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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Seems like on kriyaansh . . . As the pain & grief of a loverboy is clear . . . . . . . But it could be a well-cooked story on arsha too... 😳

but I would like it in 1st option 😉

plz continue . . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Plz note..: I was crying😭😭 when I wrote this..if u cry its not on me..if u don't cry u got a strong heart..or maybe I'll wont be able to describe my emotions through word or whatever'I'll try remove my emotions'but then'huh'enough of my bak bak..lets start..so on IFers (as I call if ppl) demand..here's episode one of "love means not ever having to say you're soorryy" but before I start I wanna tell

Character: CV & ME

Concept: street dance 3D & ME

Tittle : love story by erich segal

Episode 1

As I said in my promo..it is a snowy place..its UK'a hospital named "u.k hospital" ..It's a private room'a lady 34 in age is on the patient bed'her husband is next to her..watching her..the lady is counting her last breathes 'the board on the bed showz..

NAME: KRIA SINGHANIA

So the lady is kria singhania'her husband rey singhaniya..

K: rey'huh..breathes from mouth'

R: haan bolo kria'seems worried!

K: muje ekk last baar ..baar humare bte ko dekhna hai..

R: t himself : last baar!!

K: plzz rey..

Rey gets up goes to the door calls a few ppl waiting outside!

Swayum, Sharon, ria & jill enters

(let me tell u swayum & Sharon are married..they have a child ria'swayum, sharon & rey are best of frenz from coll days'jill is the son of rey & kria ria is of 5 and so is jill)

As soon ria& jill sees kria..runs towards her..

J: maa aap ghar aaungi na phir aap aur main paa ko car rancing mein haara denge'rey starts to sob'😭😭

K: jill aap muje promise karo..ke aap ria ko zyaada pareshan nahi karo ge!!
J: maa'

K: promise..??

J; pakka walla promise maa

She truns to ria..ria kisses on her cheek'

K: aap muje promise karo'aap jill ke saath raho ge humesha..

R: promise aunty'

Babysitter: comes in : ria & jill let mooma rest come..

Jill & ria kisses kria..hugs her & runs to the baby sitter'

Sharon sits next to kria'

K: Sharon muje promise karo..ke tu jill se utna hi pyaar karegi jitna ekk maa karti usse..

SH: tummhe kuch nahi hoga!!

K: nahi aur nahi..muje asie bandhan me maat rakho ..varna bhoot ban ke wapas auungi..Laughs'swayum to laughs to chree her last moments'but Sharon ..

SH: promise main jill ka khayal rakhungi..😭😭and runs away from there ..

K: swaym,rey ka khayal rakhna humesha..

Sw: jab tak main zinda hun tab tak..

Kria looks at her hubby'I mean rey'his tears are in his eyes but are not coming out'swayum goes to him...puts a hand on his shoulder'gives a fake smile..And walks out of the room'onle kriyansh is alone in room

K: rey will do me fav'can't breathe..takes air from mouth..favour'

R: anything'

K: hug me..

R: puts her hand around her..

K: aise nahi'shifts...gives the half bed th rey

Rey sleeps on the bed...hugs her tightly..

K: jill ka dhayan rakh na'agar zarurt pade toh'plzz move on..

Rey listen to this is shocked'and tears fell down of his eyes'kria comes to know hez crying..she wanted to tell him that don't cry but she knew she had no tym left so she cont..

K: humare bte ko bhi.uuhh..Breathes from mouth..rey moves his hand on her chest to make her relax'

K: usse bhi dancer banoge na..

R: haan kriya..he was not at all interested in this talk but he had no strength to stop her..

K: sif ballet nahi'

R: saare form'ballet,street ..sab..

K: tell him I used to love him the most '.

R: and main!?!?
K: tum usse category main nahi aate!

Rey just smiles..

K: I love you rey

R: I love u kria

These were the last words of kria singhaniya'

Thak..thak..rey comes into his senses'(he was reading a diary)..it was jill on the door

J: paa dinner ke liye Sharon aunt ke ghar jana hai'

R: chaloo..

For IFRES info: rey is now 44'& jill 16'soo confussion gone!!

The boy hot biceps in me promo is not rey but it is jill..his son..

Suggestion, complains, feedback, annde & tamatar are welcomed!

A lamba walla update hai na??

before i cont more update let me tell u IFERS love here means : maa-bete walla pyaar / husband & wife ka pyaar /

junior student & senior student ka pyaar...frenz ke bicch ka pyaar...bf & gf ka pyaar...

Edited by shivanivyas - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Liked your Start..
But Kria-Dead..I mean WTH!
Update Soon..Can't Wait Much!
n Yes!First To Comment Againn! :D
PM me whn u Update!
Edited by kittu_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
awesome update😊

luvd it😊

kria dead!!!!??😲

waiting for d next part😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
omg kria is dead...
and rey ne taani se to shaadi nahi ki???
rey is 44 O_O..
ita a romantic ff or something else??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
Nyc start...
n WTH...kria dead 😲
do updt sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: awesomeabshu

omg kria is dead...

and rey ne taani se to shaadi nahi ki???
rey is 44 O_O..
ita a romantic ff or something else??



its a romantic ff...so chilll
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
it was awesome and very heart touching update
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
What??
Kriya died...nooo...😭😭
was very heart touching update😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
KRIYA DEAD!!!😭
love KR convo..

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