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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Awesome updates Nishi 👏
sorry for being late in replying over those updates.
So cute n romantic, 😳 Rey ki mom chali gayi all of a sudden giving them enough privacy. 😉
A lot of romance n masti n between that Swaron's marriage, all parts were cute.
update soon

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--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

Sorry cannot update today:(

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sapnaarsha

@sapnaarsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: kriyaansh_07
Sorry cannot update today:(

its kkk but plzz update tis week if possible...

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--Nishi--

@--Nishi--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

HEy guys...😊

Vicky:guys itz decided!!!KAl BACHELORS PARTY !!!NO GIRLS!!!

all boys:YAY!!!!!

all girls Standing near the door Nd they hear only the last two sentences that are vicky saying "kal bachelors party !no girls "Nd all boys shouting "yay!!" excitingly...All girls are shocked!!!

All girls went to their room Nd started discussing ,they were fumingwith anger too...

*Girls ROom*

Neha:Babu how doing like that?

Kria:pata nahin ye log aapne aap ko kya samajthe hai.!!!😡(she banged the door behind)

Sharon:Ye Boys na!!!!

simmi:guys hume kuch karna padega!!woh log humko chodkar aise kaise jaa sakthe hai.!!

Rinni:par woh toh bachelor party na ?woh log hume kaise bata sakthe hai?

Girls:SHUT UP!!!

Sharon was not angry 😆.

Sharon:guys chodo na...let them enjoy one day...

Girls:WAT?!!!!😡

Sharon:woh w...woh i mean let them enjoy na one day...

Kria comes near sharon keeps her hand around sharon's shoulders Nd says...

kria:sharon tumhe koyi prob nahin hota agar swayam i mean boys hume bina bataye bachelor party mei gaye toh?*sweetly*

Sharon:no..

Kria:tume koyi prob nahin hota jab swayam tumse jhoot bolkar tumse eek dhin ke liye bahar jaye?

Sharon:ah...ah..no

Kria:oh toh tumhe iss baat pe bhi prob nahin hoga n jab woh drink karke anjan ladkiyon ke saath dance kare toh?

Sharon imagines swayam dances with so many girls arround him

She immeadiately shouts "NO!!!"

Sharon:aisa nahin ho saktha!how can swayam do lik that?woh aisa nahin karega...

Kria:kya barosa hai woh aisa nahin karega?woh toh nashe ke stage mei kuch bhi kar sakthe hai ...hai na girls??

All girls*innocently*:haan...

Sharon:How dare !!swayam muje bina bataye!!!

Kria:wohi hum keh rahe hai sharon...

Vishaka:Dude i have an idea!!!

All:kya hai?

Vishaka:pehle hum boys se individually puchne ke liye try karthe hai bacholers party ke bare mei agar tab bhi woh log nahin bataya toh hum log ussi party mei jayange jaha woh log party karne ke liye jane wale..!!Hwz it??

All:awsome!!*excitedly*

Sharon:girls par i think galat hai...

Kria:kuch galat nahin hai sharon...!

Neha:haan!kria saying rite!

simmi:Ok then lets commence our plan now!!hum humare boys ko msg karenge ki hume individually mile aur koyi kisiko kuch na bataye...!!

All:YAY!!!

now boys heard what they were talking😆😉...

Rey:girls toh bahut chalu nikle yar..!!

Nilesh:guys agar woh hume ulu bana sakthe toh hum bhi usko ulu bana saktha 8hai!*mischevious smile*

Vicky:ya ur rite dude...!!guys kuch bhi hoo hum girls ko humare plan ke bare mei nahin batayenge GOT it!!!!

Boys:YES!!!

Swayam:yaar kria toh meri pyaar mei haddi kyun ban rahi hai?uski toh mei...

Rey:soch na bhi mat!!!*angry*

Swayam*confused*:kya?!

Rey:Usko kuch karne ko sochna bhi mat!!

Swayam:Chill dude !!

Rey:ok plan par focus karthe hai...

All the boys get msgs from girls to meet them privately ...

Everyone see each other n smile...

*BOys room*

Boys:Girls we are coming*Smirking*

*girls room*

Girls:boys we are coming*smirking*

Kriyaansh on terece

Kria was standing near the railing was waiting for rey Nd was seeing out Nd njoying the nature...

Suddenly two hands circled her waist from back..It was none other than our dear rey...
He hugged her from behind Nd his chin was placed on her shoulder...She loved it!

IT was romantic night Nd on the terece teo love birds😳😳

Rey:baatcutter tumne muje bulaya?

Kria comes to her senses..

kria:woh actually..

Rey started placing wet kisses From her neck to shoulders..she was unable to speak but however she managed...

Kria:re..rey...

Rey*kissing*:hmmm??

She pushed him slightly Nd gained her senses..

