D3 in shivani's style is back! - Page 2

Originally posted by: shivanivyas

u asking me post my second chap as a comment ???????

yeah . . . Actually,, dats how every1 works here... U can see other ff's too . . . . . U can keep track of ur story as well...

If u write every chapter in new thread,,, then moderators may close the topic . . . . I've seen a case before . . .

ok

Originally posted by: yogini64

yeah . . . Actually,, dats how every1 works here... U can see other ff's too . . . . . U can keep track of ur story as well...

If u write every chapter in new thread,,, then moderators may close the topic . . . . I've seen a case before . . .

okkkay wiil do

Originally posted by: aromakriyaansh

ok

D3 ki starting ki jaad dila di tumne

i like ur writing skill

gud work

keep it up .

next update soon ok

tanx for pm

next time pm me ok

and megical

did u mean jaad hila di !??!! yaa i wanted it to be diff so is it diff?

nice start..love the 1st chap..

awesome start pm me when u continue

A very nice start do continue and pm me.

Nice start...
Waiting 4 d nxt part
Thanx 4 d pm
hey plz giv proper link in the pm nxt time

D3 my style epi 2

Recape : kria shows her moves to rey..& her mom sees that shez dancing

Kria &her mom reaches home

K:maaa who ladke

K's mum :jaa ke sao jao tumhari coll kal se chalu ho rahi hai na &this is the last tym u danced!?

K:haan ma .moves to her room .on the bed kria thinks ma ko baata du mera sapana ..ki muje MBA nahi karna muje toh d..dance karna .dancer bana haithinking these she sleeps

Next moring kria is seeing the same dream .and as usual shez late for her new coll she wakes &gets ready in her cargo & white t-shirt which says " I am the queen of my life" Runs to the kitechen for herbreakfast her mom is read with a sandwhich and wishes her luck for new coll

St.louis is rocking as always kria steps into atrium and her eyes are locked on the notice board which says FOOTLOSSE AUDITIONS!!!!!!! seeing this she remembers her dream and starts moving shez completey in her dreamworld shez dancing,audince giving standing ovation😃😃 and suddenly bashes into someone

K:srry aapko lagi toh nahi?

G:aap?

K: haan aap!?

g:u d 1^st one to call a weakling with respect

k:weakling?!?!?

G:hii me neha ..you?

K: m kria yeh weakling ka matlab kya hai??

N: u , me weakling sharon ,rey rich they dazzllers

K:sharon ,REY dazzellers

N: they cum we head down,they sit we stand

K; joo bhi hoga dekh lenge

N : frenz streches her hand kria holding her hand "frenz"😃

Precap: k: muje fees bharni hai

N: chaloo

They are standing three boyzz walk in & go straight to counter as in they did not saw the line

K: ooyye line cutter

They boyz look back

Rey:tum?????????????

Kria : aap?

Nil: tum isse jante ho?

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