Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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kiran deep kaur

@sikhni_

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#371

ashna is a smart kid

loved her

want a lot of arshi moments plzz 😃

update was just amazing

thnks for update n pm 🤗

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mankhush

@mankhush

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

loved loved loved it
ashna is his daughter and he knows and she knows he knows
awesome

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

Wow... It's so heartbreaking that they were separated for so many years! But at least they have met again. Hopefully he has gotten over his guilt!

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Kuku

@lankan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Really like the story ! I love how bits and pieces from the actual show are used in your writing. It keeps us connected to the show, the show which I should restart watching again. But coming to the point, I like the plot, and Ashna is very cute and curious. I'm sure she'll get to the bottom of the expression haunting both of her parents' faces. Could you PM me when you update, I would really like to follow this story !

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rparash

@rparash

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

Awesome 😊

Thanks for the pm...

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appy

@appy_12

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

Wow! I like it.. I like it very much! :D

So, he let her go?? Just like that??

This is really interesting.. I'd love to see an Arnav-Aashna bond.. Also, she has a right to know.. 'Because you never asked.' Haha!

Great story, great update.. And yes, I'm back! Exams done! :D :D

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207shikha

@207shikha

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#377

hehe...MR.Raizada there's still a long way to go...😆 LOL just loved it. continue soon.

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amritab

@amritab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#378

It's good to see that the passion between them is alive and well despite the number of years apart

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#379

hehe so he knows that aashna is his daughter and he is crazy not to run to them and take them with him

beautiful update

thanks for the pm

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pixie_n

@pixie_n

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#380

I jus adore d way u write<3 hv jus started 3 of ur ffs few days back<3 vil comment on d other two soonish :P
ur way of writing is so so different n pleasant n refreshing to read..luvd d story line alongwid d title<3 luv ur description of each n evry minute detail..dere feelings hv been decipchered so well..nd i jus luvd hw u hv used scenes of d show n dat too exactly d way dey were shown..it gives a connection yet wud a different spice..m lukin fwd to ur updates
d titles u give to all d chapters<3 everything is just beyond beautiful<3
write supersoon
much love<3