Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai - Kriyaansh SS - Part 3 Updated

sirani thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#1

Hi everyone i have written the first part of this SS...this was just an idea that came to mind while reading some other FFs...hope you all like it ... Enjoy!!!

Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai ' Kriyaansh SS

It has been six hours by now and she hadn't said a single word. Smriti was getting worried now, this wasn't her daughter. She has never been quite for this long.

They still had a long way to go'they were not even half way to Dehradun'and Smriti felt like she had lost her daughter. This can't be happening she thought'she had kept her away from all of them so that she doesn't lose her'but now she felt that she no longer belonged to her.

Smriti: Kria, Kria beta kuch kha lo tumne kal se kuch nahin khaya hai'kum se kum paani to peelo'

Without saying a single word, Kria took the water bottle out of mom, took a sip from it and gave it back to her. With that she got back to what she was doing earlier'.

Smriti gazed at her daughter with teary eyes'who had been looking out the window even since they got in the car. She didn't know what to do anymore'to make her daughter normal'she tried to think of ways to bring her back'but every time coming to only one conclusion'MUMBAI'no never'I can't let her go back there'but that's the only way out...she was fighting with her inner self by now.

All this while Kria's mind was stuck at her last memory with her love' a tear escaped her eye just before she herd screeching noise'she turned to see its source and noticed a huge truck approaching them at high speed'she look at her mom'she could see her horror struck face'with no intension to save herself she pushed her out of the open door of the car with great force.

All this happened within matter of seconds'.

Kria now waited for her end'she closed eyes to see her lost love one last time'wish him goodbye'by now she was n the last slide of her memory lane when she felt severe pain in head'and she fell unconscious.

'.

2 Years later'

Rehearsal Hall'

Guys hum sub ko VP sir ne apne office mein bulaya hai'and don't please don't look at me like that I don't know what it's about'and don't worry im sure that it nothing serious'

Swayam: kya shivam'aisa ho saka hai kya ki sir ko hume kuch batana ho aur tumhe na pata ho'

Shivam: I know guys but iss bar mujhe sachem nahin pata ki kya baat hai'mere inta poochne ke baad bhi unhone mujhe sirf itna bataya ki its nothing to worry about'

Rey: yea sure dude we believe you'

Sharon: come on guys why are we wasting time'let's just go and figure out ourselves. Agar vo keh raha ki use nahin pata to sach hoga na'vo humse kyun chupaye ga'

Shivam: Yea'let's go now.

As they were moving out of the rehearsal hall'.someone's phone started to ring'everyone looked at each other's faces'when at last Vicky realized whose phone it was'

Vicky: shivam yaar pick you your phone'

He looked at his phone and replied to others saying...guys you all carry on I'll have to take this'it urgent'ill get there as soon as I can.

They nodded their head and proceeded towards VP sir's office'

On the other hand'shivam received his call.

Shivam: hello'kaise ho'aur vo kaisi hai'

Caller: jaisi pelhe thi vaisi hi hai'mila tha main use kal raat'par mujhe useme koi improvement nahin dikha..pehle ki taran nahin ahi vo ab'

Shivam: dekho'aapne jaisa mujh se kaha maine wisa hi kia'ab dazzlers aur weaklings iss tarah se connected hain ki koi unhe cha ke bhi nahin tod sakta'unka bond ab pehle se kai zaada strong hai.

Maine apna vaada poora kia'ab aap nahin mukar sakte'aap ko bhi apna vaada poora karna hoga'usse vapas lana hoga'

Caller: main kosish kar raha hoon shiv par'vo kisi bhi baat ko respond hi nahin karti'ab to mujhe bhi pata nahin chal raha ki main aisa kya karoon jisse'

Shivam: yeh sab meri galati hai'aaj uske saath job hi ho raha hai na vo sab meri vaja sai'

Caller: no shivs'don't blame yourself'I guess no one wanted this but'it was written in her destiny.

Shivam: then I guess desinity will have to chane its moves'

In VP's Office:

Rey knocked on his door asking permission to come in

VP: come in guys'I was waiting for all of you'I wanted to inform you all about something very important'but where is shivam?

Swayam: sir he is attending a call'he said he'll be here as soon as he can.

VP: Oh'that's ok'ill let you all know and you can inform him later on'ok so the thing is that since our college has been winning the dance competition since the last two years and we have also won this year' the school faculty has decided to reward you all for your hard work and dedication towards dance'so we have decided to send you all to Shimla for two weeks for a vacation'as exams are also over'this will be a good change for you all from your regular routine.

Nicky: Wow sir!!! Amazing'Shimla'Thank you they both said together.

VP: No need to thank me'you all earned it. What are you all waiting for now'get going'pack your bags you all are leaving today evening'

All: yes sir'

All were about to leave when the ringing of a phone stopped them'

VP looked at his phone and picked it up quickly sensing a problem'sanju'what happened'is everything all right'why are you calling me at this time of the day?

