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irene

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

liked it...glad that arnav had the upper hand for once...

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onetwothree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

wonderfulll...🤗🤗...lovely...😛

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ilive2laugh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

ha! great way to make her feel guilty

not that he knows ...but still

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asumaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Simply amazing yar ... i'm officially a fan 😉 👏👏👏👏

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zillionaire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: asumasan
Simply amazing yar ... i'm officially a fan 😉 👏👏👏👏

aww!! thanks!! im so glad u liked it!! this chapter was the most funnest for me to write... i simply loved writing every bit of this chapter.. so im really glad that u liked it too!! keep reading and enjoy your vacation! :)

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

what the man...why dont you just give a kiss scene for khushi infront of arnav...thats too sad...you are making khushi suffer here for none of her fault...I am reallly sad for what arnav doing to her because of his jealousy...towards NK...thats disgusting...he is taking all his anger due to jealousy on khushi...I dont like it...

you make khushi witness such a bold scene and cant you make one kiss to khushi...for making arnav more jelaous that will be fun...

I DONT understand one thing why she is feeling so much guilty for just making a call to NK...

And why is he so damn pissed of NK and taking out that anger on khushi...this is not at all FAIR...NOT AT ALL...the one who is unprofessional here is arnav and YOU are makiing khushi to feel guilty...

Arnav bringing his jealousy in the work...which is unprofessional...and he is saying that khushi is unprofessional...hahah thats too funny...too sad for khushi...what has she done to suffer that much and to feel that much guilty...and moreover...what had she done...just made a call to NK for that simple thing, you are making that as a big mistake and making her suffer...

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zillionaire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: nareshSV
what the man...why dont you just give a kiss scene for khushi infront of arnav...thats too sad...you are making khushi suffer here for none of her fault...I am reallly sad for what arnav doing to her because of his jealousy...towards NK...thats disgusting...he is taking all his anger due to jealousy on khushi...I dont like it...
you make khushi witness such a bold scene and cant you make one kiss to khushi...for making arnav more jelaous that will be fun...

I DONT understand one thing why she is feeling so much guilty for just making a call to NK...

And why is he so damn pissed of NK and taking out that anger on khushi...this is not at all FAIR...NOT AT ALL...the one who is unprofessional here is arnav and YOU are makiing khushi to feel guilty...

Arnav bringing his jealousy in the work...which is unprofessional...and he is saying that khushi is unprofessional...hahah thats too funny...too sad for khushi...what has she done to suffer that much and to feel that much guilty...and moreover...what had she done...just made a call to NK for that simple thing, you are making that as a big mistake and making her suffer...

lol... i appreciate you feedback... the story has yet to move on you know... yes shes feeling guilty but she hasnt yet fallen for arnav... and as for the jealousy with nk.. all i can say is that theres a lot of jealousy yet to experience by arnav... they are both not in love yet or anything of that sort... khushi doesnt feel guilty cuz what she did was wrong she feels sad because of the fact that while she always thought ASR's ego was big.. today she realises hers isnt any less either... i hope u'll bear with me... and i wouldnt wanna disclose this now but since u wanted to know.. there will be moments between NK and khushi which would make arnav super pissed... so i hope u still keep reading... and sorry for the disappointment! 😊