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Posted: 13 years ago
Swayam*whispering*:kria kitni achi hai...woh toh devtha hai!!

Rey*himself*:swayam is the best guy in whole gang!!!*jealous*

All boys start giggling asrey was jealous...

Rey:tum log has kyun rahe ho?

nilesh:tu toh commited man ban gaya yar seriously itni jealous woh bhi ek ladki ke liye...!?

vicky:haan yar kriya ko maana padega!

all boys:kria mata ki jai!!

Rey:SHUT UP !!!

🤣🤣🤣

gr8 update dear👏👏
do update soon 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update jst luvd it!!!! waiting eagerly for d nxt update!!!! pls update soon n do pm me!!!! i guess reys mom n kriyas mom must be college friends!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing fantastic
i simply loved it
you are such an awesome writer
love your work loads
and reyam convo while kriya manaoing sharon
was sooo nice
i'm literally rofl🤣🤣🤣🤣

awesome precap
eagerly waiting 4 nxt part


"sharon-rey casinova hai usse toh xpectd tha
kriya-wat?!?!"
is my fav. read nearly 10 times same line

superb update nd thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
rey ka mom jaldi mangayi... it was an awesome update...waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesme update

kria angry wid rey

n rey's mom came 2 no the truth

n precap where did smriti cme frm???????

update soon
Edited by dildostidance01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
Ab rey ki mom maanb gyi rt kriya ki mom aa gyi...
Waitng fr nxt prt...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update...its wonderful
loved it very much
awww rey jealous when kriya said swayam is the best
lol kriya mata😆😆
mujhe toh laga rey ki mom bahut gussa hogi par yaha toh sab theek hai nice
yeh kriya ki mom har jagah kriyansh ke beech haddi kyu banti hai??
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyaansh_07



Boys:THUM!!!!

Girls*ANgry*:haan hum!!!!


Nilesh:aap log yaha kya kar rahe ho??

simmi:yeh dhekne aya the ki aap log kya kya kar rahe ho?

vicky:par ye toh bachelors party hai girls not allowed!!u cheaters!

neha:Oh MR.Vicky!!wen u boys coming to Our sangeet woh cheating nahin hai par we girls coming to bachelors party cheating?!

Vicky:woh...

Neha:haan bolo bolo!!!

Kria:chalo girls yeh boys kis haad tak ja sakthe hai woh humne dheka hai...!!!

All the girls bash out from the club...

rey:ab kya kare?

vicky:pata nahin?

swayam:mera shaadi ka kya hoga?

All boys realise Nd start consoling swayam who was very sad bcoz his shaadi is on next day

Rey:arey swayam kuch nahin hoga!!chill yar!!sharon teek ho jaye ga!!!usse manao bas itna hi hai!!

Swayam:are u sure?

Rey:haan am damn sure baba!!!

Swayam was smiling now

Rey*mind talk*:swayam ko toh boost up kar li mere mera kya hoga?

Girls reach home Nd started shouting with anger esp sharon!

Sharon:how can swayam do like that?!!!

Kria:rey bhi!!!?

Sharon:rey toh casinova usse toh expected hi hai!

Kria:wat?!

sharon:sorry kuch nahin!!par swayam ??!!kal hi humara shaadi hai aur ab ye!!!!

Kria:cool down sharon jaisa tum och rahe ho waisa kuch nahin hai...pure boys gang mei swayam is the only best guy!!woh bahut acha ladka hai..shayad kuch galat ho gaya hai!!usse shak mat karo...

boys listen everything

Swayam*whispering*:kria kitni achi hai...woh toh devtha hai!!

Rey*himself*:swayam is the best guy in whole gang!!!*jealous*

All boys start giggling asrey was jealous...

Rey:tum log has kyun rahe ho?

nilesh:tu toh commited man ban gaya yar seriously itni jealous woh bhi ek ladki ke liye...!?

vicky:haan yar kriya ko maana padega!

all boys:kria mata ki jai!!

Rey:SHUT UP !!!

Rey slips Nd falls on swayam ...Now all of them slip Nd fall at the entrance with a thud! (same as boys fell infront of karan mallik's cabin in d3 when sharon n karan was inside)

Immediately they get up straightens themselves Nd stand iinfront of their girls bending their heads down

Boys:Sorry!

kria:hume nahin chahiye!

Rey:arey baatcutter...

All the boys see him ...

Rey:i mean kria suno toh!

Kria:muje kuch nahin suna...

She goes inside the room shouting Nd rey follows her...

Kria walks soo fast ..rey also runs behind her nd take hold of her wrist

Rey:baatcutter rukho plz mera baat suno!

Kria:rey mera haat chodo!!!

Rey:nahin pehle tum mera baat suno!jaise thum soch rahe ho waisa kuch nahin hai trust me !!