Sanju: no uncle actually'she is not well'she fainted while she was trying to go upstairs to her room so she hurt her head again'we are taking her to the hospital'I have been trying to get through to shivs and dhruv but both of their phones are busy'.

VP: They must be talking to each other'don't worry ill inform them'take care of her and let me know if you need anything'

Sanju: uncle can you please send shivs to Shimla'I think it will be help as it becomes hard for dhruv to handle everything alone sometimes'

VP: yea I'll tell him right now'

He looks up to see the gang still standing in his office with worried look on their faces'he asked nilesh to bring Shivam to his office right now and asked him to tell him its urgent and to stay on his phone..

Nilesh quickly left the office to find Shivam'he saw him in the rehearsal hall and informed him about VP's message'they hurried towards his office'.

VP: ok Sunju beta'main Shivs to bhejta hoon..tum apna aur uska khayaal rakhna aur muhe hospital ka naam message kar do main dhruv ko bhi vahan bhej doon ga'

Sanju: ji uncle'

With that they disconnected the phone'

By now Nilesh and Shivam reached his office'

As soon as Shivam entered the office he noticed VP's worried face'

Shivam: kya hua'sab theek to hai na'vo theek hai na'

VP just nodded his head in a no'when he received a text message from sanju'

VP: sanju ka phone tha..vo tumhe aur dhruv to call karne ki kosish kar rahi thi par tum dono ka phone nahin lag raha tha to usne mujhe phone kia'vo usse mother Teresa memorial hospital leke gaye hain'uske sar par chot aayi hai'tum please dhruv ko kaho vahan jaane ke liye'sanju akele handle nahin kar paye gi'

Shivam: ji'.bhai'aap please abhi mother Teresa Memorial hospital jaayie'sanju usse vahan leke gai hai'usje sar par chot aayi hai'

Dhruv: haan abhi jaata hoon'tub hi yahan aaja jitni jaldi hosake'

Shivam: aap chinta mat ki jiye'main abhi nikalta hoon'

With that they cut the call

VP: Shivam: tum please abhi Shimla jaao'unhe tumhari zaroorat hai'aur jaise hi vahan pohuncho much khabar kar dena'

Shivam: ji'

Meanwhile the entire gang was listening to their convo'but they could figure that there was someone in Shimla who was close to VP sir and Shivam as was injured'but they didn't know who'and how does that person know both of them'

P.S. ( shivam is not evil in my story'one more thing'please reply and hit the like button if you all liked it'it has one or two more parts to it'I will post the next parts if I get good enough response'Thanks 😊)

Index:

Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 11

Part 3 - Page 17
Edited by sirani - 13 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

133

Views

17.8k

Users

46

Likes

277

Frequent Posters

moon_cupcake thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#2
res
ures
yayy I'm the first one to comment and that to without pm
Loved the title of this SS..
the update was Mind Blowing!!
the way u described everything was just amazing
and i guess that girl is Kriya
I'm happy the shivam is not bad in the SS
eagerly waiting for the next part
Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
Dreamer3003 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
#3
Res
unres
wowww awesome update:):):)
Do continue:):)
Will b waiting for d next part:):)
Edited by kaba3003 - 13 years ago
Black_Stone thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#4
heyyy
jst read ur ss nw nd its miind blowing
luvd ur title, the way u described evvrything
srsly it was awesum
waitin fr da nxt nd plzzz pm me wen u updte nxt😊
-FrozenRain- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#5
This was a nice part.
gr8 concept and start.
guess the gal is Kria nd the gang meets her soon.
Do continue with it plz.


alex714 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#6

I guess dat girl is kriya...
Awesome concept n plz update soon eagerly waiting to read d nxt part...
dancersqueen thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#7
woh kriya hi honga... awesome update...waiting 4 the nxt part...plz pm me...
ShenzK thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
#8
amazing update:):)
awesome... the character of VP and Shivam was really good...
their convo with Dhruv n Sanju was nice...
pls continue and update asap...
n do pm me
metoyou thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#9
please do continue...very interesting and catchy!😊
-Pia- thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 13 years ago
#10
superb
pm me when u update😊

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

5 months ago

छलावा (Chhalawa) ~ A Kriyaansh Three-Shot छलावा (Chhalawa) ~ A Kriyaansh Three-Shot

Book cover by @ExoticDisaster Thanks a lot for this brilliant book cover Author's Note: Based on the Prompt by @SarafWasima in Submit Writing...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Mystic_Muse

11 years ago

~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: LizzieBennet

5 months ago

Love-O-Rama's Pyar ka Trope-fest RESULTS!

Hello, hello writers, graphicers, readers and all IF ites! We are finally ready to announce the results of the much-awaited Pyar ka trope fest...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: FFEditors

6 months ago

Love-O-Rama #1: Pyar ka Trope-fest : Closed

You feel it in your fingers, you feel it in your toes Love is all around you, and so the feeling grows Yes, the day of feeling love, giving...

Expand â–¼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: abavi

4 years ago

Arhi FF: Destiny Games T6 (Chapter 23.2 Updated 3rd Mar 2025)

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand â–¼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".