Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#471

That was so, so, SO beautifully written!

I am actually speechless after reading it! Great work! Seriously, the way you described every emotion of longing, desire, sadness, love...it was GREAT!

I could visualise the entire thing taking place, starting from Khushi stepping into Arnav's room, to her walking out of the bathroom with the green sari. The last few paragraphs were amazingly well written.

When Khushi closed her eyes, waiting for Arnav to place his hand on hers, to give her the support, the love, I held my breath eagerly waiting to know what he did.

And then when she opened them realising he had walked away, my heart deflated just a bit.

Amazing work! Loving the way you are progressing! :)

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Sanjana

@shona_sanju

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#472

OMG...this wz just...BEAUTIFUL😍...so much love..passion..❤️

i soo..want to give u a hug for this update...well done..!!🤗

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#473

So finally he knows that Aashna is his daughter ! Very well written ...

Thanks for the PM ...

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#474

close yet distant.. they want to do so much for each other but just cant..

awesome chapter!! Loved how you wrote about their emotions!!

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#475

Unbelievable...I was reluctant to read a story of separation for so long...only that u were writing this made me read...don't mind I'm a sucker for HEA...n u are doing a fab job this update was too good to be true ...there is no love like true love...khushi was devoid of colors for so long immediately fetches one in red sugar free sachets oh the detailing was perfect the kitchen scene fantastic waiting to read more...

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@.1.1.1.1

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#476

simply brilliant, love your update, plz write some more😊

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varsha komuravelli

@kvarsha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#477

its simply mindblowing updateee...

i loved the uexpressed their feelinggsss...

wanting to touch but canttt...

wanting to ne togetherr canntt...

way is khush suffereingg is baddd...

arnav why r u doing i this i kow even ur suffereing...

ufff these emotions diffi to controlll...

updatee soon...

thnx for pm😃

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#478

Tht was a beautiful update.
She bought red color clothes.
There is sooo much love..
Plz let them express their love...
Wanna sree tht...
Sirf Aankhon hi aankhon mein mohabbat nahi...
Continue sooon

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#479

dis is just amazing...i was badly w8ing 4 ur update...nd d w8 was worth it,,,,,,,,,,😃😃😃

i am left wid no words 2 praise u..dear...!!! genuienly shortage of words...!!!😃😃

superb...!!!!!!😃😃😃😃

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Vrushali Naik

@barunlove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#480

18 years is it!!!!...

She still has d desire in her just n just for him...What would you call this yaar!!!! Its eternal...!! Imagining of a relationship of this calibre soothes your nerves to what extent...unexplainable!!

Loved the part where he corrects himself asking her...Is Aashna our daughter!!!...I literally got goosebumps...man how does it feel wen the daughters dad cums home after 18 years to find our dat she is his...wait!!! THEIRS!!

It was again magical dear!!!...thanks u so much for the PM!!!