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Akorshi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
arnav again save her...
mohit fall in the pool...😆
shyam is gonna back...
waiting fr next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update dear !! Belated Happy Birthday hun ! 😊 Thank you so much for the PM hun 🤗 Sorry for the late reply dear,been having Internet probs !😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey shuba, belated many many happy returns of the day...
Awesome update yaar... Now eagerly eagerly waiting for the updates😃
Sorry for being very very late 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
ahahhaah...
amazing parts...
read all unread parts in a go...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Is there no new update? Please do PM me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read update. Sorry fkr late reply. 13th update is really awesome . Like it very much. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
shre di reserving my post ...ok ..love u
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey jalebi bai... 🤗
h0pe u r f9...well i kn0w u r f9... :P
well finally i am giving a read to all ur FF parts...i kn0w it wud take m0nths but still... 😳
acha n0w c0ming back to t0pic...
no no...wait...
first i wanna tell you that i always prefer a l0ngish c0mment on other's FF... (As if i read a lot of FFs but its not like that i still read 2... 😳 )
So i'm warning u...dun get tired reading my fazool sa c0mment...
so n0w c0me to the character sketch first...
lemme tell u in just one w0rd...
damn, it was amazing...!
So khushi is w0rking a fashi0n designer...hmm...awes0me...
and plus she has a sister..WOWw... and jalebi bai, nice selection of characters... :)) and payal has a twin br0ther...wow...this is great... :)) plus i ad0re the description of jai and swamini...u kn0w that rahul gandhi and poonam pandey thing... 😳
it was really enj0yable... and that one of the prakash br0thers...well i f0rg0t his name in ur FF...but still i was jus w0ndering that what will he do at the party...ahem ahem...
And mmm...what else left to discuss...Mmm
Ohh yeah...khushi has 6 victims...array wah..! :))
This is so much fun... :))
and plus all are hunks... 😳 but i kn0w that in the end the gurl will g0 to our ASR... ☺️
And khushi's boss, Ashutosh...hehe...s0 he is a flirt...i can see s0mething c0ming right n0w...but i guess, i have to wait to read the updates... :))
Okie n0w c0ming to Part 1... :))
Soo Khushi has a best friend, which is La...shermili types... :D this is gr8...
i luv the way u kept everything light in ur part 1...[as if i read all the parts...ermm]
I mean that scene when u said that every guy wanted to flirt wid la, but when khushi the gr8 is there this thing is totally difficult rather imp0ssible... :))
And when they were in class...I l0ve khushi's dialogue that is the kid c0lour blind... lol
That was amazing... <3 <3
i h0pe u r n0t getting tired... 😳
and aha...
Marriage...W0w...so jai and swamini wanted khushi to get married... :))
s0 fr0m here starts the Man-hunting... :D :D
eekkss i'm s0 excited...[as if i'm g0ing on a man-hunt... ahem ahem ☺️ ]
Wait...lemme change the f0nt c0lour...
Thank g0d there is n0 word-limit... anywayz back to the t0pic.. :))
yeah i l0ve that scene on the dining table...that was light and simple...plus cute... :))
hehehe
khushi's veiw abt marriage just cracked me up...
babies...ermmm
khushi bhi na...! 😆
and jai gave him the deadline...waaooww... :))
I really want to read ahead...and u kn0w i even can;t say to upd s0on... :( as all the updates are waiting for me ahead...
i wanted to read them all in just one go but...errmmm...you...kn0w...hehe...er...well i need a sh0rt break...but will c0mplete it pakka... :P :P shaid abhi hi...but 5 min ka break tou banta hi hai na... 😳
S0 u have to wait for my next c0mment... :P :P
tab tak k liye tata-bye bye...
xoxo

Yours,
cupcake... ☺️


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Posted: 12 years ago
hayeee...
read till part 5... :D :D
see, i can read...! :P :P
well will read after 5 min break...As i'm d0ing al0t of things right n0w...on the t0p, staring at you-kn0w-whom ☺️
okie back to the t0pic...
:D
I'm really bl0ody enjoying reading this FF... :D
and i must say u have a great sense of hum0ur...
Okie so first of all, La and khushi's friendship is just awes0me... hats off to ya...! *claps*
And La's idea is gr8...he he he, man-hunting...!
And first victim was vishal...and their date...
omig0d... :O :O :O
hehehe...it was a c0mplete disaster...!
po0r vishal...
and that painted teeth... :D
that was gr8... and p0or khushi's reaction after kn0wing that vishal has painted teeth... LOL
And khushi's behaviour was just too hilari0us...
Obviously it was her FIRST date... ;)
Po0r girl hadn't an idea about n0t to ask these things... :D :D
and lemme tell u, that
Sk.ski...skin...Underwear part was just awes0me... he he he...
And I'm impessed with Arnav...lol
he ch0osed the right restuarant to take La to...hmmm
S0 tey finally met... :D :D
and that pepper spray...! lol... :))
That scene was just too cute when khushi said that if arnav would try to break La's heart she will break his b0nes.. that was cute...
beechara arnav...kehta ho ga k kahan phas gaya... hee hee hee
and then mmm...what left...
and that accident with Vishal...That was too embarrassing...:P :P
Obviously I were vishal then i would vow to myself not to meet khushi again...hehe
i'm not liking the font colours at all... :( see this bluish- purple clr is n0t pretty at all...anywayz, back to the t0pic...
So Arnav aur khushi mein takrar... lol
That was amazing...I love their part... :)) :))
she called him jerk, idiot and so on... :D :D :D
I must really appreciate khushi... :) :)
and he wanted to slap her...AMAZING!!!...
:D :D :D and i was really laughing my heads off...when La heard that line...hehe
It was amazing...
Now i'm wondering that who is searching for a girl???
hmmm *suspicous*
possibly s0me friend of Arnav... :D :D
and as a matter of fact, he suggested khushi...
Incredible!!!
Jalebi bai, ur writing skills are amazing... :))
thumbs up...! :))
now taking my break then will read all the parts which are on this thread...and will c0mment on them c0llectively... :))
So...tab tak k liye bye-bye... :)) *waves hands*
Hope my comment brings a smile on ur face...! :))
xoxo

Yours,
cupcake... :))
Edited by cutelittleangel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved ur comments cupcakes
mwah!!
ab blush karo baby 😉

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