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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update RiA 👏 👏 👏.I loved it. Maisha-Gaytri part was fabulous...loved Maisha idea..Its really works on RAJ. His anger is very genuine as per his nature... but,he is really concerned about NAiNA happiness.

'Haldi' rituals sequence was very cute.I liked this co-operative RAJ😆.NAiNA part was small but,it was sufficient ,according the situation. Perfect Pics posting. 👏 Its really helpful for visualized the characters expressions. Good work 👏.Do continue soon... Thanx for the PMs. n yaa...as per my promise... poster for U...


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Posted: 13 years ago
tthis for u jaan awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
hello riya me ne 1st chapter read kr liya😛😛😛
loved the character sketch 😛😛😛u remind me left right left
1st chapter is superb but no rajveer
sister and mother daughter scene is really good👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Haldi of Raj and Naina 😲
yipee 🥳

The story was superb, Riya 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow riya raj ki enrty superb thi👏👏👏
loved raj ki car re😛😛😛
raj itne gusse wala nahiii
loved sisters bonding😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
haye RK itne gusse wala bechari naina ka kia hoga😛😛😛😆😆😆😆
wese rk ki entry buht maze ki thi😛😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
KABHIE SOCHA NAA THA
subhe ke 6 baaj rahe haai raj icu ke bahar khara hoke glass window ke through ander cabin mein dekh raha tha
jab koi aake uske shoulder par aapna haath rakhta hue aapne concern tone mein pucchta haai
"kaise haai ab vikram kya kaha dr ne he will be saved naa ?"

raj who was totally engrossed in his thoughts is admi ke awaz sunke aapne khayalo se bahar aata haai
aur aapne aasu bhaare akhon ko pocchute hue apne dost cum aapne ek lautte sahara Abhimanyi ke taraff turn karte hue aapne trembling voice mein kaheta haai
"i i dont know yaar dr ne kaha haai ke he is very critical goli uske seene ke aa paar ho gaye haai pata nahin kya hoga i i really hope ke but before he could complete his sentence his vocie gets choked with his supressed tears which he kept inside him since he came here "

aapne dost ko aase tutte hue dekh kar Abhi who loves him like his own brother usse heemat dete hue kaheta haai"hey raj tu aase kasie heemat haar sakta haai yaar dont u forget that we r army people we cant break down so easily u have to be strong man Vikram ko kuch nahin hoga he will be fine " par yeh Abhimanyu bhi jaanta tha e woh raj ko jhoothe dilasha de raha haai kunki Vikram ke jo haaat haai he cant be saved

Abhi aur raj dono he icu ke baahr khare hokar dr ke bahar aane ka intezar kar rahe haai jab kareeb 30 mins bad dr icu ke cabin se bahar aata haai aur aapne nazro ko jhukate hue aapne appologetic voice mein raj aur Abhiemanyu se maaffe maagte hue kahete haai
"i am really sorry hum aapke dost ko nahin baacha paye aap ke pass bas thora waqt haai plz jaake aapne dost se mil lijiye he wants to tell u something "

raj aur Abhi jin ke liye vikram unke best friend se bhi zada tha aaj usse aase maut ke kagaar par khara hota hua dekh kar they feels really bad unmein jaise heemat he nahin ho raha tha aapne dost ko akhir bar dekhne kaa but as this was their friend "s last wish they cant refuse it woh dono aapne dost se milne jaate haai

vikram who was breathing his last breath aapne dost raj aur Abhi ko aapne sammne dekh kar aapne hootho par ek smile laate hue kaheta haai" i know u both r very angry with me but yaar tum dono ko mere liye ek kaam karna hoga as u was both r my best buddy friend tum dono ko mere ghaao "pushkar "jaana hoga aur waha jaake mere family ko inform karna hoga kunki mere mere he cant complete his sentence and lied in the sleep of death

raj aur Abhi jo ke waha khare hue the aapne dost ko aase jaate hue dekh kar bohot dukh hota haai but they cant do anything they just both hugged each other and cried their heart

After the cremation and last salute Brigadier Chandok who was also very shattered due to the sudden death of one of his best soldier raj ko kaheta haai
ke as Abhi has gone to attend a conference he should go and tell vikram's family about his death

Raj
jis ka bilkul bhi mann nahin tha yeh karne ka but as it was his friend wish he have to perform it woh Brigadier se permission leete hue vikram ke ghao pushkar jaane ke liye nikal jaata haai

