604

BEAUTIFUL!!!

loving d father-daughter bonding..

arnav on a cycle...OMG! jus can't imagine

"Ehh...umm, the previous bottle of the shampoo'had finished," -🤣 🤣 i jus loved d explaination

kushi's concern over arnav never changes...d' thanks' was cute.

Edited by sruthirishi - 13 years ago

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#605

I like this subtle but so pronounced romance between them. And that scene - you know which.. I can't imagine Arnav Singh Raizada sitting at the back of a bicycle.. Oh..that's funny. Lovely!

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#606

lol loved it

loved it

dat was beauttiiiful

thnks for update n pm 🤗

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#607

Ah Gosh! This is beautiful!

You know, I cant really think this Arnav and Kushi are bit older! The same twinkle the same dhak dhak the same blush! Which all makes me go RED!

I wish I to be the Aashna there to see this divine couples untold and unshown love to others!

It was beautiful - Again when he spotted the familiar twinkle just like Kushi's in his daughters eyes

It was beautiful - Again when NK did not enquire for whom the food was packed.

It was damn beautiful - When she herself fed him the food!

It was uttermost beautiful - When the DAD ride at back seat of his daughter's old bicycle!

GOSH!

Beautiful!

Thanks for the pm!

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FlamingsOfLove

@FlamingsOfLove

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#608

Extremely amazing update love u !

U should be a writer !

Love u

Amazing work! Lovely discription as as always !

Love

Hira

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#609

awww...it was just beautiful.! 😳

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#610

Sona kitna Sona hai,

Sone jaisa tera Mann...

LOL just one of my fav songs to start off the comment...and which involves your name!!

Okay, so this was beautiful for a lot of reasons.

Aashna noticing how her mother is getting dressed, it shows how Khushi have been through the years of separation from him, and now that when he is here, she has all the female instincts to look good in front of him, for him, to look at the inexplicable feeling clouding over his eyes every time he looks at her...it was so beautiful the way you paralleled the scene with the Diwali kiss one.

Arnav sitting on the bicycle, going with Aashna almost scared, and pants folded till knees...this made me laugh hard Sona, this was so funny, cant ever imagine Arnav doing that.

The last part, the care and concern of a wife for her husband, of a lover, all evident in her actions. Loved all of the scene, the licking of her fingers, the blushes on her cheeks, wow so romantic everything made my heart beat faster...

Thanks for the PM