D3 in shivani's style is back! - Page 14

Originally posted by: aishasully

woww awsomme yara wanted to read more plz cntinue it if u cnn

epi 9 on the way...only for u!!!!!!

Awesome...wow kriyam r bro-sis...n wow frm now even kriyansh r going to live together...loved it

hey really nice update...

first of all get well soon..ek din eye pain to dusre din leg pain...

awesome epics...loved it very much

mindblowing update shivani(umm ,...i think i wud call u shivi...cz dat sounds cute as well as short and sweet...may i)...sry i didnt reply on previous updates but now each of ur episode wud have a review from me ...as for dis one...cant believe the shocker-i thought sharon and kria wud be sisters but ye to kuch aur hi ho gaya-swayum and kria bhai-behan...by the way dear-swayam doesnt live wid his father...i mean he lives wid rey...why...but it wud be awesome to see the 3 of them in the same house...waiting for next episode...jaldi shoot karo yaar(😉...)

Originally posted by: Shweta-kriyansh

mindblowing update shivani(umm ,...i think i wud call u shivi...cz dat sounds cute as well as short and sweet...may i)...sry i didnt reply on previous updates but now each of ur episode wud have a review from me ...as for dis one...cant believe the shocker-i thought sharon and kria wud be sisters but ye to kuch aur hi ho gaya-swayum and kria bhai-behan...by the way dear-swayam doesnt live wid his father...i mean he lives wid rey...why...but it wud be awesome to see the 3 of them in the same house...waiting for next episode...jaldi shoot karo yaar(😉...)

go ahead with shivi...

on your demand aishasully

D3 my style episode 9

Rey opens the door..: hey hii ..kyu bulya that ere dad ne?

Sw: who…hmm…mare satth ekk aur house mate aaya hai

R: kaun????????

Swayum walks away..rey sees kria & kria sees rey

R: aap??? Confussed & happy

K: tum?????? Happy& shocked

Sw: aarre aaj tak jo aap bolti thi who tum…aur rey tu tum se sidha aap!!

R: I mean TUM?

K: haan main bhi aap??

Sw: kria,meet my house mate..rey meet my sister

R: sis???????

Sw: yesss!!!!!!!!!!!

R : lekin tut oh apne dad ke saath gaya tha

Sw: aarree sab bolta hun par indar chalk e!

R: ya…helps with the bags

Kria entres the house& shez shocked… (aab do youngboyz rahte ho toh ghar clean thodi hoga????)

Kapde idhar...udhar padhe hai…dining table pe char din pelhe ka pizza box haishoes ki ekk pair dining table ki chair pe tu dusri sofa pe…kitchen toh aisa ke kabhi khana hi na banna ho sif coffee ya tea hi bani ho…coke ke thode canes sofa pet oh thode grounbd pe…curtains asie jo wall colour se match na ho..(wall is blue in colour while curtains are yellow)….wall pe stickers hi stickers jis pe lag lag msg's likhe ho..

Sw: thoda kharab hai..

K: koi nahi bhai..kal Sunday hai na HUM sab clean kar lenge…then looks at rey who is standing behind her..i mean bhai aap aur main..

R: laughing : nahi main bhi help karunga..Leaning towards kria : aab toh yeh humara ghar hai..kria blushes..swayum removes eyes as a protective brother …

Kria is standing ther…

R : tum mere room mein raho..mein swayum ke room mein jata hun..

Sw: will do

K: but yeh toh three bedroom ka ghar hai toh mere wajse aap pareshan kyu ho rahe ho?????????

R: tumhari wajse muje koi pareshani nahi hoti..& kria stares into his eyes *LLHH start ho gaya*

Swayum started to cough (jaan bujke)

They came back into their senses….

R: actually who tersa room

Sw: let's go & see

(suspense : guess karo kya hai who third room ..)

Precap: third room ka razz khul ta hai!

Suggestion, complains &feedback..are welcomed as usual

if its short soorryyy

res

awesome update...loved it very much