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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

it was awesome part ...loved it very much

vishakha's plan was outstanding...loved it
and teen cheeze was amazing...i soo wish D3 me bhi koi usse 1 hafta muh band rakhne ke liye and hamesha ke liye rey se dur rhene ko bolde and
that shivam huh wo hai hi maar khane ke layak...i soo wished ki wo log shivam ki acche se dhulai karte
waiting eagerky for next part
continue soon

are don't be tensed . wo b ho jayega ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
if free den u can read...

1st of all sorry aroma!!
u know guys mai aur aroma pichle janam ki sis hain jo is janam mein IF mein mile hai..
i know sab ko ye sunke..😆 aisi condition hogii...
but yaar my consience says so...

well dats funny yet intrsting na!!

sorry isliye qki again i m updating widout u.. par kya karun?? humari tymings hi aaj kal aisi ho gayi ha ki we cant meet!! ok so now update..


Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
---OWL'S CLUB---

(d funniest club yet most amazing & mastifull)

again dis update is dedicatd to OWL's club membrs.. coz its updated aftr 12:00 pm so ye owl club ki tyming hai..

& we wud also like to give all d frenzz ha grand wel cum to our OWL's club who wished to join it!!
welcum guyzz..
Glad to know dat dere r many owls like US in d forum😆 😆

We ll ask permission 4m mods dat can we launch dis club atleast in d3 chit-chat corner...
now i m a lil busy so wen i get tym i ll do!!
& kinjal if u get tym den plzz do ask 1s.
by d tym we can enjoy here as OWLs.. 😆 😆 😆

p.s. 2day i underwent 1 of d risk of owl's club, my dad jst caught me now, waking awake late nyt & sitting on IF...(soncho guys kya hua hoga mera!!!)😛
well kuch nahi.. mai kuch stupid sa idea laga ke bach gayiii thodi daant padi, but i enjiyd it evn..😆
Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

HELLO FRENZZ..

waise i dont say hello , i say only
Happy KR...

ok so we r here again wid our nxt part dat too in our favorite owl's club tym..
tym: 1:58 am..(typical owl's club tym hehe)

Part-3

nil : shivam tune kitne or logo ko cheat kiya hey ...
viky : hme lga tune hamare saath hi kiya ...
shivam : guys asi baat nahi hey ... main nahi janta j kon the ...
swayam : to vo itne gusse main kyu the ...tuje almost marne wale the ...
shivam : i really don't know ...
shivam : st ;; j log kon they muje b nahi pta ab pta lgana parega ...kisi to link hey inka .. par kon scoh shivam kon hey esa jise k saath tune galat liya ... wait mane galat to bohat logo ko saath kiya hey ... mere speciality hey j ...
shivan : j group kha gya let me call my gang ...call . hello guys muje college k bahar milo ... ek group aya hey bohat bol rhe hey unhe sabak sikhana hey ...
rey to tanni :
rey : tanni muje koi kaam hey can u come rehas. hall ...
tanni : haaa . na . nahi ...
rey : kya bol rahi ho ...
taani bubble thinking start ha : are nahi taani agar tu rey k pass gyi to teri awaj chali jayegi ...)...
taani : self talkt . par kitna asha chance hey ...
taani bubble : are tu chance ki baat kar rhi hey rey k chakkar main teri awaz chali jayegi . jaad hey na krishan g ne kya bola tha ...
taani : to kya kru ...
taani bubble : bolde nahi a sakti ...
taani : agar reason poocha .to ...
taani bubble : bol dena ki tum gulaam nahi ho unki meri margi ...
rey : taani main tumse baat kar rha hu ...
ta : kya hey ...( are kese rey ko bol rahi hey ...)
rey : kya hey matlb or chila kyu rhi ho ...
taani : main kha chila rhi hoo .. or aap j kya jab dekho order deti rehte ho ...( are gla hai ya speaker kisi k kaan ke parde phat jayege ...)
rey : chila tum rahi ho ... or tum koi special nahi ho samji ... fine main khud kar loo ga muje koi shauk nahi hey ...tumhare saath kam karne ka ...miss earth lover ...( haha finally rey ne b bola ...)
taani : kya ...
rey : kuj b nahi ..( behri ho kya . jo sunayi nahi deta ...)
rey leave...
taani : krishan j kya kya karna parta hey please meri awaaz mat chhin na main rey se door rahoogi ...
out side of the college ...
shivam nd gang ..: kya bol rhe the canteen main ha ... scohoro ge nahi ...
b1 : ha to
shivam : to ab hath lga k dikhao ...
b2 : i warn u phir mat bolna ki btaya nahi tha ...
green hornet : dhamki de rha hey ha ...
b3 : thik hey agar tum logo ko apni band bajvakar apni bezzati karane ka shauk h toh ...
b1:dude tujhe lagata h aise gire hue logo ki izzat bhi h jo hum inki dhulayi kare toh bezzati ho..
b3:yaa dude sach kaha tune..
D gang starts laughing on shivam & team
g1 : guys shh'
other hand vish and neha :

