Fatal Attraction-Thread Six {Chap 24- Pg.44 *NEW}

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

Wow ji! Kissing in the night.. good on you Jalaibie bai

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batgirl67

@batgirl67

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Posted: 13 years ago

#472

poor khushi! she has been through a lot! cant wait to see arnav reaction toward the kiss!

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

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Posted: 13 years ago

#473

I love your Khushi! :D She is all spunky and spontaneous personified eh inspite of the things she has faced in life! :) And she found it in her to share her past with Arnav and he listened patiently, taking her to the lake was so sweet - Its their spot now!! Awww.. Why cant they always be like this? :) Well.. Not always. I meant then it wouldn't be Fatal Attraction! :) I've stopped harping about cliffhangers now. Every writer seems to love those! :P SO going with the flow.. Speaking of which.. Is this the kiss that was mentioned in the Arnav POV one shot you had written all that while back? Eeeps! Does that mean we have some more romance coming up?!! *Excited* Thanks for the PM! :D

Edited by Psychedelic - 13 years ago

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Nazibah

@nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#474

Cliffhangers my arch nemesis!!!!

AMAZING update!!!!!!

Poor Khushi having to go through so much!!!!

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suadvani

@suadvani

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#475

I loved the update, I always do.. :)

Loved how she opened up to him... And yay she kissed him.. Can't wait to read ur next chptr :)

Thanks for the PM

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zooni

@zooni.blue

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Posted: 13 years ago

#476

oh wow that was emotional! cliff hanger ki quweeen !!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#477

nyc update :)
thnx for Pm
so she had a terrifying past...ohh why poor khushi is all stuck wid idiots n here m nt saying about arnav m talking about aaditya...

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Soulmate27

@Soulmate27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#478

Hey ! reyabear (i am going to stick to this name coz i like it a lot 😊 )

First - dont apologize...short or long update shld not be the issue...u r sharing ur creativity...thats all that matters 😃

Second - beautiful bonding between the two...silence talks from the heart 😳

Third - love the scenery description...felt as if i was there 😃

Four - of course THANK U for the pm 😃

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hari93

@hari93

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Posted: 13 years ago

#479

😲 She Kissed him...😲 OMG...!!!

Awesome update... Loved it...😊

That was so emotional...😭

aww... Poor Khushi... felt bad for her...😭

and Arnav was crying wid her...awww...😳

it was such a cute update...

Can't wait to knw wat is gonna Arnav's reaction..

Can't wait to read more...

Plz do continue soon...

Thanks a lot for the PM...😃

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prayasbanetta10

@prayasbanetta10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#480

👏 You're A Shining Star Reyabear ! oops honeyimhomeee ! It was an incredible update and just so beautiful . I was reading the update while listening to 'THE DAYLIGHTS -YOU KNOW WHO YOU ARE' and I was just amazed at how what I was listening has been put into some expressive words by you . I found similarity between the song and the update right from Khushi being sad in the beginning and then Arnav soothing her silently promising her everything mentioned in the song. God! It was just breathtaking! Although all your updates have been stupenduos but this one has been my utmost favourite one. Thank you so much for giving this superb update.You are phenomenal! I think this has been my longest comment ever and I really hope I haven't bored you with it . It's just that I'm so overwhelmed by this fantastic piece of work.

Edited by prayasbanetta10 - 13 years ago