You know when you feel like somethings happened just so that it can irritate you. I mean seriously, i sit here on my laptop, in my room, reading this whole thing through, and then you finish on
"she'd grabbed him by the collar and pulled him in for a kiss"
really. I swear that fate is just not on my side.
You are sooo goood. I bet there's like an readers haven working around in your brain, which all of us are just dying to get into. Its wonderful though, that you've decided to share your amazing talent with us though. Afterall, what use is a talent, if no-one knows you've got one!
I adore the ASR in this story for some reason, because his hot and cold behaviour just geniunely interests me! And the whole fake girlfriend fiasco just made me LOL, especially his reactions.
Its nice how you've included the insecurities of many girls in your story as well. I don't think that people realise how common it actually is, including me, until a few of my friends started showing this behaviour. Thankfully, they are, slowly, but steadily getting over it, and i hope that Priya and other girls out there like her, will stop feeling so insecure.
A woman shouldn't have to make herself into a walking stick to feel beautiful.
Anyways, enough from me. Just update before i go bonkers !!
Thanks
Celiza xox
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