n : vish what doing ab ...?

v : wahi to scoh rhi hoo ...

n : par kya ...

v : idea ...( ha haaa muje kitne funny funny ideas ate hey aaj kal ... main scah main pagal to nahi ho gyi ...)...

n : kya idea ...? vish tell idea to neha ...after hearing whole idea neha ki smile to eyes tak pohanch gyi 😃

n & v : pagal panti b jrrori hey ...😲

taani in girls locker room ...

neha and vish dono taani ke pishe khari hey like a line ok guys housfull 2 ka last scene yaad hey na apko ...last main sab ek doosre k pishe line main khare the ...wha jaan bachan thi or jha band bjani hey ...

taani : maine no kyu bola ...( apni awaz k liye asha hota agar ise ek week ki jgha poori jingi silense rehne ko bola hota ...)

vish : tum isi k kabil ho miss earth lover ...( hahaaa ab taani ka kya hoga ..)...

taani : k ...k kkkon hay ...( esi condition main kon ho sakta hey guys ...of course bhoot ...)...

vish : bhoot ...

taani : bhoot bhiya mane kuj nahi kiya main to bas ...( bhiya ... par wait meri awaj kya boys jesi sound karti hey ..)...

vish : oye main bhayia nahi ... ho samji ...(had ho gyi ise to boys or girls ki awaaz k beech ka difference b nahi pta ...idiot ..)

taani : sorry . sorry .. bhoot didi ...( j to bhoot ko b bhi behan bna leti hey ...)...

vish : main kisi k behan nahi ho ... muje tumhari body chahiye ...( iski body jo sara din girti rehti hey common vish .)

neha jo thik visk k pishe vo this time like🤣

sorry agar neha bolegi to miss earth lover ko pta chal jayega ...

taani : m ...m. meri body kyu main to jab dekho girti rehti ho ..( thank god is chipkli ne khud maan liya ...)...

vish : phir to tum bohat giri hui hoo ...( ha wo to hey ... but itni giri hui ...) ...

taani : please koi to meri help kro ...( tumhari help kare koi dimaag khrab hey kya ...)

vish : koi fayda nahi hey ...

tanni : jay hnumaan gyan kund sagar ...( hahaaa ab bhagwan kya kre jab bhoot hey hi nahi ..)

vish : to neha : hamara kaam to ho gya ise abi lagi rehne do ...

vish : tum abi j bol rhi ho to main ja rahi hoo par jese hi tum ne j bolna band kiya main phir a ajugi ...(relax j ab nahi chup hogi . akhir jaan to sab ko pyaari hey .)

taani ki eyes close hey so neha and vish asani se wha se nikal gyi ...

ab NEHA or vish 🤣

taani like last time 😭

* Outside clg*

Shiv:kya hua meri gang dekh kar dar gaya ??
B2: guys is he insane or sumthing like.. Canteen mein humne rey ki rqst par ise jivan daan dediya aur ab khud darke mare sweat kar raha h aur hume ye keh raha hai ki hum dar gaye??
Green hornet:hey u bloody ppl
(sorry 4 using such a word bt 4 d 1st tym I m writing an action scene so I don't know how boys actually react while fyting) u bettr pack ur bags & go back 4m where u
have cum otherwise..(showing a punch to d gang)
catching wid full strength d fist of green hornet a gal says: Othrwise?? What otherwise??
gal's dress.. (Awwee she's luking so beautiful & strong!!!)