She turned back facing him...SHe was leaning on the railing,facing him Nd he was holding her thru waist..Nd crushed himself into her..

Rey:bolo baatcutter baat kya hai?

Kria:woh...haan woh...kal...?

Rey:kal?

Kria:haan kal kya kar rahe ho?

Rey:kuch nahin...

Kria*confsed*:kuch nahin?

Rey:haan kuch nahin...

Kria:par meine toh ye suna ki *confused*

Rey:kya sune tumne ?

Kria:kuch nahin...kuch nahin!!!

rey:hmmm

Kria:toh kal hum...hum...

Rey*smiling*:hum?

Kria:hum ...hum bahar chalenge kya?

Rey*mindtalk*:yaar baatcutter ne pehle baar muje unke saath akeli mei bahar chalne ko kaha tha par...oh god!!kyun mere saath hi sisa karthe ho??*sad *

Kria:KYa hua?

Rey:kuch nahin actually batana bhul gaya hun...woh actually swayam ne kaha tha ki kuch kam tha isliye nahin chal sakthe hum kal...koyi aur dhin plz...

KRia*mindtalk*:kaise jhoot bol rahe h00!!!!😡

Rey:am sorry i shud leave swayam ne kuch discuss karne ke liye bulaya ...

Wen rey was about to go..kria pulled him Nd pinned him towards the railing ,moved forward Nd crushed herself into him ND started seducing him...

She moved her both hands from his waist , travelled Up to his shoulders
Nd moved to his neck ,Nd slowly moved to his hair .started massaging his hair...
(Ye kafi hai humare rey ko lost hone ke liye..his expression was somewat like jab d3 mei woh log project krne ke liye jate hai waha sab girls swimsuit pehnthe hai aur kria when asked him "aaj raat ?" means he had kept an exp remember?it was the same exp..if dnt knw check it out)

She moved close to his lips ,her hands were still massaging his hair...
She was soo close to his lips that only mms distance left btwn their lips Nd her breaths were touching his lips...

Kria:rey...*seductively*

Rey:hmm...*lost*😆

kria:kal swayam ke saat kaha ja rahe ho..?

Rey:woh...woh...

Kria:batao na...

Rey :woh actually Bach...

He comes to his senses Nd thinks "rey ye tuje aapne chaal mei phasane ki koshish kar rahi hai..muje usko uss topic se divert karna chahiye"

Immediately he kisses her tightly on her lips...Nd now he pins herto the railing...Nd they kiss soo passionately...Nd they apart from each other When rey gets a msg from swayam to come to room ASAp...Rey sees the msg Nd kria was breathing hardly Nd blushing...

Rey:baatcutter swayam ne bulaya muje jana hai..

HE turns Nd was about to go ,but turns back comes near her Nd whispers..

Rey:"baatcutter i lovd the way u seduced me ...i wish tum muje humesha issi tarah seduce kartha reh ..tumhe pata hai ki agar tumne aisa kiya toh mere kya karne ka man kar raha tha..par kya karun ab tak shaadi nahin hui na islye aapne apko control kiya"

He smirks Nd goes away from ther ...First kria was blushing again turned sad by seeing that no one was successful in their plan...

BOys roon:guys plan succeded!!

Swayam:ab chalo sothe hai...kal toh girls se bach ke jana hai...

All:ok ...

Girls room

Kria:plan flop!

Sharon:dnt worry mere pass ek aur plan hai...

All:kya hai?

Sharon:hum wahi place jayenge jaha boys jayenge aur dhekengi ki woh kya kar rahe hai...ok?

All:OK!!!YAY!!!

All girls sleep thinking about their romantic movements with their respective partners few mins back ...Nd ame with the boys...

Kria was blushing thinking about the intense movements Nd what rey whispered to her while gng...

Rey was laying on the bed Nd was smiling to himself thinking"baatcutter !!!aaj jo tumne kiya usse am totally dead tumne itna seduce kiya ki i want to...*smiling*baatcutter kab hoga humara shaadi"

All o them slept Nd it was morning (sorry guys am skipping a bit plz adjust)

All girls tried but boys dint say them anything...but they however heard the place were boys were about to go...girls acted as if they belived boys ,boys also belived that girls belived them...boys made ther bahanas ND headed towards the club wer they have arranged bachelors party...

girls also entered the club

Am mentioning the dress with their pictures...check out..

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=252667858141146&set=a.252664798141452.58615.140949529312980&type=3&theater

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=252140208209943&set=a.252139394876691.57807.150166601740638&type=3&theater

simmi's dress:http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=259495164088294&set=a.259493650755112.58703.206499229387888&type=3&theater

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=265233046838094&set=a.265233010171431.79714.216127721748627&type=3&theater

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=256352181059514&set=a.256351407726258.77982.216127721748627&type=3&theater

vishaka's dress:

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=253886204676890&set=a.253885671343610.61516.141003102631868&type=3&theater

Nd last but not the least OUr ANARKALI!!

http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/863/normaljenniferwingetont.jpg/

All boys were enjoying the party ..all girls were watching their boys from a corner by hiding themselves...

