Bewafa Hum Nahi The (RT MC) ff - Page 7

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

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You started a new FF...Yay!!!!!!!!!!!! 🥳

I came 2nd...double Yay!!!!!!! 🥳😆

i loved the line you wrote under the title in the 1st post

Great title (good work Rashmi)...ur title always remind me of songs

Now coming to the prologue..

It was heart-wrenching..

Loved ur description of the pain and hurt..

The prologue was flooding with lot of emotions in both of them...so I won't comment on that right now..

This glimpse of ur story has certainly piqued my curiousity...eagerly waiting for the 1st part

Seems to be an interesting story with different characters...

Lov u..

Cont soon..😃

P.S I was listening to Taylor Swift's song "Haunted" while re-reading this..it may not be apt for the situation...but the song definitely amplified the impact of ur prologue..

Originally posted by: ridzzi

and the stable boy definitly is our prince...and she broke his heart...the prologue was realted to the scene when they were 12 and she broke his heart right...??????...plz clear this...

Originally posted by: prahelika

i'm really sorry if it got a little confusing ridz...

the prologue is actually a small part of a whole update...and the update is a bit far to come...

some twists will keep coming till then...

she did misjudge him at 12 but the punishment was not as severe as the prologue or at least that's what she thinks...

something very brutal had been done to him 7 years back but she is not aware of it and one day she'll know it...

so the prologue is not from their childhood...it is from a future that is not too far to come...

hope my explanation was convincing enough...😊

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

aapse jyada acha tho koi explain kr hi nhi sakta

Originally posted by: prahelika

but i know a better explainer who clears my innumerable doubts in LSS😉...

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

di aapko mujhse jagda karna h iss issue pr, dekh lo, haryanvi se panga le rahe ho,

bola na, u r best...

tho sunn lo bas...jo main kah diya so kah diya :P

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

re.served...

i m late, sry,

its bcoz of studies... i hate it :P

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so di, be ready for ma biggest comment til now, ... i love big comment...😃

juz juz for ma prazi di, u deserve it coz u are...wondo gal...cool name,i like it😎

yes, abhi aapka yeh new name h, wondo gal...

so, first ur writing style, let me first claim maself as the biggest praiser of urs,

not a fan, coz they r crazy...but i m crazy aba ur writting, i observe ur writing, i try to follow it too, like pranita di's...unoe the way u mingle everything is juz so apt,...i lov it..., ur style, the way u add visual factors to scenes, d way u enhance a character wid emotions, their memories and attitude...prani is one of my fav writer too😃...aww it feels great to be able to influence at least one amazing writer here

and yes, the persona of princess- the aura, the distinguish psyche is so much well brought up,

u r damn successful in creating a world around readers, if not oders, dan surely me, ......no matter how much down to earth our princess,the environment where she grew up taught her to like and live in luxury...

okay, now cming to stry...

well stry strted wid two positive notes, though princess is brought up in a royal family, but she is down to the ground...

at least she dont care aba d smear b/w commoners n royals......thank god...our princess created pretty bad impression in the prologue😆...ab readers ka gussa thoda shant hoga...

but fact can't b denied, differences will alwayz b in b/w...be it dese two friendz or upcoming lovers...(our rtmc )...yup...had i made rt a prince here this issue would never have surfaced...

secondly, she dont fee anything fr asmik... i wanna do :P to asmik......🤣

nithi is gud,

but, our princess is not planning to hurt her family,

priority to her family is uppermost... dis will be prob later, i feel,

well dis is the stry of course......u caught the hint...😉

family bonds are still strng here in royal family, ...dats gud,

gradma is closest to her,

but i feel she wont be able to help our princess in future, ...to understnd her love,

coz she is a royal to, the most elder, she has to b the first to think of royalty......chalo yeh toh grandma ki entry ke baad pata chalega...🤔

mom dad, bhai. evryone is cool.😊

airport scene...

i felt really witnessing it,

literally evrythng came in frnt of ma eyes...

all live

so, our princess is best, no doubt, god's one of the finest creations...

she is blessed wid the best beauty and ...;a secret(his love too ..in future))...yup 😉

dis charater less man, asmik, i hated him frm vry first line of ur descprition aba him...

hate him, cunning eyes , grey colour...yuck, grey looks so fade n awful...

i dinn like him a bit too :P...i really wish u appear in the story too😆...that man will be blind in seconds...

so, he alone came to escort her...useless man, dont have any oder wrk,🤣

he is jealous of his own twin bro, that's really bad...

did u see the way he claimed himself 17 mins elder... how funny and neap n cheap...no i didn't see...i only wrote😆

awwhh!!... he is the vampy here...😆

o ma god, so our princess remember him, 7 years ago, too...

only he cn tame dat horse... he is gallant n brave for sure den...

i loved him in his childhood description too...

he realize his status n difference in dat age too...how mature...in age of 12, merely...

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hey u asmik...demon...monster u lok...

hw dare u call our hero bast##d..??????.u mOr#n, Or@Gone, sc#mbag , mud bl##d...call urself a royal...🤣

be u rich in money, but u r neap in culture, character and ur tongue... yup

evn our princess is enjoying his ego smash...me too...i want one day that asmik shud be rudely crushed by our hero......he already does it...remember he is a creature asmik never can tame...

seriously want that in stry...

hmm. i hav no confusion in this ud,

coz u way u explained...and brought ur characters out, lovd it...thank u...

sooper dooper hit ud, seven⭐️ ud it is...

lovd it thoroughly, every bit...

i noe mera res pehle hi hoa rakha tha, that was almost 2 pages back😆...

but still yahin kr diya,

next time i promise to cm up wid a name for asmik vampy too, it will b cool one...i promise...now i have to update soon to know the name😆...

ud soon,

desperately waiting...

plz di, do consider previous line seriously...sachchi i'll update soon...

plz ud tumse hi soon too......coming this saturday😳

lov u wondo gal.

luv u too🤗

Originally posted by: prahelika

....no matter how much down to earth our princess,the environment where she grew up taught her to like and live in luxury... yes, dis wil alwayz b d hurdle, ...obstruction in our lov stry 😭

...u caught the hint...😉...see, i m fit to b called ur chotu sis. 😎

...chalo yeh toh grandma ki entry ke baad pata chalega...🤔..suspense, i like it

...i really wish u appear in the story too😆...that man will be blind in seconds...yeah!, i swear, i wud hav snatched his eyes balls frm ma claws...hw dare he watch ma mc in lush... he bl##dy. wwat, do i stnd a chance of cameo here😲...juz kidding.😆

.no i didn't see...i only wrote😆...i knew u wont leave dis chance to poke me again...i worte it purposely...sahi kaha h, badi baheno k kya kahne :P

....he already does it...remember he is a creature asmik never can tame...but i demand a full flourished scene..😍..dis one we imagined by own..

, that was almost 2 pages back😆...u remember ma re too...so cute di

..now i have to update soon to know the name😆...evn me wanna noe ma hero's name

.sachchi i'll update soon...

plz ud tumse hi soon too......coming this saturday😳...sat, 😲long wait...