Shivam: KKK kria'
He said kria so loudly dat enire clg echoed & listening dis name Louins rushed out of d clg.
Now all d Loiuns standing & staring at d 2 gangs.
K : yaa Kria ghai..
Shiv: par tum' yaha.. kaise??
K:Shoked?? Tumhe kya laga tha Mr. Cheap Cheat, ki jo tumne mere sath kiya uske baad mei kabhi wapis nahi a paungi??
Shiv:yaa .. I mean..
K: haan sahi soncha tha tumne jis situation tumne mujhe dala uske baad shayad mai kabhi wapis aati bhi nahi, par (luking at d new gang) ye toh mere Dehradun ke frenzz ki wajah se mai aaj yaha hun..
K(continuing): inhone mujhe himmat di ki mai wapas aaun aur har us prblm ko end karu jo tumhare 1 stupid se phone call ki wajah se create hui meri life mein..tumhare 1 call ne Kria ghai ki zindagi badal diii' maine toh fir bhi tumhe maaf kar diya tha aur isliye aaj canteen mein mere frenz ne tumhe chhod diya..
B1: haan aur agar kria ka sms na aya hota toh tu aaj hospital mein hota..
K:Hspital mein toh ye ab bhi jayega qki mai isse mujhe ditch karne ke liya maaf kar bhi dun but dey abused my frenzz !! kria sab kuch tolerate kar sakti hai par apne frenzz ki insult nahii..
Green hornet: Oh so tum hume challenge kar rahi ho Miss ghai, tum aur tumhari ye choti si gang humse panga legi..
Shiv's friend: haan aur wo bhi aisi gang jisme sirf 3 boyzz wo humari itni badi boyzz gang se panga legii..
Green hornet: 4get it guyzz itni choti si gang humara kya bigad legii..
Reyam(2grthr) : tumne aisa kaise sonch liya ki kria ki gang itni choti hai!!
Shivam:guyzz tum log kab aye??
Rey: tu sach keh raha tha viky ye shivam kabhi nahi bada sakta..
Reyam cuming 4ward. Both of dem stud on eithr side of kria lowrd dier eys 2wards kria's hands, & both held kria's hand( 1 hand each which on dier side) tightly.
Reyam: hum sab kria ki gang hai..
Kria lukd at reyam's eyes 1 aftr d othr as dey r standing on hr eithr side(hr eyezz got wet lil bit thiking even though I hurtd dem but still dey care 4 me.)
Reyam noticd hr wet eyzz & squeezed hr hands to comfort hr.
B1 (b1 is kria's childhood friend , & most close friend among all)came & stud infront of kria
B1(placing his hands ovr hr shouldr) :kria our "junior Jhaansi ki raani" kya emotional hoke weak ho jayegii??
Kria smiled & nodded in negation..
B1: So letzz start.
Bhr: ruko agar dhulayi karni hai tu hum sab kyu piche rahe yaar chalo..
Now evry1 surrounded shivam & his gang.
12 Loiuns + 5 new frenz = 17 (C taani is not here in d scene)
Now 17 ppl circling shivam's gang wid full anger..
Viky: So shuru kisse karien??
Now shivam's gang getting afraid, sweats dripping down 4m dier face.
Bhr: Abey sonch kya rahe ho ?? mai deta hun 1(showing a punch)..
B1: ruko.. shuru toh kria hi karegi kyunki jitni pareshani isne kria ko di hai utni kisiko nahi..
Reyam + B1 direct kria 2 start WWF..
Kria starts by giving a tight slap to shivam, Sharon joins hr, now krisha kept on giving 1 aftr d othr slaps to shivam till his cheeks cumpletly turnd red!!
His head strtd getting round & round he fell down , kria bended & strtd giving him punches , beats wid hr entire enrgy ..
By d tym othr Loins managed green hornet & othr fools of shivam's gang , a typicall fighting scene going on wid 3-4 ppl hitting 1 fool of shivam's gang..
Krisha busy only in giving hard hits to shivam..
Shiv( helplessly) :SSSorry!! KKKria.. Sorrry!! Shhharon!!
Krisha: Sorry my foot!!
Sharon : tumne sirf mujhe hi nahi shivam kria ko bhi prblm mein dala u r such a cheap!!
O no cheap is also much bettr infront of u..
Kria: haan Sharon aap thik keh rahe ho, ye shivam itna gira hua hai ki isse cheap kehna cheap word ki insult hogii'
Reyam wid full angr hitting green hornet.
Niky bro enjoying a lot hitting 1 fool 4m shivam's gang.
Viky:yaar nilesh isse marte-2 toh mujhe fir se bhook lagne lagi yaar..
Nil: dude tera naam viky nahi "hungry man" hona chahiye, humesha khane ke bare mwin sochta rehta hai, fil haal is idiot ko marne par concentrate kar fir aaj meri taraf se tujhe treat!!
Amar & Bhart banging another boy..
Amar:yaal kitna maza aa laha(raha) hai is *** ko marte hue..
Bhrt:haan yaar maza toh bahut a raha h , mai iske shakal ki band bajake hi chhodunga, yaad h shivam ki party mein ye kaise vishakha se baat kar raha tha..
Amar: aul (aur) vishakha ke sath dance bhi..
1 boy trapped between vish, simmy, Neha, & Rinny.
Ne: u & ur friend shivam giving dhoka to humari kria know, now neha making ur bhartaa 2day.
Vish( giving a punch on his cheek) : iska toh hum aisa haal karenge ki kisi ke fraud mein kya , kisi ki celebration mein tak uska saathnahi dega..
4 gals banging him wid full on enrgy..
Anothr boy caught amid kria's new gang, which is evn more powerful (aftrall dehradun ki gang h extra power toh hoga hi)
WWF continues 4 a long tym..
Finally shivam & gang laying on ground(floor) like dead bodies(not dead actually)'
B1 calls 4 an ambulance.
Ne: kria we beating dem so badly, if dey doing complain to police den!!
K:Don't worry neha, kuch nahi hoga.. qki hum apni gang le kar inhe marne nahi aaye the , shivam ne apni gang ko clg bulaya tha hume marne ke liye, humne toh sirf apna defence kiya hai..
Sw: aur self defence karna koi crime nahi hai..
G1: Oh toh isliye kria tumne hume canteen mein inhe marne se roka, so dat we can bang dem as a slf defence, jisse humara revnge bhi ho jaye aur hum par koi case bhi na ho!!
Ne(hugging kria) humari kria vry intelligent !!
Vish:hum bhi hai yaar..
So now a grup hug of Weaklings..( wid BG ye hai Dil dosti dance)
All smiling , excpt kriaYaansh.
Kria is standing in between all Weaklings in dier grup hug, while rey is standing far yet dier eyes looking each othr, wid some qsns, answrs, care hope , & most imp. Love'

