New FF: Shadows of the Sun- Ch 2 on 12

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Rabba-Ve-Delena

@Rabba-Ve-Delena

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Gripping start, give me a good thriller type story over romance any day!

I love the name suggestions!

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

interesting concept...hard one...Good Luck!

I'm looking forward to reading it...so A/K are family friends...where was K hanging that she got picked up by nasty people???

-Sona

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Cetronia

@Cetronia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Very intriguing start...loving it already...thanks for the PM...

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: preetihere
I knew it when i read about the cage, its scary but ur lil footnote is surely going to make me brave this..
good one , u are developing urself as a writer...
it was intense and the flashback eased in slowly...brilliant! Please do continue..

😳 😳 😳 😳

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NaLeyton23

@NaLeyton23

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Really interesting!

Cant wait for the update!

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---Nisha---

@---Nisha---

Voyager

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

NOTE:

Finally decided on a tittle 🥳

Both were very good and I would like to thank both my friends for suggesting them. Thank you so much guys. You are awesome 🤗

I hope you all like it...It has a much deeper meaning than you think and you will find out as the story unfolds. 😛 😃

Edited by ---Nisha--- - 13 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

awesome update poor khushi she knows arnav then hope fully he won't stop looking for her thanks for the pm

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

poor khushi.. but this things happen.. though not the girls in those cages in real life get to escape.. i am very interested in reading this FF.. very nice concept and beautifully written..