Twist Of Fate Chapter8 Pg 118 27/07 NEW!

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Chandana

@chandana.s

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Posted: 13 years ago

#311

WOW...WONDERFULL UPDATE...

ARNAV TOLD KHUSHI TO GO AWAY BECAUSE HE DONT DESERVE HER??? THATS REALLY STUPID

POOR KHUSHI...

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#312

Successful businessman though he may be, he has a whole lot to learn when it comes to matters of the heart! Stupid Arnav! But love the almost teenager like reactions these two seem to draw out from the other. And Arnav was not probing about Aashna!? I'm surprised! It seems so unlike him! But he;s your character so you'd know better ;) I loved it! :D Looking forward to more! :)

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curiousbookworm

@curiousbookworm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#313

omg soo sorry for not commenting! JUST got back from india ... so i missed your whole story.. so going thru all the PMs now and reading .. so gimme some time :D and i will be regular again

thanks soo much for PMing me :D

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-FarwiiDobaara-

@-FarwiiDobaara-

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#314

Dang!! Arnav asked her to leave after the MU cleared!! How sad... ): and thank goshh that there is no MU between them abt Ashna! Hopefuly their daughter and Nk will help them get together<3

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rana5

@rana5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#315

You are such a brilliant writer. I always feel much whenever I read your work. I hope Arnav discovers soon that he has a daughter. I cannot wait to see them bonding!

Edited by rana5 - 13 years ago

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#316

great update...cant believe arnav let her go all those years ago...cant wait to read more...keep it up...

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oh.petite.one

@oh.petite.one

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Posted: 13 years ago

#317

that was fab ⭐️

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#318

I love how you have included the little detail about the past, the night when he told her to go. I am so thrilled by your writing that I don't know how to say, you have portrayed both of their expressions beautifully. His frustration of seeing her sensuously playing with her hair, his joy when he heard that Aashna is his daughter or hoped that too, the tears in his eyes, the excitement in each of them of sitting together in the car and then his fear of not being able to control himself with her being so near... All of it so well written girl!!

I love every bit of it...

Thanks for the pm, and pls update soon !!!