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dhahi

@dhahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Arnav n Anjali... against each other...

I don kno y but i m reminded of an old tamil movie by Rajini calld Pandiyan...

in tat movie also, Rajini's elder sis ll b a police officer n she ll arrest rajini for som of his rowdy acts...

but in t end, she ll com to know tat he was a cbi officer under cover...

is it somthin lik tat? but Anjali s a FBI rite? thn who els c an Arnav wrk for...? Is thr any othr orgn. more powerful than fbi, may b interpol?

r is it tru tat Arnav s actually a bad guy...

n khushi s in his hands... they both kno each othr...?

aaah.. u r makin me think too much...

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DhwaniKS

@DhwaniKS

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Um not confused...no not at ol...knowing ur style,...un perfectly fine...

Loved it totally ..sumthing fresh and diff...

A character sketch will b welcomed...though v pretty much know about d main characters...only arnie z identity needs to xplained...bt dat I guess can b done in d coming updates...

1 request...actually 2...

a. Pls dont forget about it after initiating an idea...i know it takes a lot if effort from u writers to carry forward a story...kudos to u for dat...bt even v readers feel sad if v dont get progresses on stories dat r really close to our hearts for some over a month or so...like its happening wid Saga Of d Wicked(my personal fav)...
I dont mean to either b complaining or offensive...and if I did in any way or d other...my heartfelt apologies...

b. Um a bit busy nowadays...cant access IF everyday...and I just read d bundled up pms in d lil tym I get between d work...so in case u r scrutinizing ur buddy list..pls dont cut me off ur buddy list for d lack of likes and comments...

Remember...i luve ur work and ur style of writing...

Stay blessed
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Dhwani Kapoor Shergill

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Cheryth

@Cheryth

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Posted: 13 years ago

#103

👍🏼Just read dis SS

as suggested by my bestie 'Dalmuthuya'

so far the suspense is killing me 🤢

& I cannot wait for more 😆

I really really & Honestly do wish dat you continue wid dis SS

It's gorgoeus and well, am in love wid dis 1st chapter itself 😳

Love Arnav and his piercings and his character is unique and captivating (da image is simply imprinted in my imagination) 😉

& how on earth does Khushi & Arnav already know each other ? 🤔

(Now dat I wanna definitely know) 😃

please - I beg you in (I'm in my knees now begging you) 😭

do continue😊 !!!!!!!!

this is amazing 😍

you've done such an amazing job wid the first chapter itself👏

(given da fact dat you've had his storyline in your mind since 14 ⭐️)

Edited by Cheryth - 13 years ago

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rana5

@rana5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Definitely worth continuing silly!😉

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sharma_vartika

@sharma_vartika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

lovd the concept! Nicely writtn... Do update n pm me!

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SedonaScarlet

@SedonaScarlet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

WOW!

Are you kidding?! You HAVE to continue this! :D

I wanna see what happens next ! Its sooo cool! Arnav with piercings?HOT ;9

Cant wait to read more!

Thanks for the PM and sorry for the late comment :/

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barunxoxo

@barunxoxo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

this is FRESH! do continue with the story!
khushi and arnav seem to have a past in this..:P
And anjali with the FBI?COOL! :D
thanks for the pm :) update asap

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..Anita..

@..Anita..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

This sounds interesting and different

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BiggestDEKfan

@BiggestDEKfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

WOW!!! Now thts something very original!!! Very nice!!!!!! PLZ Pm me for this ff 2 :P and the other one is... Uhhh... Ya!!!!!!!! My bad boy tht 2 PLZ!!!!! I AM IN LUV WID ALL UR works!!!! They r all very well written and as they call y u r actually a very dark writer!! :P :P update soon!!!!!! :D :)

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Banginbengali

@Banginbengali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#110

Okay first Id just like to say sorry...had gone out of state for the long weekend..n new work is killin me..so extremely sorry for bein so late..but I missed you Eviffie!!! ;) N this new SS...Oh my bloody goodnes this is to damn BRILLIANT!! omg the story is so different...n the characters OMG I absolutely love!!

Ufff Arnav is real bad in this one n I love that...n Anji...OMG cant believe shes n FBI...WOW!! N no sisterly love I see...cant believe he had her in gunpoint...n Aman is his buddy in crime...this is to good..luv how Arnav groaned when Anji called him chotay!! N Khushi knows him from before!!??!! Oh my god...my jaw kept on droppin lol :P...n OMG he had Khushi on gunp point to!! This is such a thriller!!

Cant waite for the next update...you do it again Eviffie...floor me with your hatke ideas!! :D.. Loved it...hope to see an update soon :)..<3