IPKKND FF: Kidnap Thread 1(Thread 2&3 link added)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hope he'll look at that pictures soon !!!

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Rehanna aka Parri

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: SiMaR.cool
hes changing...well dats gud...cuz his blinded-in-anger avatar disgusted me...thre is still sumthng dat i dun lyk...d way he is forcing himself upon khushi...dat is d worst thng that he can do...even if tmrrw he regrets his mistake n tries to make up for it...but still...dis is an unforgivable beastly sin. Presently, i hate him but wud still lyk him change. update soon.

but sweety see the circumstances around him... he is blinded by the profs around him so for him khushi is a person responsible for every worse thing happening in his life... so Arnav's behaviour is quite justifyable ... but i would say he is a softer person here coz he is a charachter not real one... u knw wht ppl do to such ppl in real life.. they dont wait much to harm tht person... hope u understand.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Black_Paradize
i knw ...thts why 😳... but u knw as its a dark kina story.. so why not ... em thinking em thinking... 🤔

oh evn if he hadnt she could still b preg😉 😆...oh he betr fall in love she is still tolerating him aftr wat hapnd.

and ya SAM88 teenage pregnancy is harmful mentally and physically both well my nani got married at the age of 15 but thankfully had first child at the age of 20...and she has bloody worked really hard to uplift herself from learning to read and write to becoming the village leader and ensuring my mum is educated...but unfortunately didnt hapn the same with her sister in law she had 3 children by the age of 18😲 ...and wen evr i sit wth my nani she'll start of with these tails ...so i think black_paradize is ture its a dark story but somwhr tue also

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: lovespell
Beautiful update. We get to see the soft side of ASR - very caring . Loved it. Khushi started to feel something. What are in those pictures? Hopefully proves khushi innocence. and what might be the ASR's reaction. love to see it. please update soon. This story rocks

thanks sweety 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: oops-whoops

oh evn if he hadnt she could still b preg😉 😆...oh he betr fall in love she is still tolerating him aftr wat hapnd.

and ya SAM88 teenage pregnancy is harmful mentally and physically both well my nani got married at the age of 15 but thankfully had first child at the age of 20...and she has bloody worked really hard to uplift herself from learning to read and write to becoming the village leader and ensuring my mum is educated...but unfortunately didnt hapn the same with her sister in law she had 3 children by the age of 18😲 ...and wen evr i sit wth my nani she'll start of with these tails ...so i think black_paradize is ture its a dark story but somwhr tue also

ok u guys tell shd i made her pregnant or not... i mean by ASR offcourse 😆 and well tell u guys one more thing... my own mother got married in her 17th year and when she was 18 i was with her ... and she was totally fine.. and regain the same slim body after 2 months .

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Posted: 13 years ago

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That was AMAZING.. 👏 i like how ASR is showed

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: zigzagway_sadi
I just want arnav to know how much of a big mistak is he doing torturing kushi like that... and repent a big time for his mistake... happy that khushi didn't say sorry to him and remained strong there... and arnav hope that he sees the photo soon and comes to know the truth...but at the end the way he was caring for khusi..loved it...

Awesome part...

continue soon can't wait for the next part...

thanks for the pm..

take care

thanks for sucha lovely comment😳😳😳😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Black_Paradize

ok u guys tell shd i made her pregnant or not... i mean by ASR offcourse 😆 and well tell u guys one more thing... my own mother got married in her 17th year and when she was 18 i was with her ... and she was totally fine.. and regain the same slim body after 2 months .

its ur story honey just write... what u have envisioned we like what u write and thats the reason v r here so do wht u think ur ff should reflect to us...and ya all i can suggest teenage pregnancy is still an impt issue in r society and v cant run away and i think with ur ff u can tell how we can make the woman stronger and positive towards her future.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi! 😆 I dont want to suggest anything to your story as your story is PERFECT in its own STYLE. But i know girls of 17 couldnt withstand harsh and violent sexual activity, they can bear it once or twice but vigorous tortures will lead to suicidal mentality.

A girl who is too naive to understand what is going on with her sexually will be literally confused and depressed at this stage. She cant bear when people speak ill of her character. Even in this stage she wnts to fight back...

People may say your story is different, dark, cruel but i say it is way too unique... Realities are much harsher than that...

I've read your previous ff RAKSHAS too.( was unique in its own way) Dont get carried away by negative cmntz plz. Stay firm in your story and continue in your own style.

ALL THE BEST DEAR...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi! 😆 I dont want to suggest anything to your story as your story is PERFECT in its own STYLE. But i know girls of 17 couldnt withstand harsh and violent sexual activity, they can bear it once or twice but vigorous tortures will lead to suicidal mentality.

A girl who is too naive to understand what is going on with her sexually will be literally confused and depressed at this stage. She cant bear when people speak ill of her character. Even in this stage she wnts to fight back...

People may say your story is different, dark, cruel but i say it is way too unique... Realities are much harsher than that...

I've read your previous ff RAKSHAS too.( was unique in its own way) Dont get carried away by negative cmntz plz. Stay firm in your story and continue in your own style.

ALL THE BEST DEAR...a

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