Kria:Kya sunu mei!!!jo mei dheka wo sirf mera imagination thi??jaise aap uss ladki ke saath dance kar rahe ho woh kya??

Rey:baatcutter woh mei nashe mei...

KRia:acha pehle jo mei soch rahi hun woh galat hai aur jab meine explination diya toh aap keh rahe ho ki aap nashe mei the ...wah reeyansh singhania!!acha hai aapki excuses!!

Rey:baatcutter plzz!!!humare beech mei fights mei nahin chahtha hun!!am sorry mei kabhi bhi aisa nahin karunga promise...Mera kasam!!!i love u!!!nd mei tumhe dhuk nahin pahuncha saktha u knw it na!!!trust me!!!

Kria*angry*:rey aap bina shaadi kiye aise kar rahe ho aur shaadi kiya toh pata nahin kitni ladkiyon ke saat?!!!!

Rey:kria plzzz!!!

actually kria was standing facing rey Nd back facing to the door,,,rey was standing facing her...when rey wasabout to saysomething he sees the entrance nd to his great shock he finds his mother standing with a shocked expression

Rey:mom!!*shocked*

As soon as rey said that kria turned back Nd was shocked to see rey's mom standing there

kria:aunty!!*shocked*

Rey:mom aap yaha?what a sudden surprise?

Rey's mom shows her palm saying him to stop ...she looks both of them seriously Nd asks

Rey's mom:kya mei jo suna tha woh sach hai?

Rey:haan mom hum shaadi shuda nahin hai...am sorry...

rey's mom left the room N was going back when the whole gang saw her going out Nd kriyaansh following her

Rey:mom suno toh plzzz!!!mom rukho!!

Kria:aunty rukho aunty!!

Everyone gathers in the hall

Rey's mom:rey tumne mujse jhoot kyun bola?aur kriya tum?

Kria:aunty mei actually mei aur rey aapko dhuki nahin dhek sakthi isliye jhoot bolna pada...hum ne sochs ki thodi dhino ke baad hum sach bolenge...

Rey:haan ma kria sach keh rahi hai...

Rey's mom:hmmm...tum logon ko kya hua aap log bata sakthe ho na?(to gang)

Gang:hum bhi aapko dhuki nahin dhek sakthe...

Rey's mom smiles...

rey's mom:itz ok ab karlo!!

all were smiling rey was grinning!!😃

Kria:muje nahin karni!!

rey's mom:par kyun?

kria narrates everything what had happend

rey's mom:rey tumne bahut bada mistake kiya!!

Rey:mom meine kuch nahin kiy i swear!!mei kria ko dhuk pahunch nahin saktha hun!!!aisa soch bhi nahin saktha hun*innocently*

Swayam:haan kria galati rey ki nahin nilesh aur vicky ki...

Swayam:bolo sach kya hai *to nil n vicky*

Nilesh:woh kria actually hum dhono ne party ko mazedhar karne ke liye ,in dhono ko drinks dhedhi...ye dhono kab se mana raha tha par humne hi inko zabardasthi pelaya...

vicky:haan nilesh teek keh raha hai...

Rey:wahi toh...*innocently*

Rey comes near kria holds his ears Nd with a pleading face "am sorry ...phir kabhi aisa nahin hoga"

Kria could not help but she just smiled at his innocense...They both hugged...

All:AWWW!!!!!

Rey's mom:toh kriyaansh ek hone wale hai!!

SMriti ghai:KRia aur rey kabhi ek nahin honge!!!!

Precap:

Kria:mom...*shocked*

all:aunty?*shocked*

Rey's mom:smriti*excited*

Here ends my update...

Why is rey's mom excited?to know then wait for the next part!

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It was amazing
The way boys was shocked seeing girls just loved it
how sweetly rey was manifying kria was so cute i cannot express bechara rey kitne papad belne pade rey ko kria ko manane ke liye phele toh kria ruthe aur uske baat mom ka shock to know that kriyaansh r not married was terrific. And rey and swayam r convincing nil and Vicky to tell the truth of bachelor party. Ab after all the tragedy finaly kria agreed
but nishi manana padega yaar ek aur twist of kria mon . Ya rey ki mom rey aur kria ko kriyaansh karna chaathi hai waha kria ki mom against hai wow what a twist
waiting eagerly for nxt update
U have just create a magic on todays updats it was awesome
only one word for ur update is
KYA BAAT KYA BAAT KYA BAAT
Great job
love u for this update👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
so cute... kriyaansh r soo cute...
haye raam... hamesha yeh kriya ki mom hi kyun kriyaansh ke beech main kabab-main-haddi ban jaati hain!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww mindblowing update😊👏

kria supporting swayam!!!!😊

rey jealous!!!!!!😆

luvd d update😳

precap s interesting😊

i think rey's mom and kria's mom r friends😳

waiting eagerly for d next part😃

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