Raj jab Pushkar pohochta haai tab woh dekhta haai ke vikram ka
ghar pura dulhan ke tara saaja hua haai charro taraff roshni he roshni dekh rahe the raj ko toh bilkul samjh mein nahin aa rah tha ke yeh sab kya ho raha haai woh dheere se jaake door par knock karta haai jab ek buraa sa aadmi bahar aata haai aur raj ko dekhte hue kaheta haai"are beta tum yahaan kya kun khaara ho jaao ander jaa sab ander he hobe "

raj jis ko yeh sab bohot ajeeb sa laag raha tha aapne bag ko leeker ander jaata haai aur dhondhne laagta haai vikram ke paarivaar ke logo ko so that he can tell them about him

raj idher udher dekh raha tha jab achanaak uske nazar ek group of girls par paarte haai jo ke ek larki jo ke dulhan ke dress mein baithte hue haai usko tease kar rahe the aur bechari woh larki ek dam sharam ke maare laal laal ho rahe the she was looking so preety and beautiful in her bridal dress thar raj take his eyes off her woh
jaise sab kuch bhul ke usse larki ko dekhne laagta haai jab koi aake usse uske hue pucchta haai"aap aap kon haai aur yahaan dulhan ke kamre ke pass kya kar rahe haai ?"

raj who was lost in that girl's look coming back to reality aapne gaale ko saff karte hue aapne fumbling voice kaheta haai"wo woh main woh vikram ka dost hu mujhe uske baujee se milna haai"

vikram ka dost sunte he woh aurat ek dam excited ho jaate haai woh raj ko living room mein baithne ke liye kahe ke jaake vikram ke baujee ko khabar karte haai

vikram's dad who looks just like a typical rajasthani man raj ke pass aata haai aur aapen kadak awaz mein ko kaheta haai"jee aap kon haai aur vikram kaha haai usse jo aa jaan chahye tha shaadi ka muhuraat bas kuch he der mein suru hone baale haai ?"

raj jo ke abhie tak is ulljhan mein tha ke yeh sab roshni aur saajawat kis liye haai after hearing this uske mann se jaise sare confusion dur ho jaata haai he know realise what vikram wants to tell them that day before his death woh aapne nazro ko jhukkate hue kaheta haa
i"woh actually vikram ab nahin aa sakta woh woh border ke larai par sayed ho gaya haai"

vikram's dad who heard this got totally shocked he shouted his name loudlyyy and by eharing him waha baki ke jo sab log the woh bhi jaise ek dam aasu aur dukh mein dub jate haai

raj feels really bad to see them like this woh kya kahe kya naa kahe usse kuch samjh mein nahin aa raha tha woh waha se jaane laagta haai jab achnaak woh dekhta hai ke jis larki ko usne abhie abhie thore der pahele haaste muskuraate hue dekha tha woh larki jaise ek dam chup se ho gaye haai raj who was trying to find out who is this jab koi aake usse larki ko bhaala bura kahete hue kaheta haai"tuuu tu he haai sab ke jarrr tune he mere bete ko khaya haai aaj sirf tere waaja se mera betaaa is tara hume chor ke chala haai kun kunnn kiya tune k=aassa bolll kun?"

becchari woh larki kya bolte uske toh pure duniya eh ujar gaye haai jis larke ko usne dekha tak nahin aaj usse ke maut ka zimmedar log usse bol rahe haai woh chup chap kahre hoke sab ke baatein sab ke narazge seh rahe the

raj jis ne hamesha sahe ka saath diya haai jis ne hamesha gaalt ke khilaaff aapne awaz uttaye haai aase kasie aapne aakhon ke sammne ek mausum se larki ko aase zillat sahete hue dekhta woh un sab ko rokhte hue kaheta haai"rukh jaayeee aap log kun is mausam se larki ko aase dosh de rahe hai vikram ke maut goli laagne se hue haai toh ismein inke kya dosh haai aap log plz inhe dosh mat dijiye "par aaj bhi huamre samjh mein aagr koi bhi gaalt hota haai toh aurat ko he dosh diya jaata haai isliye raj ke baat ko koi naa maante hue us lakri ko phir se log bura bhalla kahene laagte haai

raj jis ke liye ab aur seh na muskil sa ho gaay tha us larki ko is zillate se bachcane ke liye uske pass jaata haai aur sab ko chokkate hue uske haath ko aapne haatho mein leete hue sidha mandap ke aor baarta haai aur pandit jee ko shaadi ke vidhi suru akrne ke liye kahe ke jaake dulhe kapre pahe leeta haai

pandit jee jis ne abhie abhie raj ka gussebaala roop dekha tha uske baat maante hue shaadi ke vidhu suru karte haai aur raj aur
us lakri ko shaadi ke atut bandhan mein bandh deta haai

