All My Life (kriyaansh ff)updated pt 12 - Page 23

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Posted: 13 years ago
Heya . . . . Update it plz 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u for all ur sweet comments...
here we go...
Kria went out of fire escape...and went out of the college ..and hired a Auto...Rey was sitting in his car preparing to go home just then he saw Kria ...
Rey:yeh abhi kahan ja raheee h...(he folled her auto)
Kria stopped the auto in front of a big convent...
She went inside...Rey too got off the car and went inside...just then the watchmen stopped him ..
Watchman:kahan ja rahe ho??
Rey:ji wo...
Watchman: wo ji wo kya???
Rey looked up and saw the board of Angelic Convent...and said in hurry...
Rey:convent...
Watchman:kya???
Rey: nhee wo convant hai na to donation dene aya hoon...m Reyaansh singhania...
Watchman: oh ..maaf kar na sir...app andar jaye...
Rey:thanx..
Rey went inside and saw Kriya going towards garden but hiding him from her ...
Kria went inside the garden where all kids were playing ...they saw Kria and hirriedly came to her and hugged her...Kria gave them toffees chocalate...balloons...
Rey was luking all this he was hiding him behind a tree...
Rey: She is so innocent...dunt know is ki yeh innocence kahan chali gai h...
Kria to all kids...
Kria:abhi tum sab khelo m thori der m aati hun...
she went towards the office..where a lady was sitting..
Rey followed him...and was hearing their talks ...outside of room ...he was hiding himself in a behing the door...
Lady:Kria tum..aao aao...come in my child...
Kria:thankx mam..
Lady:yeh lo tumhari salary ...and handed her an envelope...
Kria:mene app se kaha that m is kaam k liye salary nhe leti...dance mera passion h..aur in bachon ko dance sikhane m mjhe khushi milti h...
Rey was listening all this and thought may b Kria is facing sum financial prob...
Lady:i understand my child but i know ur condition also...salary samjh k nhe to blessing samajh k rakh lo...
Kria: mam aap nhe mano gi...but next time m nhe lungi...wese b next month inke naye tutor b ajayen g...
Lady:haan meri baat hogai h aik teacher ..her 'll join by next month...
Kria:oh that gr8... mam aj mjhe kuch kaam h to m kal ake continue karun apni dance tution...
Lady:sure my girl...no prob...
Kria:thank u mam..m chalti hun..i'll cum tomorrow...
Rey hid himself..and she came out...and went towards the door saying bye to kids...
Rey luked at this and smiled...ans went inside the room ...
Lady:yes my child...who ru...
Rey:mam m Rey ..umm Reyaansh singhania ...m donation dene aya tha...ur doing an excellent job here...here's the check...
Lady:thank u my dear..aap jese bachon ki wajah se to aj yeh convent itne bachon ko sambhal raha h...
Rey:ok mam...i've to leave...
Rey went off...sat in his car and constantly thinking ..
Rey in mind:baat cutter apna prob kisi ko nhe batayegi..and na hee kisi ki help legi ...mjhe hi kuch karna parega...
Kria came to home(sharon's home)
she was not able to control herself ...she ran towards her room..and burst out crying...
crying like..hell..talking to herself...
Kria:mene apni feeling ko band kardiya tha rey but aapne aisa kyun kiya...main kya karun maa...main main kise btaun yeh sab..aap b mjhe chor k chale gaye...Rey m kya karun ...m chah k b nhe reh sakti aap k saath..mjhe maaf kardo...plzzz...mjhe maaf kardo...(she was standing by her window in her room)she turnt back and saw sum 1 listening to her talks...yes it was Sharon...
she came in ...just luking at her...
Kria quickly removed her tears and but wasn't able to control herself...but still saying...
Kria:Sharon(still crying)tum ...wo m...
Sharon:wo m kya Kria...mje sirf sach sunna h..tell me the truth...
Kria:(again removing her tear but it was flowing and flowing)sach ..nhe aisi koi baat nhe bus mjhe maa ki yaad arahee thi..
Sharon:Kria tell me the truth ...mene sab sunne h abhi tum ne jo kaha ..agar tum mjhe nhe batogi to m Rey ko...(Kria cuts her)
Kria:nhee rey ko nhe plzzz.m batati hun...but tum us se pehle mujhse promise karo k tum yeh baat kisi ko nhe bato gi...
Sharon:ok..par batao mjhe...
Kria told her all the things...and was not able to control ,she just sat where she was standing..crying lot...sharon too was dumbstruk...she had tears in her eyes...she was just shocked wasn't able to move for few secs then saw Kria and rushed to her and hugged her tightly...they both cried...
they broke hug...
Sharon stud up...ans said...
Sharon: i m sorry kria mjhe tumhara promise torna hoga ...mjhe Rey ko sab batana hoga...(she was about to leave but Kria held her hand)
Kria:no Sharon tum use kuch nhe batogi ..
Sharon:but(kria cuts in middle)
Kria:tumhe Rey ki kasam...
there was a silent of few min ...then...Sharon jerked her hand and said tum aisa kyun karahe ho...
Kria: apne dil and dosti k lye...
Sharon: tum samajh nhee rahee Kria..Rey ne tumhe promise kiya h ko wo tum se uska love confess...karayega...wo wo apna promise poora karne k liye kisi b had tak jayega...tum jaanti ho wo wo...
Kria:i know Sharon ...i know him very well...but i have to bear this...
Sharon:mene tumahre bare m buht galat socha tha...u such an Angel...
Kria: Sharon k mun se Kripa k liye tareef achi nhe lagti ...
both laughed...
PRECAP:
kya Rey la paye ga apni baat cutter ko apne kareeb...