so end wid dis part..
hope u likd d action+comedy scene ab kisne kaunsa part likha ye toh aap jaan hi gaye hoge coz u know both of us vry well...

So coment tym frenzz all sorts of comentzz , advice/suggestions r heartly welcum..

wid love

Aroma & Neeti

Edited by hARSHA_Neeti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
hey thats gr8 idea...
owl chat group...
oh plz add me if u r serious abt this grp
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Edited :

wow this part was so awesome...
I'm enjoying each line while reading this...

plz update soon
can't wait to read more...
Edited by Kriti_rox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
love the idea of owl club ...
awesome part aroma and neeti...
love the action+drama+comedy..
whole tani rey convo,tani sef talk,vishaka tani convo was..🤣
and kriya is back with a bang..😃
update soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
awesome gyes...that was bang on part
loved it very much
i just loved the way vish tortured that naani hahaha phele 1 week chup rhene ki saza and then bolte rhene ki waooo too good plan...loved it
and entry of kria...awesome
loved the way reyam held kria's hand and assure her that they are there for her and all fight sequence superb...krisha ne to shivam ki band baja di
hahaah poor SHITA dono ka bura haal hogaya🤣
loved this parrt very much
waiting eagerly for next part
continue soon
and neeti please add me to your OWL group...i will love to be part of this group
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ab yeh update mein konsa sa part kisne likha hai yeh zaroori nahi hai
the most important is u both get equally credit for this part bcoz u both r more crazy and more mishavious guys aur tumse panga lena matlab mere shamat bulane barabar hai
so in short ur update was awesome
i loved fight scene krisha keep on beating shiyam was awesome
aur nicky and bharat and amar r also enjoy their fight aur toh aur taani ki toh band hi baaja di tumlogo ne wow vish ko mana padega bhoot banke daraya woh bhi taani ka amazing guys just amazing
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
Amazing Update Neeti and Aroma.
Loved it a lot.
Wonderful part.
Shivam aur ganag ki dhulai ho gayi.

Nice entry of Kria.
Loved it.
Fight sequence was superb.
Last scene Kriyaansh seeing each other with love was so cute.
Thanks for pm.
Dop update next part soon.


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