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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

That was mind blowing! The intense pain Arnav was suffering could be felt through your words! It was marvelously written!
Awesome as always!

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Sarah Ashraf

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Nice one! I love how arnav was suffering *evil smile* ;)

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pinkpanther9

@pinkpanther9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

You are a very gifted writer.

Edited by pinkpanther9 - 13 years ago

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Arshi143

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

I feel this os and ur os dreams are linked... One yaar gap n kakori connection and her cutting everyone off... It's like his n hers point of view almost.. Mayb u can make them both prequels to a new ff?

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the_breeze

@the_breeze

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Hey that was a BEAUTIFUL OS... Vividly described, emotions amazingly portrayed 👏

I do hope you are thinking of continuing this one... It has all the potential to become an absolutely thrilling and enjoying story 😊

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: kabar1978

Not stalking your work dear, chanced upon this, you are doing what I really want most writers on the Forum to do, make Arnav suffer, pine for Khushi and face hell like she did. I do not take sadist pleasure, I am not made like that, I want justice to be served, Khushi suffered a lot because of Arnav's ego, and he has to pay the price for it, let be through heartache, tortured existence and bitterness, he has to pay, only then will there be a karmic balance.

It's not sadism at all! I am a biiig believer of justice. Simultaneously, I can also see shades of grey.. lol! But what I really believe is you have to work hard and suffer for something that you really want to truly appreciate it! So thank you for reading! 😆

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: bluetaj
U are continuing right?

LOL! No... not really. It's meant to be an OS. I think I'll keep it as one...

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Applebee

@Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Hot.Pink.Heels
That was mind blowing! The intense pain Arnav was suffering could be felt through your words! It was marvelously written!
Awesome as always!

What's love without sufferings? 😉 Thank you for reading and for these lovely words! 😆

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

nice os..

i hope u continue it...

thanks 4 d pm

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Just loved it... How beautifully you have shown Arnav' pain n suffering..
How do you really manage to do this i wonder always...

Please please pretty please continue this...

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