After finishing the rituals and all raj us larki ko leeker jab academy pohochta haai tab sab log raj ko dekh akr ek dam haairan jaata haai unhe toh vishwas he nahin ho raha tha ke raj aase kasie ek larki se shaadi kar sakta haai they all started asking him about how all this happened jab dr shaliny who can clearly understand how that girl must be going through sab ko chup karate hue kahete haai
"basss bohot ho chukka aap logo ke sawaal raj is quite mature and old enough to take his decission agar unhone shadi kee haai toh soch samjh ke he kiya hoga isliye plz ab aap log aapna kaam kijiye aur lolita jee aap mere saath aaye hum jaake inke grihapravesh ka intezam karte haai "

shaliny along with lolita jee goes to make arragements for grihapravesh and shuhagraat .raj who had no one in this world shaliny ne he uska aur uske patni ka ghihapravesh karate
haai.They decorate the bed with flowers which was taken from the academy garden itself

After decorating the bed shaliny us larki ko bed par bithate hue bahar jaate haai to send raj there as it was already quite late

raj jab kamre mein aata haai
tab woh dekhta haai ke woh larki chup chap bed par baithte hue haai raj who dont even know her name also aapne gaale ko thora saff karte hue kaheta haai
"mujhe pata haai ke tum par kya beeth rahe haai tum ne jisse aapne mann mein basa liya tha aaj uske jaaga kisi aur ko dekhna is really impossible isliye main tum par kabhie koi zor nahin dunga tumhe jitna waqt chaheye lee sakte hoo hum pati patni toh ho gaye par usse pahele we have to understand each other isliye tum mujh par yakeen kar sakte ho i will respect ur every decission"

raj ek pillow leeker sofe par jaake sota jaata haai whereas that girl for whom her total life got changed within a fraction of sec remains sitting there untill she felt asleep

agle din subhe jab raj ke need tutta haa tab woh dekhta haai ke woh larki bathroom se naha ke nikal rahe haai she was looking so pure and beautiful in her wet damb hair that raj
cant take his eyes off woh uske pass jaata haai aur phir se aapne gaale ko saff karte hue kaheta haai"woh main tumhara but before he could say anything naina who understood what he wan to ask aapne nazro ko jhukate hueaapne dheeme se awaz mein kahete haai
"humara naam naina haai humne naha liya haai aap taiyar ho sakte haai " raj who liked her voice and gesture without saying anything more aapne baalo par haath firate hue taiyar hone jaata haai

Dekhte dekhte kuch mahine beeth jaate haai naina ab raj ke saath baat karte uske saath ghumne ke liye bhi jaate hai par phir bhi jaise unke beech ek parda sa haai woh jaise abhie tak raj ko aapna nahin paaye haai aur yeh baat dr shaliny se unnoticed nahin hote woh naina ko samjhane ke liye use ehesaas dilane ke liye ke woh kitna galat kar rahe haai uske kamre mein jaate haai

naian who was keeping her clothes in the cupboard shaliny ko dekh ke aapne kapro ko bed ke ek side par rakhte hue unke pas jaate haai aur kahete haai
"are shaliny jee aap is waqt koi kaam tha kya ?" now shaliny who cmae here to make naian understand about their relation usse samjhate hue kahete haai
"naina main jaante hu ke its really late but i have to tell u something dekho naina i have always seen u as my sister so thought that its my duty to tell u thiat naina i know ke kin halat mein tumhare aur raj ke shaadi hue the lekin naina raj ab tumhara pati isliye aagr tum aapna kal bhula ke aaj ko aapna loge toh tum dono ke liye aacha hoga samjhana mera
farz tha aage tumhe jo thik lage waise aaj raj ka birthday haai isliye ho sake toh plz usse wish kar dena he will be really happy"

shaliny ke baat ko maante hue naina raj ke bday ke taiyaari karne laagte haai raat ke kareeb 11 baaje raj jab aapne training camp se lauta haai tab aapne kamre ko aase decorated dekh kar gets really surprised woh
idher udher dekh raha tha jab naian
wearing a bright red saree aapne baalo mein haath firate hue uske pass aate haai

naina ko aase is red saree mein dekh kar raj toh jaise ek dam
mermerised sa ho jaata haai woh naina ke taraff dekhte he rahe jaata haai jab naian unke beech ke khamoshi ko torte hue aapne dheere se awaz mein kahete haai
"woh aaj aap ka birthday haai naa isliye socha ke ek chotte se surrprise de du hope u like it "raj for whom it was the best gift ever naian ke gesture ko appreciate karte hue kaheta haai"i totally loved it its really beautifull "raj ko aase uske koshish ko sahate hue dekh kar naina ko bohot aacha laagta haai woh aapne nazro ko jhukate hue raj se kahete haai
"thanks cake kuttne chale "

naian raj ko leeker table ke taraff jaate haai jaaha usne cake rakhe the woh raj ko cake kutte ke liye kahete haai raj who is really happy to see this arragements naian uske baat ko maante hue candles ko blow karte hue
cake kaata haai.

