Shades Of Grey- CHAPTER 12 (PG-143) UPDATED!! - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
What a gorgeous read.
I love what you have created together. There is so much meat to this story.
I almost wish that the characters had different names--because I feel that my preconceptions of Arnav/Khushi and their history interferes with the richness of these two entirely new entities and this fresh story. (just thought I would say that)
I look forward to more.
My favourite bit:
Arnav never dared tell her that it was the opposite - That her hero had feet of clay. It was her who had helped him be courageous. The thought of becoming guardian to a 13 years old, he smiled, would change any man to become - something more. To do his best. Especially when she was someone like... Khushi Kumari Gupta. She had been with him from the times in the hovels to now. How was he ever to go on without her?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#12
WOW<3
Superb<3
Loved it<3
Cont soon:)
Thanks for the PM<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
This was just great and very different... brilliant! A different perspective and setting all together! Excited to read more!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very interesting first chapter. & I love the title, by the way. Suits both Arnav and Khushi perfectly- he runs, she denies. Would love to see how their relationship progresses, considering the deep bond they already share. I think we readers are in for a great treat from the both of you. Looking forward to the rest of the story.👍🏼 & thank you for the pm!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Eeeks! Two of my favourite writers together! Wohooo! #excited
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thats a great start... I enjoyed how you connected the past and present, looking forward to more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What a wonderful concept, totally new :)

Looking forward to it :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looovvveeeddd it... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG :O i saw your nam e.. take sneak peak in it .. what i see new FF :OO

I hate/(love) Gargee .. dude when will u update the other FF ... i miss them so much esp memory one alot :(( update kar de woh bhii , yaad kar laa unko bhi yaar

so coming to the imp part.. the concept looks amazing , both u will do wonders with it for sure. u two are such beautiful writer, it's gonna be fun reading it :) Keep it up!


my comments will be irregular due to summer classes and part time job so I am sorry for small comments but i will try leaving feedback when I can :) Thank you
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3 words => Absolutely Love It! :))

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