luv means nt evr havin to say u're sorry*discont* - Page 5

Wow Shivu...out of this world concept...rocking first chapter...in sab ko aise avtar mein dekhne ki aadat nahi. But I'm sure this is gonna b interesting 😊

o sh*t main to mar gyi kriya k saath hi please j tune kya kiya nivya ...

Originally posted by: tinatartari

its awesome bt sad..

i cried reading love story n so aftr reading this!!!

em speechless!!

i tooo cried after reading love story!!

1st of all m srry agar aapke aankho mein aasu aaye toh..2nd update cuming soon..

Plz note: if I made u cry with the last update m srryy….& this update is also little emotional..

Episode….2

Recape: rey reading diary…remembers about kria's death…

Jill & rey goes to swaron house… (let me tell u reyam has a institute of dance)

Ria opens the door for them..

Ri: hii…uncle!

R: yeh rieee (rey calls ria riee…) hands her few chocolates..as she loves chocolates…rey walks in to meet swron

Sw: heii rey kaisa hai??

R: fine!! Sorry aaj institute nahi aa saka…

Sw: its fine!!! Yaar waise…main sooch raha hunk e jill aur ria ko Harvard bej de..

R: jo New York mein hai???????????

Sw: haan…its good for…management aur wahan dance ka accha institute hai!

Sharons walks in…

Sh: rey tension maat lo..ria bhi hogi na

R: but kria ki death ke baad mein aur jill kabhi lag nahi..no!

Ria & jill were in ria's room…

J: so apne naya bf kaisa hai???????

Ri: kaun?????????

J: who rob!

Ri: who toh kab ka gaya…waise tumhe koi mile!!??!!

J: nahi..

Ri: main dhund deti hun….kaise chaiye??????

J: hair..straight hoo…eyes dark colour ho…INDIAN originated hoo…mere dad ko mujse bhi zyaada pyaar kare…chote-chote kapde na pehenti ho…sweet hoo…kind hoo…beautiful hoo…aur..hez disturbed by servant

Servant: mam is calling u for dinner

Ri: ya cuming..chaloo

J: aur angrezo se nafrat karti ho..

(let me tell u two things..

1^st : kria ne bacchpan se aur kria ki death ke baad rey ne jill ko sif ekk hi baat sikhai hai.."MERA BHARAT MAHAN"

2^nd: jill ki dream gal aur koi nahi ria thi)

At the dining table

Sw: jill aur ria tum harvad jana chate ho?

Ri: hmm..yaa mene suna hai management ka best institute hai

J: paa ko yahan akle chod ke!

Rey was glad to see his son's love towards him..

Sh: but hum hain yahan! Tumhare dad ke paas!

J: but..

Rey thinking about his future

R: haan jill swayum thik kahe raha hai…go live ur life & dreamz ..aur mere paas toh Sharon & swayum hai..

J: sure paa???????

R: SURE!!!
Rey recives a msg and so does swayum & Sharon….from same number but unknown…

"m cuming to UK..Let's meet

Precp: new entre

Suggestion, complains, feedback, annde & tamatar are welcomed!

Awesome..
aww loved jill's care for rey...

Amazing update 😊

Waiting for d next part 😃

lovely Update.

Fullon emotional drama lag raha hai 😊 anyways I am luving the sentimental attachments associated with ur characters...luking forward to your next part 😊

he nivya great but please rey ki life main kisi or ko enter mat karwana m criying rey ko akela dekh ke u na ...