All My Life (kriyaansh ff)updated pt 12 - Page 25

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Posted: 13 years ago
o dear your all the parts of this story is just flawless speachless and the thoughts at last and the diary part and all that ... it made me cry hats of pm me the link if you update so please
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.. :)
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!!!!! dis part was too emotional
i want ki rey apni har limit cross kr de to make kria confess her love
i want kriyaansh to b re-united
nsharon...altast koi to mila
love dis update alot
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u so so so so so much for such sweet comments ...
here we go...
NEXT DAY ST LOUIS COLLEGE
All the dazlings and weaklings were sitting in the rehearsal hall...waiting for Amar(totla wala)..
Kria was also there Vishaka forcibly got her in the reherasal hall...
Amar enters in...
Bharat:arey yaar Amar tu kahan tha hum kab s tera wait karhe h rehearsal start karni h...
Amar:ale yaal solly wo tya h na mele helpel to tohin aur dob mil dayi h to isiliye taam buht bal daya g ...pata nhin naya helpel kese mile ga...
Neha:aww so how u will manage rehearsal and canteen...??
Amar:pata nhi ...tese tarun da...
Kria: if u dont mind ..i mean ...tumhare helper ki jagah m tumhari help karsakti hun ...
Simmi:tum ...
Kria:haan m ..i can...
Amar:pal kria tum tese...
Rey:haan y not agar use lagta h k wo tumhari help karakti h so ...its gud na...
Tani:haan wese b ne h wo dazlings ka h and na hi weaklings ka so use rehearsal ki b koi tension nhee hogi...
Sharon:haan Kria bhale h dazling ya weaklings m na ho but ux k jesi dancer na hi dazling m hai and na hi weaklings m...
every 1 shocked to hear this from Sharon...
Rinni: sum 1 pinch me m sapna to nhee dekh rahe...
Sharon piched her hard..
Rinni:aaahoo...Sharon😡..
Sharon:pata chala tum sapna nhee dekh rahee...
every 1 laughed...
Amar:pal Kria yeh taaam tum tese...
Kria:mere liye koi kaam chota bara nhe h...i wud luv to help u...
Amar hugged her and said..
Amar:pal aik shalt p...
Kria confusingly:kya???
Amar:jo salary m apne helper ko deta tha wo salary ab se m tumhen doonga...ok..
Kria:but m kese..(Amar interupts in middle)
Amar:manzool h to theek h walna hone do mere dance ta nuksaan...
Kria:ok ok ...theek h...
In The Canteen...
Rey came with Tani ..Kria was busy in her work..trying not to luk at them...
Rey wanted to make her jeolous so that her feelings cud cum out...
Rey:Tani ur so beautiful...(pinning her hair behind her ear)
Kria was trying to ignore but cudn't help it and she was luking at them...
Amar: Kria tum yeh vegetable tatlo dab tak m juiced lete aata hun...
Kria smiled and said ok...
she started cutting the vegetables ...and there Rey trying to make her jealous..Kria was constantly luking at them and Rey knew that ...
Rey holding Tani's hand ...
Rey: so tumhe konsi pestry pasand h ...choclatr ua pineapple...????
(he knew Kria will b affected by this and she was getting afftected)
Tani for obvious was on 7th cloud...
Tani:hmmm...pineapple...
just Amar shouted Kria...
Kria luked at him like wat ...
Amar: tumhala haath...(her hand was bleeding badly actually she was not cutting vegetable a but her hand)
Rey rushed to them...holds Kria's hand ...trying to stop the bleeding...
Amar:m first aid leta aata hun...
Tani was first luking with jealousy at them than went outside with anger...
Kria jerked Rey hand ...and luked at him with anger...just than Rey again holds her hand tightly giving Kria and angry luk...tand went under the tap and washed her hand...just than Amar arrived ...
Rey tuk cotton and sum medicine...and applied it on Kria's hand ...
Kria:ahhh...
Rey luked at her with concern...
then did ao badage on her hand...
Amar:dhyaan tahan h tumhara Kria ...itna thoon nital raha tha and tum apne thyaalon m thoyi hui thi ...
kria:wo wo actually...
Just than Sharon and Swayam arrived...
Sharon luked at Kria's hand and said...
Sharon:oh my god...Kria tumhara dhyaan kahan hota h tumhe sambhal k kaam karna chaeiye...chalo m tumhe ghar chorke aati hun..
Swayam:but Sharon tumhe to RDX sir k paas kuch kaaam h na...tum wahan jao ..m Kria ko chor k ata hun...
Sharon:oh haan ..theek h...
Rey went from there with anger on his face ...Kriyam also moved towards home...Sharon luked at Rey but she have to go to RDX ..so she went there...
In the night ...Sharon came out of college and talking to herself...
Sharon:aj buht late hogaya ...(just than she saw sum 1 in the basket ball court)
She went inside and saw sum 1 hitting his hand badly on wall...so she rushed to stop him just than she saw it was Rey...She holds her hand and said...
Sharon:rey wat happened tum yeh kya karahe ho ...(luked his hand which was bleeding)
Rey:Sharon meri wajah se use takleef hui ..meri wajah se (he was crying and sat down saying this)
Sharon hugged him sitting at ground...just like a friend...
Sharon:Rey bus stop ...(she was too cring luking his frnd like this)calm down Rey...
She let him stud up...and both sat on a bench placed for audience...
Firstly Sharon did his bandage...Then said..
Sharon:its a limit tum kya samjhte ho ...agar tum khud kp takleef do g to sab theek hojaye ga haan...no ..Rey tumhari takleef se buht logon ko takleef puhnchti h...
Rey:m kya karun Sharon ...wo nhe maaan rahe m uski ankhon m dekh sakta hun apne liye pyaar magar wo kuch kehti kyun nhe...
Sharon:rey firstly calm down... luk at me... dont think ur alone i am with u ..forever ...and secondly Rey yeh Kria kahan se beech m agayi ..jahan tak main jaanti hun tum to Tani k saath ho...
Rey silent...
Sharon:Rey tum jaante ho na tum kya karahe ho ...buht lifes attached h tumhari zindagi se...and wese b mera frnd sab theek karle ga i know...(hitting him on his chest)
Rey:aaahhhooo...Sharon...
Sharon:chalo tumhe ghar chor dun ..nhe to tum phr devdaas banjao g...
Rey angrily:sharon...
both laughed...and proceeded towards home...
PRECAP
Kriya
ansh dance...
thats it for today hope u like it ...
crticism/suggestion/appreciation welcumed...
for pm add Angel56..