He after feding the cake to naina aapne mann mein hemat laate hue naina ke sammne aapna haath barate hue kaheta haai"naina if u dont mind may i have the plessure to dance with u?"naina who wants to give raj whatever he wants today aapne nazro ko jhukate hue kahete haai
"main abhie aate hu"

naian ko aase waha se jaate hue dekh kar raj jis ne itne dino bad ek koshish ke the aapen rishtey ke aor feels really disappointed
woh samjh nahin paata ke kya usne kuch galat kahe diya woh aapne inhe ulljhane mein uljhan hua hota haai jab uske saare uljhano ko mitate hue naina ek black dress pahene ke
uske pass aate haai

raj
who have never seen naina in a western dress by seeing her in this black outfit gets really surprised woh naina ke taraff dekhta he rahe jaata haai jab naina aapne haath ko
uske taraff aage karte hue kahete haa
"shall we start ?"raj who waited for this moment since a long without wasting any more time uske haath ko
aapne haatho mein leete hue kaheta haai"offcourse "

They
both started dancing .Though the dance started as a casual couple dance but soon it turned into a passionate and intense one.With every steps and moves they both were coming really close to each other.

After sometime when their dance ended raj who really dont wan this moment to be ended carrying her in his arms placed her on the bed . Naina who wants to give raj his happiness today without any protest simply closed her eyes signalling him that she is ready to take further steps towards their relation .

Raj who waited for this monent for a long time seeing her gesture slowly bends down to captured her soft rosely lips in his .Though he started kissing her with the slightest passion but soon turned it into a passionate and intense one when he got the response from her

After a long passionate kiss when they both separated to catch breath they saw only love in eahc other's eye .Without wasting or waiting for any more premission raj simply proceeded to take next step .He while untying naina's dress started exploring her bare soft body with his hands and lips .naina who too now got aroused with the passion and love bestoring on her by raj started roaming her hands over raj's bare back .They both were loving eahc other to their fullest when raj taking the last and final step towards their relation entered her making her his

After the long passionate night next day
when naian opened her eyes she found raj standing near the window looking outside naina who is really happy today wrapping herself in her gown goes near him and while placing her hand over his shoulder says" kya hua aap yahaan asse kun khare haai sab thik toh haai naa?" now raj who was feeling guilty for not controlling his male desire last night aapne aakhon ko bandh karte hue kaheta haai"woh woh naina kal raat pata nahin kya hoga gaya tha i i but before he could compelte his sentence naian putting her hand over his mouth says
"raj main jaante hu aap yeh sab kis liye aur kun bol rahe haai par aap sayed nahin jaante ke aap he woh shaqs haai jinse mainne pyaar kiya haai haan raj jee aapko sayed nahin pata ke aapke jo dost the unko toh main kabhie mile bhi nahin the mere mama jee ne unke saath mere shaadi tai kar dete the bina mere mazee ke kunki woh jitne jaldi ho sake mujhe unke ghar se dur bejna chahte the isliye plz aj ke bad kabhie bhi aapne mann meinn yeh guilt yeh dukh mat laalyega ke aapne kuch galat kiya haai main sirf aapke hu i i love u raj i love u from the buttom of my heartt"

naina ke aakhon se aasu baheene laagte haai raj who cant see tears in her eyes taking her in his embrace says"me love u too naina "

After one yr raj Ot ke bahar kahra hua haai uske chahaere par aaj bhi wohi ghabbahata aur darr chahaya hua haai kunki aaj uske jaan ander Ot mein jo bandh haai woh idher udher impatiently tahel raah haai jab Dr shaliny uske zindage ko aur khushio se bhane ke liye usse aake kahete haai
"congratulation Captian aap papa bana gaye naina gave birth to a baby girl"

raj who was feeling over the top now thanking shaliny goes to meet his wife and their baby princess

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
super duper amazing os ria
thanx for pm
detail wala baad mein abhi taabyat theek nahi hai
your pm box is full ria
Edited by additive_monaya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome os part dear. keep it up
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow such a great writing skills u have loved it

sorry wo parhne ma time laga tu is lye late cmnt

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