Hey jalebi bai... 🤗
h0pe u r f9...well i kn0w u r f9... :P
well finally i am giving a read to all ur FF parts...i kn0w it wud take m0nths but still... 😳
acha n0w c0ming back to t0pic...
no no...wait...
first i wanna tell you that i always prefer a l0ngish c0mment on other's FF... (As if i read a lot of FFs but its not like that i still read 2... 😳 )
So i'm warning u...dun get tired reading my fazool sa c0mment...
so n0w c0me to the character sketch first...
lemme tell u in just one w0rd...
damn, it was amazing...!
So khushi is w0rking a fashi0n designer...hmm...awes0me...
and plus she has a sister..WOWw... and jalebi bai, nice selection of characters... :)) and payal has a twin br0ther...wow...this is great... :)) plus i ad0re the description of jai and swamini...u kn0w that rahul gandhi and poonam pandey thing... 😳
it was really enj0yable... and that one of the prakash br0thers...well i f0rg0t his name in ur FF...but still i was jus w0ndering that what will he do at the party...ahem ahem...
And mmm...what else left to discuss...Mmm
Ohh yeah...khushi has 6 victims...array wah..! :))
This is so much fun... :))
and plus all are hunks... 😳 but i kn0w that in the end the gurl will g0 to our ASR... ☺️
And khushi's boss, Ashutosh...hehe...s0 he is a flirt...i can see s0mething c0ming right n0w...but i guess, i have to wait to read the updates... :))
Okie n0w c0ming to Part 1... :))
Soo Khushi has a best friend, which is La...shermili types... :D this is gr8...
i luv the way u kept everything light in ur part 1...[as if i read all the parts...ermm]
I mean that scene when u said that every guy wanted to flirt wid la, but when khushi the gr8 is there this thing is totally difficult rather imp0ssible... :))
And when they were in class...I l0ve khushi's dialogue that is the kid c0lour blind... lol
That was amazing... <3 <3
i h0pe u r n0t getting tired... 😳
and aha...
Marriage...W0w...so jai and swamini wanted khushi to get married... :))
s0 fr0m here starts the Man-hunting... :D :D
eekkss i'm s0 excited...[as if i'm g0ing on a man-hunt... ahem ahem ☺️ ]
Wait...lemme change the f0nt c0lour...
Thank g0d there is n0 word-limit... anywayz back to the t0pic.. :))
yeah i l0ve that scene on the dining table...that was light and simple...plus cute... :))
hehehe
khushi's veiw abt marriage just cracked me up...
babies...ermmm
khushi bhi na...! 😆
and jai gave him the deadline...waaooww... :))
I really want to read ahead...and u kn0w i even can;t say to upd s0on... :( as all the updates are waiting for me ahead...
i wanted to read them all in just one go but...errmmm...you...kn0w...hehe...er...well i need a sh0rt break...but will c0mplete it pakka... :P :P shaid abhi hi...but 5 min ka break tou banta hi hai na... 😳
S0 u have to wait for my next c0mment... :P :P
tab tak k liye tata-bye bye...
xoxo
Yours,
cupcake... ☺️
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