Why am I such a fool?
I can't stop myself from loving you.
And countless nights I've cried for you,
Just because my feelings are true.
You're up and down,
Your feelings are all around.
Don't lie to me,
You don't love me.

I've spent so long waiting for you.
No there's nothing I can do,
I can't stop myself from loving you.
Even though I want to.
I can cry all I want,
But I can't pass it off as nonchalant.
My feelings can't just fly away,
They are here to stay.

Piss me off and make me cry.
Please just lie.
Make me hate you,
Last thing I want is to love you.
I want to move on and have a life,
I've always wanted to be your wife.
But I can't do this, not anymore,
My heart is to sore.
I can't deal with more heartbreak,
I don't have any heart left to ache.
Please, just leave me.


THANK U...
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am a big fan f ur poems. I luv d fel that each word has.
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just can't get enough of your poems ..
I just keep reading them again and again...
Love them like anything...
U r really talented ...

every time I think this poem is your best ..you prove me wrong with a better one next time

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
but plz yaar kriyaansh ko mila do i want to see them 2gether
and ur poem as always
make me to die
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Posted: 13 years ago
gr8 update... i luv ur poems 2 d core... update nxt part soon... n thanx 4 pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
so nice
tani s irritating, sharon s ri8 kriya jaisa bst dancer na weakling mei hai na hi dazzling mei, sharon s so supportive.
kria s so sweet na hi koi kaam chota hoto hai, she helps amar, so sweet.
y did rey do tat, kria s really hurt by cing tat.
sharey's frndshp rocks
thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
Nd ur poem is amazing...
Thankx 4 d pm.,
update nxt part soon

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