Nilesh:guys its party time!!!

boys :yay!!!

All boys were drunk...actually rey n swayam refused to drink but however boys managed to make them drink ...now all were drunk fully...

Now all the girls wore masks to hide their face from their boys...Kria was wearing the same mask which she was wearing in first epi...

Now suddenly lights get off

Jhoomar bhi main bhool gayi
Jaane ja tere liye

suddenly spot light ons on our anarkali ,she was facing her back Nd was moving her hip according to the music...

Boys:(Wah wah wah kya bol rahi ho)

now girls took their place on the dance floor..

Arrey jhumka bhi main bhool gayi
Jaane ja tere liye

kria comes from right covering her face with her hands...

Arrey main toh sab kuch bhool gayi
Jaane ja tere liye

Sharon comes from left Nd does the same what kria does...

Tere liye

Neha n vishaka comes...

Tere liye

simmi Nd rinni comes...

Till now all were facing their back to the audience..

Tere liye

All the girls turn but cover their faces...

Nilesh:(Toh phir kya hua)

Music:

They remove their hands from their faces...Nd move their hips according to the beats

(masks are present on girls faces)

Arrey chod chaad ke apne Saleem ki gali
Oye hoye chod chaad ke apne Saleem ki gali

ALl the girls including our anarkali do some bollywood steps together

Anarkali disco chali

They all do the anarkali disco chali step...

Arrey chod chaad ke apne Saleem ki gali
Anarkali disco chali

They again start doing the bollywood steps...

Arrey dekh ke tujhko mujhko
Machi re khalbali
Anarkali disco chali
Chali re chali disco chali
Anarkali disco chali

They do some hot steps...all boys in the club start drooling over the girls Nd all our boys who were drunk were jumping with mischevious smiles on their faces...

Music

ALl the girls go to their respective boys...Kria slips but rey catches her...LLHH

Kria starightens herself...ALl the girls move away...

Music
Anarkali rock the floor tonight

Anarkali was standing in the middle Nd boys surrounded her N was dancing...

Ik situmber ne mujhko
Deewaron mein chunwaya

Simmi n neha do some steps near vicky Nd nilesh...Vickey Nd nileshgive mischevious smiles to each other.

Mere dil ki dhadkan pe
Lakh pehre lagwaya

Now rinni Nd vishaka move around amar Nd bharat while singing...

Mujhko pyaari azaadi
Qaid mein ab nahi rehna

Kria moves towards rey ,rey was sitting on the chair..she does some lap dance Nd moves her hands over his cheeks...

Zulm zaalim hai nasheen ka
Ab na hai mujhko sehna

Sharon turn around swayam Nd dances...

Mujhko hip-hop sikha de

Anarkali stands in middleof nilesh vickey Nd does a hip hop step

Beat ko top kara de

she moves near bharat ,amar Nd stands in between them Nd do some bhangara step

Thoda sa trance baja de

She moves towards swayam Nd she leans on swayam ND dances...

Mujhko ik chance dila de

She moves towards rey Nd pulls him towards her by his shirt...

All the boys follow her..

Main ghoom loon, main jhoom loon, main jhoom loon

All the girls burn with anger!!

Boys:Arrey chod chaad ke apne Saleem ki gali

Music:they dance...

Oye hoye chod chaad ke apne Saleem ki gali
Anarkali disco chali

She does the anarkali disco chali step...

Arrey dekh ke tujhko dil mein machi re khalbali
Anarkali disco chali

Boys surround her Nd dance in a circle...

Chali re chali, disco chali
Anarkali disco chali
Anarkali disco chali

All the boys starts dancing with their respective girls but they dont know that...

Chali re chali

Girls remove their masks...

All the boys were shocked now they shout..

Boys:THUM!!!!

Girls*ANgry*:haan hum!!!!

Precap:

Kria*angry*:rey aap bona shaadi kiye aise kar rahe ho aur shaadi kiya toh pata nahin kitni ladkiyon ke saat?!!!!
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Rey:mom!!*shocked*

kria:aunty!!*shocked*
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rey:mom hum shaadi shuda nahin hai...am sorry...

So here ends my update hope u ppl like it next update on pg 50...

plz do comment

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pm's on the way😊

Edited by kriyaansh_07 - 13 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

1st to comment:):) Awesome update:):)

Awww kria seducing rey!!!:):)

Luvd it very much;);)

Precap s interesting:):)

Waiting eagerly for d next part:):)

Edited by kaba3003 - 13 years ago