IPKKND SS: How Kunal Roy Won (Chap. 10) UPD:8/02

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Like you allude, those in shock focus on the wrong end of the stick.

I'm no different.

I'll begin here:

Barry White!? Really, Anjali?

Was it -Can't Get Enough of Your Love, Babe-?

(Yes, that is a serious question!)

I love love love this.

Your writing has such structure. Architecture, even.

Loved how you kept returning to the lavender silk robe.

The visual of a dark hairy man--then the counter-visual of Anjali wearing it at breakfast countless mornings--back again to Kunal in lavender.

I totally could see the scene. Anjali covering herself.

(Yes, no brother should have to witness that! Arnav's eyes not gouged out like a tragic Greek figure)

Oh, yes--I want more.😊

Maya

My darling, I can't get enough of your love babe

Girl, I don't know, I don't know why

Can't get enough of your love babe

Oh, some things I can't get used to

No matter how I try

Just like the more you give, the more I want

And baby, that's no lie

Oh no, babe

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bungeejump

@bungeejump

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

What a great start! Loved the first one and can't wait to read more of this!

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irene

@rennie

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

loved it man...omg...briiliant beginning..."f*king sister"...too good...pls do continue...have to say it was an explosive start...

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enigma17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Awkward!! Awkward!! Awkward!! I would have given my eye teeth to have seen Mr Self Imposed Composed Man of The Year's face when he barged in and witnessed his sister un flagrant
Barry White? Really Navin?

Thank you! Thank you! Once again I am excited and cannot wait for you to continue

Annie

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Omg... That must have been so awkward. I it know why but I was laughing throughout the update. I am so happy you are continuing this. I loved the start and I can't wait for the next part. Please continue soon.

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NothingLasts

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

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Poor Arnav is scarred for life!! But I love that you're writing about Kunal and Anjali!!

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Oh My God! That's one hell of a scene to walk in,especially if its your sibling! Frilly bathrobe 😆

Yayee! You are continuing with the Kunal-Anjali story. Kunal belongs to the undeniably hotness personified group of men. *swoons*

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Imagine walking on your sister making out with anyone let alone a guy whom you hate. Its probably going to put Arnav off sex for a few good weeks.

Where can I find this Kunal Kapoor? I want a piece of him. He is more intriguing than the might ASR.

Thanks for the PM.