You breathe life into me.. Pt4-pg38 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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oooh hoo! superb can u please continue? thankyou so much for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Excellent!! Very good start!!! It makes us want to read more!!!!
Really looking forward to the next part!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: niania13

Excellent!! Very good start!!! It makes us want to read more!!!!
Really looking forward to the next part!!!


Thanks a lot dear 😊...
Will update ita asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey really cool...pls continue..have been waiting for updates for your OS for quite sometime 😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You breathe Life into Me..

Part 2...

Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder and froze.
"Roshan? Is this you? What happened to the lights?",she heard a harsh voice behind her ears.
She was in a fix. She didn't know what to do. Thank god, it was pitch dark so the guy couldn't see her and thank god, she had tied up her hair in a bun.
"Roshan??? I asked what happened to the lights?",the voice asked again.
Khushi took a huge breath and shrugged her shoulders.
"Then fix them up! It is pitch dark here",the voice said.
Khushi nodded. Her back was facing the man so she couldn't see him either.
Suddenly they heard a voice from outside.
"Manish? Look what I found. Come quickly!"
Manish took his hand off from Khushi's shoulder and went out after telling her to fix the lights again.

Khushi stood like a statue till Manish was out of the room. She heard him stumble on the stairs due to darkness. And finally it was all quiet. She took a huge sigh of relief. She saw a glimpse of light coming from a slit on the wall. She stumbled towards it and realised that it was a door leading to another room. She opened it and crept inside the room cautiously.

The room was quite small. There was a flickering bulb blinding her. There were wooden boxes kept inside and in the middle there was a man ruthlessly tied up to a chair. She was facing the back of the chair.
As the thought of who it could be crossed her mind, her breaths became heavy. She gently tiptoed towards the chair. She clutched her chest as she walked around the chair and saw who the lump on the chair was...

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"What is this? A piece of cloth?",Manish asked.
"No, I guess it is a dupatta",his companion said.
"What the hell is it doing here?".
"I don't know!"
"A woman's dupatta?",Manish said thinking deeply,"I guess someone is here",he said in a low tone.
He loaded his gun and went inside.

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Khushi clutched her chest even more harder. He was tied with ropes on the chair. His eyes were closed. He looked weak, fragile. Tears welled up in her eyes as she saw him in that painful state.
"Arnav",she whispered to herself.
Suddenly, the door crashed open as Manish and his companion came running inside with their guns.
Arnav jerked his eyes open on the sudden noise.
"There is no one here Manish",his companion said.
"Go over there and check ,Anit",Manish retorted.

But they couldn't find anyone.
Manish looked angrily at Arnav. He went towards him and clutched his collars and pulled him.
"Who is there, TELL ME!",he shouted at him.
Arnav just stared at him ,expressionless.
"Answer me, dammit", he said and banged the gun on Arnav's forehead.
Arnav winced in pain. His eye lids were pressed against each other unable to bear the excruciating pain.
"Dump that dupatta onto him!", Manish shouted and proceeded towards the door. Before he went out he said," Just to inform you, you are going to die soon",he completed with an evil smirk on his face.
Anit threw the dupatta on Arnav which landed on his face and he marched out of the room.
Arnav loosened his pressed eye lids as he could feel her smell. He gently opened his eyes and saw the pink haze in front of him.
"Khushi",he whispered. The dupatta slowly drifted off from his face and fell on his lap.
His lips curved into a painful smile as he recognised her dupatta. His left eye was getting blinded by the blood flowing down from his forehead. Suddenly his smile vanished and as he looked in front of him.
Khushi stood there, tears flowing down her eyes.



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Edited by supriya.ipkknd - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good part! There's a lot of suspense! I can't wait to read what Khushi will do to save them both!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😊ouch .! you again stopped at the climax..atleast let them meet na...m getting excited more than them..hmm but all in all it was SUPERB.! continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow really awsome loved it waiting for the next part ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice!!! she found him!!! awesome!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loving this OS turned SS. Can't wait to read more. Where did she hide when they came to check in the room?

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