Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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@PersieV

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#451

Wow amazing chapter!

I wonder what Arnav's reaction will be?

And why did he make her leave!

Edited by Aveiro - 13 years ago

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#452

So Arnav now has it cop firmed by Khushi that they have a daughter...wonder how he truely feels about this????? And what about when she finds out that he is her father... Can't wait for that twist to hit her life!!!!

Thanks for PM

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Becs

@Becs

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#453

Oh such a beautiful update! Sad but very touching and emotional.

Loved it!

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Sarina2012

@Sarina2012

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

How u do it is always amazing... u write such deep and soulful love stories. ones which are so sad with want and need... absolutely mindblowing!!!

3 different stories and 3 different characterizations.. yet each so beautiful and so amazing (am runnign short of words)

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#455

You updated!!!! Yay!!!!
Firstly I want to say that you are one of the best writers of if...and I eagerly wait for your updates...:)

And coming to the update...I'm stumped!
Great update...khushi's still so much in LOVE!!!
But I still have so many questions...in my mind...
This is a beautiful FF...
Arnav now knows bout ashna...it's going to get exciting...
Can't wait...:)

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#456

👏 Intense update.

And though she might have dreamt or thought about the meaning of those weighted words in her life, every night Khushi would lie awake on her bed, imagine him there with her and over and over she'd whisper into the air, "I love you". That was heartbreaking. 🥺

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#457

That was such an intense chapter~ but one of my fav scenes :3

those three words seem so short but so powerful esp the way u expressed them! truly an awesome update :)

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Abi

@PepsiGirl101

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#458

The intensity of love was so beautifully expressed in your update. Loved it!

-Abi <3

P.S. Just wanted to let you know I will be inactive for 2 months but please do keep PMing me and I will definitely read and comment on each chapter!!!

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Skye.

@Skye.

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#459

I loveee this FF!!!!! The way u got this image going of these characters is amazinggg!! Plzzz update soonnn!!!

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#460

They still have such fiery and all consuming chemistry. Everything fades into oblivion when they are in the same space. You can't really have any definition for this couple

I like how you down played the entire truth about Aashna. Not creating a big fuss about it. Weaving the truth with those small gestures of taking care of his needs, buying something which she had firmly left in past and him allowing her space and still aching to be with her. I was like a song.

Couple of lines in the last paragraph reminded me of a few lines of a Rabindrasangeet:

Tumi robe nirobe , hridoye momo ,

Tumi robe nirobe ,

Jaagibe ekaki tobo koruno aakhii ,

Tobo oncholo chhayaa more rohibe dhaaki ,

Momo dukkho bedono , momo shokolo shopono ,

Tumi bhoribe shourobhe ,

Nishithini shomo ,

Tumi robe nirobe ...

I'm sorry, I can't find a proper translation. When I do,I'll post it.