thats it guys i know its not that good but i promise next part m buht kuch hone waala h..so watch out..and atlast Kria have sum1 to share her feelings with m so happy.....and yah lots of kriyaansh ix cuming ur way...
ignore typing mistaked and grammatical tooo😆
for pm add Angel56...
suggestion/criticism/appreciation welcumed...
buht saara like karna and bara bara comment dena ok...bye...guys...

"Khaak urti hy raat bhar mujh main,

Kon phirta hy dar-badar mujh main ?

Mujh ko mujh main jagah nhi milti

Wo hy mojood iss qadar mujh main'"


"Udaas shamon mein lot kr wo aana bhol jata tha,

Kar k khafa mujhko manana bhol jata tha,

Inhi khasiaton ne uski mujhe badnam kar dala,

Wo likh k naam dewaron pe mitana bhol jata tha,

Mat poch muhabat mai la parwahi uski,

Dy k zakham wo marham lagana bhol jata tha,

Kitna dilnasheen hota tha uski yaad ka manzar,

Wo jb b yaad aata tha main zamana bhol jata tha.."

THANK U...




Edited by Angel56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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unres

hehehheh first one to comment



wow finally kria have sumone to share her feelins 👏🥳

okay cuming back to update

gosh!!!! tat was such a sad one!! kria has to go thru soo much of turmoil!!

hope to c sum cozy moments in next update 😉😉😛

well update was AWDSUMMEEE 👍🏼
Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
1st 2 comment!
really loved ur upd8...
i just hope sharon rey ko sab kuch bata de...
kriya convent main... wonder wats her prob...
Edited by kriyaanshd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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unres

Awsm update dear

Finally kriya had someone whom she can share her feelings

Hope to get some kriyaansh scenes in next update

Thanx for pm
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

1st 2 comment!
really loved ur upd8...
pls taani n shivam ko couple bana do!

shhh chup tum raho chup hum rehen...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
AwESUM uPDATe !! Wish jaldi KRIYansh mIL jayE ! egarly waiting for MORE kriyANSH scene ! UPDATE asap !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update... hope sharon rey ko sab kuch bata de... waiting 4 the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor kria is going thru hell lot of pain...its so sad,...finally she has someone to share herself with...loved krisha bonding...ab dekhna ye hai ki rey apni baatcutter ko kaise manata hai...loved it very much...waiting for next part...update jaldii...as it is u have said ki more kriyansh is to come-matlab more excitement...to isliye update asap...kriyansh is my drug u know...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome the way kria say her feeling to sharon was mindblowing jaldi say mildo kriyaansh ko cant see them like this
plz plz plz

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